For My Elves, I Will Die.

The sauce is bubbling, a cup of milk tea, hot popcorn, crispy snow cakes, raisins, and a small bench in the front row to read a big book~

The author can create a rocket team, organize ideas: Marxism, cross continents to subvert the alliance, and compete with each other. You can also recreate the legendary life of Chi, which is definitely very interesting.

I don't know how the author conceived the protagonist. He killed a security guard so that Pikachu could kill him. He cautiously escaped from the city and evaded pursuit, but in the end he trusted the brother of a person with whom he had an enemy? With this foreshadowing, the secret realm is expected to be slaughtered, and then the baby bear will rise?

Oh, the author is in the secret realm, your way of handling it is a little bit bad. If you don't handle it well, you will be very poisonous. I said before that the protagonist is not a very stupid kind of person, so why do you reveal all the secrets and be speechless? Moreover, the elves in the secret realm can be said to be life-saving for the protagonist and give you various benefits. Not to mention the world or all the problems. This is not handled well. I feel that your novel is very easy to rot. We don't like this kind of kind-hearted person who turns into a white-eyed wolf, and the protagonist is like this, though. It can't be said that all the fault lies with the protagonist, but as the protagonist, you can't have this kind of stain. If the secret realm is not handled well at the back, it can be said that 90% of the people will run away. You need to speed up the update, otherwise some people who like to see something wrong in the front will like to flip through the book and give up immediately when they see that you have not solved the problem in the back. After all. Today's society is too fast

It is recommended that the toxic characters be dealt with as soon as possible, otherwise it will seriously affect the readers' perception. Come on!

But the show-off and slap-in-the-face plot is a bit embarrassing

Why can pig's feet conjure wisdom, and why is it so easy to talk about the healing water in the secret realm? Shouldn't this kind of thing be kept secret? And even if you want to be a middleman, you should go to a national-level agency. It's too stupid, naive, brainless, and a trap!

The author doesn't want the protagonist to go into a world where all the elf doctors and researchers from the original secret world have collected elf information, plus possesses most of the technology and cultivation information, plus a set of top-notch all-round clothing, and then takes it all away, leaving nothing to the elf alliance and letting them develop their own research. Anyway, the protagonist has no connection with the elf alliance, so why should he help them?

The protagonist, the protagonist, needs to create a force that specializes in killing the scum of human beings. Only those who have a deep hatred for some scum can join, and the number of people is limited to dozens of people. If a child is born, the memory of this force must be deleted, and the elves must also stay in this force. These elves delete and modify their memories, leaving only the memory of defending this force. Create a new elf with identity and memory to enter the life of the Elf Alliance, and then re-screen them from poor people and orphans. I have already thought of a name, so I will call it Tianjian. The slogan of the organization is to do justice for heaven. How simple.

To be honest, if the subsequent plot is that all the elves in the secret realm are killed because of the protagonist, leaving only the baby bear, and then the baby bear follows the protagonist to take revenge. . I'd be poisoned, really. The elf in the secret realm ended up like this after saving the main character. I really can't accept it. The elf in the secret realm killed himself after saving the protagonist's life. If Baby Bear was the second elf to be subdued, I wonder how big his heart would be, and he would still follow the protagonist.

Blindly guessing whether the baby bear will evolve into the two-stage Xiucui Yueyue Bear

Say! Love me!!

I came across another very good elf book. Come on.

The protagonist has obtained Celebi's beads. I wonder if he will awaken the power of waveguide like Xiaozhi in the future.

Overall, it's pretty good. There's a high probability that we can consider establishing a Rockets team.

Don't evolve Raichu! Just partner with Pikachu, and go to Alola to learn exclusive Z.

The author should not let the protagonist start Team Rocket and bring Banmu over to help, and use his son's position to win over Banmu. After all, 60% of the reason why Banmu started Team Rocket is to find his son.

Create Team Rocket, black and white

When will this byd Mai die?

Mainly, I feel that the rhythm may be a bit slow at 85-96. It would be better for Mai to die as soon as possible.

Don't take the usual path, establish a force called Yexu Palace, or the Akatsuki Organization, and don't collect garbage. In the extraordinary world, power is king

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Rockets, Rockets, Rockets, as long as you drive the Rockets, there will definitely be a climax.

The author simply wants the protagonist to create a Rocket Team in this world and become an invincible alternative Banmuha😊, and. If you create another Team Rocket, it won't look good, unless it's Banmu, but it's obviously not an elven world. It feels so weird to force Banmu into it and become Team Rocket again.

Everything was good before, but the latest plot is really disgusting, especially the villain who jumps around like a clown repeatedly, and I keep beating him without giving him a profound lesson. One of the two female supporting characters is disgusting at the beginning, and the other is disgusting when jumping back. The character creation and fighting details are obviously good, but why do they always make a few poisonous points?

The rhythm of the latest plot is okay, but it is not suitable for playing such an Asian character so early. I feel that it would be better to write it in one go when the update is released, or to save a little more and have regular fans before writing this kind of plot. Otherwise, if you just read the beginning of the series, you will mistakenly think it is a poisonous point. I'd like to apologize to the author here. It's okay to lay the groundwork in the past, but now there are very few authors who dare to play this set at Qidian.

By the way, I'm asking for a follow-up reading. I really want to try it and see what it feels like to recommend...