Asking the Heavens to Start from Xiaoao

I'm convinced, Huashan has almost become a winery. Do you have to write Huashan into a situation where there are three or two big cats and kittens?

Brother, can you change the first chapter? Don't talk about Yitian when telling stories in the Ming Dynasty! Although this is true in Jin Yong's world, this is also an act of seeking death! The loopholes are huge.

I don't understand. Yue Buqun and Zuo Lengchan should be about the same age. The protagonist hasn't even started yet, is Zuo Lengchan already in charge of Songshan?

The book Down the Mountain collapsed. I originally went to find Jiuyang, but forcibly changed the route to Fuzhou to find Jiuxi, suppressed the protagonist's strength, and finally found Jiuyang. In the middle, I wrote nearly 50 unattractive chapters. If the next 200 Zhang Yuan did not come back in these 50 chapters, the book would have collapsed.

It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book. If you like it, please help me to add it to your favorites. If you have recommendation votes and think it is worth recommending, please help me to recommend it. The current goal is to sign a contract, so investment brothers should be careful. This book is the first one and will definitely be completed. The outline has already reached over 600,000 words, and it is guaranteed that the subsequent plot will be very grand and exciting.

Now the level of novices is so high👍👍, the writing is smooth, the plot is well developed, it is good to exercise first, and then practice swordsmanship. The protagonist has upright views and a chivalrous spirit!

The author probably got one thing wrong. Yue Buqun was probably not harvested from the mountains, but a native of Huashan. Author, have you forgotten the surnames of the two idiots who memorized the Sunflower Manual in Southern Shaolin and caused the Huashan sword energy to be divided? Sword Sect Cai Ziyue and Air Sect Yue Su. Then Yue Buqun's surname was Yue, an airbender, and his father-in-law was the head of the airbender. He is the head of the airbender. Savor it carefully! ! !

I would like to make a suggestion. It is better not to touch the emotional drama of the author. Just skip it. Now I find that if a newcomer touches the emotional drama, 90% of it will affect the quality.

The fist returns to Shaolin, the sword comes out of Huashan! Zuo Lengchan is so awesome that he dared to ambush the head of Huashan in his heyday, so he needs to be smart when writing a book.

The name is "Wen Dao". I haven't studied the Taoist scriptures throughout this article.

Yue Buqun, who wanted to see something different, didn't realize that he was still following the rules. Also a time traveler!

The Huashan Sect does not have a Sutra Storage Pavilion, and the entire Five Mountains Sword Sect does not have a Sutra Storage Pavilion. In the battle at Siguoya in Huashan, all the masters of the Wuyue Sword Sect were wiped out, resulting in the loss of a large number of martial arts. In the end, the moves were preserved only by the elders of the Demon Sect carving them in the cave at Siguoya. If there were secret books in the Sutra Pavilion, how could it be possible that martial arts were lost as soon as a person died.

It's not that the heroine is extremely toxic, it's that the heroine is too difficult to write and most of the time it's awkward and the readability plummets.

So far, it's surprisingly enjoyable! It is supported by a refined writing style and borrows (Jin Yong's) well-known worldview, but will not be constrained by the limitations of its predecessors. I hope the author can outperform his previous work. I will give you a small reward. I hope the standard can be maintained. Order soon! Come on!

The author's writing style is good. First of all, most readers of online articles will assume the role of the protagonist, so let's not say that the protagonist does not appear but loves her deeply. The protagonist loves her, but there is no plot. I just think who the hell is she and can she disappear soon. Also, having set the expected plot of "Looking for Jiuyang" early on, I naturally had expectations for this plot. However, the twists and turns continued to wear down my expectations. The new plot was also difficult to get into because of my expectations. In the end, my patience ran out and I ran away.

The author doesn't think that just having secret books is enough. The decline of martial arts is not just caused by human beings.

Find the Zhang family on Binghuo Island to get the Nine Yin Manual? Does Zhang Wuji know the Nine Yin Scriptures? Really, don't write about the heavens. Nowadays, when you write about the heavens, you can basically read them in the first world.

I just wanted to see martial arts, but I didn't expect to see fantasy. I was satisfied and said goodbye.

It is not recommended to combine the Nine Yin and Nine Yang together. The Nine Yin Manual cannot be the extreme of Yin. Taoist martial arts cannot go to extremes. Nine is the extreme of Yang. It may be more reasonable to call the Nine Yin Manual the Yin Yang Manual. One copy of the Nine Yin is enough.

Comrade the author, please update the chapter as soon as possible

Comrade the author stepped up to write a new chapter

Comrade author, please update the chapter as soon as possible

It is recommended that the author read the original work twice. I am here to write a book, and my relationship is in chaos. Zuo Lengchan is not the right age.

The front part is very nice, it feels like watching a TV series, but I haven't watched the back part yet, and I'm really looking forward to it!

The last two are still pretty good after that.

I have a guess, if according to Darwin's theory of evolution, human beings changed from apes, and there were still apes when we were in heaven, does it mean that human beings have not fully evolved yet, so in later eras, the kung fu will be higher, and the kung fu will be lower as we go down. Does it mean that the human beings in the Golden Book have begun to complete evolution. The difficulty in practicing kung fu is not due to changes in the world, but because human beings as a whole choose to abandon martial arts, or martial arts is only suitable for people who have not completed evolution...

I've read chapters 56 and 57. The protagonist has been communicating with the Mongolians in these two chapters for too long. It feels unreasonable. Is this a foreshadowing? I'll keep looking. I felt very uncomfortable reading these two chapters, so I am posting this.

What's going on? Why did the book club disband