The Supreme Being Who Covers the Heavens

I resisted and watched so much content about the clones, just to see how bad the pig's feet would be after the clones returned to the original body. But you told me that the clones are not recycled, and their consciousness is not separated from the pig's feet, but the new personality born from each, which is highly poisonous.

I can't stand Chapter 78 anymore. The setting is good, but it seems like it was written in a flash of the brain. For an author who wants to write a good book or write a good book, plot and writing are all ranked behind logic. Whether you are close to reality or divorced from reality, no matter how bizarre the plot is, if you do not set up a set of self-consistent logic that can be accepted by everyone, it is all nonsense. It's like drawing an egg. Regardless of whether it's an oval or a circle, everyone has drawn a circle. You have to draw a curve and say, since it's a drawn egg, why can't it be drawn like this? As an author who creates a world for readers, if you use this as a novel instead of reality as an excuse to deviate from logic, you are unqualified.

It's quite speechless. The protagonist's more than ten years of scientific research surpasses the millions of years of technology in the Eternal Star Territory.

This thing should be a pure Qianqian article from the studio, a pure running account, and the writing fluency is not bad. But the content is inconsistent. There is no doubt that if you don't get good grades, you will run away immediately, that's how it is.

Scientific cultivation of immortality? After reading half of the chapter, I want to ask, do you think these practitioners are stupider than the people on earth? Once any civilization lasts for a long time, it must be extraordinary. How long has earth science developed? It's only been a hundred years, and this scientific cultivation of immortality has nothing to do with it.

Seeing the Tribulation, I felt like my clone was completely independent and poisonous. I personally think that the three corpse clones of the protagonist are themselves part of the protagonist. Doesn't your complete independence mean that you are missing your original source? The biggest drawback is that it's very awkward, and I really don't like this kind of avatar being completely independent.

The writing is very good and has many ideas. I have collected it, but there are a little few updates. It seems that I can't reward it yet, so hurry up and sign up. The female characters Yan Ruyu, the Purple Mansion Saint, the Yaochi Saint, and the Dragon Princess are all pretty good. Finally, I would like to suggest that you don't change your writing style. After all, the previous writing is great. As for spiritual cultivation, the early stage spiritual system of Galaxy has a very good reference value, as well as the red-haired boss's deep space interior locations and some techniques, which are all quite good 🤭

The author really put his heart into writing the book. We are sorry for saying that the author came out of the studio before. Sorry And the author, please come on! I'm really looking forward to the author finishing this book. This is still a solid work so far.

Three corpses independent? How big of a heart does it take to touch this poisonous point? I am speechless and feel like I have seen nothing again.

I don't understand why some people claim that this book has the power to become a god. After reading seven pictures, I kept focusing on water settings and water cultivation. One or two chapters are fine, but seven chapters make people feel tired. And the beginning of the new book is watery. Secondly, there is something wrong with the writing style, which makes people feel alienated.

I didn't want to read it after seeing the second chapter. Is it reasonable for you to arrange a scientific research golden finger? I became the richest man in a few years, and then turned around and became a scientific research boss to solve the world's problems. Einstein may not even be able to do it, it's really outrageous.

Why do the protagonists of Zhetian fan fiction now have to have incarnations? Quite annoying

If the avatar is not me, I won't say anything else. From the perspective of the novel itself, from a single protagonist to multiple protagonists, nothing the avatar does can be attributed to the protagonist, which directly weakens the protagonist's sense of substitution, which is a huge failure.

Zhe Tian is a realistic stream, one step at a time. The protagonist is a fantasy stream and an idealist stream. He is alone there to get high, and he doesn't have much foundation, so he just creates all kinds of brainless cheating streams.

The author is great. The more you look at the combat power in this book, the more it looks like a powerful force covering the sky, rather than a fantasy novel. The saint burns with all his strength and self-destructs, which is equivalent to a nuclear bomb. The original book describes the saint blowing up planets, and the saint king is equivalent to blowing up small galaxies. The Great Sage can destroy a star field by fighting in the star field...

I gave up when I saw that everyone on earth was cultivating immortality. The original book set the earth to have the power of transformation. Ye Fan almost fell to death when he returned to earth. Now everyone is cultivating immortality. You have eaten up the power of transformation🙄🙄

In the first few chapters, it is not mentioned that the protagonist has a golden finger and was not a super scientific research boss in his previous life. So how did the protagonist embark on the path of science? Isn't science a thing that takes advantage of IQ?

Good subject matter and good plot, but unfortunately they are all brought down by the author's rubbish writing style. Moreover, many common-sense mistakes in Zhe Tian make it boring to read, such as 2010 Nine Dragons Pulling the Coffin, Siji Divine Forbidden, etc. Anyone who has read Zhe Tian will not forget these, right? It's all common sense like one plus one equals two, but it can go wrong again and again, which is really discouraging!

