Immortal Family

Can there be more? It's not enough.

If you persist, you will gain popularity.

I think the saying "A sword is a bloody weapon!" Makes sense!

If you are not looking for a wife or a concubine, what kind of aristocratic family is there? Casual cultivation is suitable for you.

What the hell! And save the enemy! He wants to fuck your eldest sister! Kill your father and destroy your whole family! Surely you let go of your enemy's genius disciple! You successfully persuaded me to quit with this one! See you now

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I feel like, one chapter a day is a bit missing

Just barely, but it's really just a little bit poisonous.

Family stories are easy to write. A few dialogues between a few people can fill a few chapters. There are also intrigues between families, which are somewhat clever. The assassination of the four major families, no, it should be called clear killing. The family is the most important thing. This plot is not only embarrassing, but also clever. Even if the families in the ninth rank are as powerful as fire and water, everyone is still happy on the surface. They build foundations and give sermons, and they also hold flowing water mats for three days. This is a sign of the family's magnanimity and builds its own reputation. The protagonist's family can be considered a wealthy family, with thousands of people in a township, but it doesn't feel like a family at all. Jiupinli handles it better. Each family has its own skills. The books and skills for opening auras complement each other, which is very interesting. Family games are more about goods (spiritual rice, talisman paper, elixirs). Keeping the game within a certain range and fighting without breaking up is good. It is better to dissolve enemies than to make enemies. Harmony makes money. My goods are not as good as yours, so what else is there to say? It is much better than the bloody law of the jungle. At least you can surrender and join, admit defeat and lose half. I personally think the highlight of the family story is in this aspect, the competition of skills, rather than a life and death fight. On the personal side, the protagonist's ascetic practice is very unfamilial. The cost of food and clothing is almost not mentioned. The spiritual rice he eats, the robes he wears, and even the futon he meditates on. It's just that the protagonist is dressed more delicately. The protagonist is an alchemist, and the status of an alchemist in the qi-training realm is almost the same as that of a foundation-building family. Not every family in the foundation-building family has a first-class alchemist. The protagonist has learned so many things and learned them very well, but he has basically no use for them. This is also a failure. The protagonist has a lot of tricks. The author handles these aspects poorly. My suggestion is to change the golden finger to absorb moonlight or purple energy, etc. It can only be used once a year. The protagonist still has to work hard on his own. It is not the kind of point-added cultivation. Every skill and spell the protagonist has epiphany needs to be weighed, so that the protagonist has spiritual stones to buy things, make elixirs, practice weapons, etc. An operation like making elixirs in the family shop. The author's plot is too hasty. Foundation building is like a high school student preparing for the college entrance examination. He has no awareness of immortality at all. He can live for at least one hundred and twenty years. But you started planning to build a foundation when you were a teenager. I don't know why you are so anxious. For you, if you live for another ten years, you will naturally build a foundation. The author's writing of the system of cultivation techniques is too messy, with poor balance and poor handling of the plot. I don't recommend writing books full-time, just for your own entertainment. I recommend the author to take a look at Beixuanmen. The sects and families in it are better written.

Regarding the character Xu Yuheng, many readers asked me why the protagonist didn't kill him. In fact, I originally wanted to make the protagonist a villain, and Xu Yuheng is the protagonist's gay friend... Emmm, but when I thought that this might be disgusting, I didn't write it... Originally, I wanted to stage a love-hate relationship...  However, I will still focus on describing the character Xu Yuheng later, because I feel that every protagonist has a faction that belongs to him, just like Ye Fan, the protagonist in Zhetian, has a huge faction that belongs to him. Actually, I also considered other factors regarding the protagonist not killing Xu Yuheng. That is, the protagonist has never killed a person before, and if he is suddenly asked to kill a fifteen or sixteen-year-old child, no one would be able to do it. However, I will continue to change the character of the protagonist later on, from being soft-hearted at the beginning to killing when it's time to kill. In fact, I have also considered one thing, that is, everyone's mentality actually goes through a process of transformation. It's like there are some perverts in this world. It's impossible to say that you are a pervert from birth. It can only be caused by acquired factors and subtle changes. Therefore, the mentality of the protagonist will continue to change later.

Promote it everywhere, it's the end of the horse

The setting of this book is very good!

Five books and four eunuchs....

System-flow family articles can't be written for long after just one glance.

The collapse of combat power is too serious. I think killing people and grabbing treasures is a bit ridiculous. When the strength is not much different, the protagonist's 90% strength in Qi training is comparable to that of the late foundation building stage. Generally speaking, even in the middle stage of foundation building, one does not dare to 100% destroy the early stage of foundation building. Only in the later stage can one be sure.