Celebrity Paparazzi Assassin

This is weird, is this really a book written by an old author? After reading Chapter 17, I felt like I had relived the movie. In the end, after the textile factory was gone, I wanted to become an assassin. The reason was still for justice. For justice in the old American territory, I must not kill energy, medicine, military industrial groups, as well as the US military, politicians and congressmen.

I don't understand what the protagonist is going to do. Since you are told not to be exposed, then it's good to be a paparazzi. Why do you have to show off your abilities when you are sent to your door? Isn't this exposing your privacy?

The previous protagonists were all egoistic, and it was normal to live a better life for themselves, but suddenly they started to play justice, which was ridiculous. It would be understandable if you changed for the sake of the fox, but your relationship with the fox was not foreshadowed at all, and you directly became the messenger of justice. It was too abrupt, and you had no desire to watch it at all. For such an anti-human protagonist, there is no sense of empathy at all.

What should I say? The protagonist is too nosy. He offends everyone in all aspects of black and white. He has no friends, no allies, no intelligence system and no support. It can be said that he has nothing but his own strength and ability to carry a lot of ammunition. If he kills people like this indiscriminately and offends people to a certain extent, the protagonist will be dead. People can't beat you with fighter jets and air-to-surface missiles. Can't they kill you? You must know that there are private military bases in the United States. There is no shortage of fighter jets, missiles, tanks, and artillery. A 155mm grenade will shock you to death even if it doesn't kill you. Now that the assassin has been exposed, he should keep a low profile, otherwise there are many ways to kill him. The protagonist can't even find a decent support except his father.

It's still an old problem among fan authors. First, most fan authors have almost the same old problem, neglecting character description and only mentioning names without describing them, making the characters as rigid as puppets. The author does not give a sufficient description of the characters when they first appear. Most of the time, readers only know the names, but do not know their height, height, height, and weight. What is even worse is that sometimes they have to guess whether they are male or female. The author ignores whether readers are familiar with this character and whether they have any impressions of it. Often there is no description or description, just a name and then they suddenly appear. Who is this? ! ! ! Secondly, some characters did not appear in more than ten chapters and then suddenly popped up again. The author only gave them a name, regardless of whether the reader remembered the character or not. It is recommended that you give a few words as a reminder. For example: "The protagonist's special lawyer is so-and-so." "The protagonist's eldest brother XXX" don't just give a name. Ignoring this in fan fiction can be disastrous to the reader's reading experience. Still want to read the book? ! ! Third, some of the works themselves are a hodgepodge, but not every reader has seen the movie, or they have watched it but it has been so long that they have almost forgotten the plot and characters. Therefore, the author is too simple in describing the characters. Sometimes he only knows their names, and sometimes he uses nicknames. The plot is the same, full of arrogance that I don't need to say, you should know (must read). Even readers who have read comics sometimes feel that this kind of inadequate description is abrupt or has no beginning or end. This is a common problem among many fan authors, who do not consider whether readers still remember the character or have read the work. I can't understand! ! ! Fourth, the reader's reading experience must be fully considered. Just because some characters are familiar does not mean that the author can omit appearance descriptions, character characterizations, or just mention names. It's like a chef cooking meat, and customers complain why it's fat and greasy without seasoning. But the chef said: "There are so many things! You are here to eat meat, the seasoning is not important." Characterization is the seasoning. Some unimportant supporting characters will be boring if they are over-characterized, but at least they should give readers an impression, such as: "A strong one-eyed black man, director of S. H. I. E. L. D., Who likes to appear elusive and suspicious." Just because some characters are familiar to readers doesn't mean you can just give them names and not describe them. At least the reader should be told that this is a one-eyed black man, not Nick Foul, and there will be no physical description at all. To summarize, when you meet the first character you don't know, you will look it up on the Internet. The second, third or even twelfth character only knows the name but not the shape. How will the reader feel? Do you have the patience to check them one by one? Instead of ten readers, only four were left, and the remaining six encountered reading difficulties. Many times, the difference between a master and other authors lies in the number of readers piled up by these countless small details. A good author will pay attention to the reading experience of readers. Even if he submits a paper in college, he will check whether the professors are comfortable reading it. If the reading experience is poor, forget it. If you can't understand it, abandon the book. The soul of a novel is its characters. Failure to depict characters means it has no soul.

Various forces know your identity, is this still an assassin?

After reading Chapter 22, the protagonist becomes an assassin for justice. This theme is too false. No sense of immersion at all

Hasn't the police tycoon already expressed his feelings? Why does this book have eunuchs again?

What's wrong? The author enters the palace? ?

Alas, author, you just relied on 14 books to get to level 5. 😅 The writing is so bad.