I have always wondered about this protagonist. Is it possible? I mean maybe Emperor Daoyan once wanted to engage everyone in spiritual practice, but unfortunately he failed.

(First of all, I didn't want to complain, but I really couldn't hold it back. I only expressed my personal opinions. If there is any offense, please refer to the author's opinion. If you think it is too extreme, the author can delete it directly) First The more I read, the more speechless I became. Originally, the most exciting part of the book Zhetian was the opposition of the geniuses against various physiques, but it turns out that you are better here. Every genius comes up and is described as weak by you in just two sentences. I just don't understand. What's going on? Can you make yourself look awesome by belittling your opponent? People pretend to be awesome by blowing up their opponents. How can defeating a weakling make you look awesome? Every time you meet a prodigy, you should start by bragging about how weak the other person is. At least you can use a few moves, or the protagonist uses some powerful move to wipe out the void and destroy the enemy in the Shattered Avenue. You don't write down the power of the move or the strength of the enemy. You really can't figure out how strong the protagonist is. Second In this novel, if you want to write that the protagonist gets mad, and then relies on his clone to escape, there is no problem in competing on the imperial road. It's okay for the main clone to go out and develop, but you can write two sentences about this clone and then write about the next clone, and then write two sentences about this clone and the next one. Originally, the clone and the main body should have a primary and secondary relationship, but in the end, you want to turn them into protagonists. It's okay to say that they are four individuals with independent consciousness, but do your four independent consciousnesses also need to be highlighted? Next to the main body, even if you don't highlight the main body, then you should write down the function of each of your clones. As a result, each of them is really a complete tool. The opportunities they get return to the main body and do not bring any benefits to the protagonist. To be honest, there is no difference in my opinion whether the clone is present or not. The only function is to raise three people to deliver things to the protagonist's mouth. Third This book is written very strangely. If you look at the original novel, today is a world with incomplete laws. In the process of establishing a cultivation system, it will be restricted and hindered by the incomplete Dao of Heaven and Earth, and the Dao of Heaven itself will also conduct certain assessments on the creator. As a result, the book you wrote was so easy. It really felt like it was easy to create a way when I read it. Especially the origin and process of creation are simply ridiculous. It felt like I picked up a stone next to me, and I saw the molecular structure of the stone, and I understood the composition and principle of the stone. This is so nonsense, okay? Ye Fan created his own path to becoming a great emperor by cultivating hundreds of scriptures in Zhetian. As a result, you, the protagonist, who has never explored the path of cultivation, can directly find his way to the path of cultivation through science through only three scriptures. Don't you think it is too exaggerated? There is no need for trial and error at all, you will understand the principle immediately after you get it. If you want to give someone a golden finger, you might as well just give an excuse to the system or other treasures. If you find an excuse, I can directly and reasonably accept what the system gives him. As a result, this plot is completely unconvincing, okay? In your novel, you should at least give readers a sense of immersion. It's okay if you want to open a cheat, but the logic of your cheat is smooth. You can't use the banner of science to make all logic smooth. Fourth The author's book is very detailed. The protagonist breaks through the realm and creates his own path. These are all good, but the writing process of your creation is very complicated. You want everything, but you can't write it. When you read it, you feel that the protagonist is really knowledgeable but not master. The breakthrough process is summarized in just two sentences. The author can add some things such as: Breaking through the realm and the wheel of time. The scenes in the sea, the outside world's reactions come and go to brag about how awesome the protagonist is. There is really no need to practice everything. He has a divine form and a vision, but when it comes to battle, he can't see it, and the tribulation appears a few times. I feel that the rhythm of the book is still very problematic. As I read it, I feel like I keep making breakthroughs, and then I fight a group of ants, and then continue to break through, and continue to fight ants.

The quasi-emperor Lao Tzu's one energy transforming into three pure beings are only short-term clones. You, an ant who has not become a saint, have created independent clones and can develop independently. Then where do their origins come from? Separate the origin from the body. Are you weak? And if you cut off both good and evil bodies, then you should be neither good nor evil and follow the path of justice, right? What is it like now? Ye Fan's Taoist Palace had no clones. On the one hand, it strengthened the main body, but on the other hand, the clones were really not pleasing to the eye. Later, the incomplete One Qi Transformation and Three Purities were only used for a short period of time to show off and fight, and they could no longer be used after proving the Tao. I don't understand~

It's a good idea, and the path to practice is good It's very speechless when you become an independent individual. Thousands of great powers are gathered into one body. He can be free and he can be eternal. The clone is living his own life. It's so difficult Speak less and practice more. Some people lose their temper as soon as they open their mouths. In the world where everyone is the king, it's too dramatic There are too many bad jokes, which affects the reading experience.