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Come on! The ant counter is here again.

You just liked Xiantingshu Ant. Little Ant thanks you for voting for it.

Let me answer you, as long as it is strong enough, it can take down the entire galaxy. What joy, anger, sorrow and joy do you want?

I am the first investor ~ Hehehe

Come on sister, come on write, support you👍👍👍

As an author, the more I write, the more I realize how bad my writing is. Why can I write so poorly when I have such a good idea? What to do? Infinite self-doubt...

Come on, don't stop updating. Language description and scene description also need to use imagination. 😁

I look at the leeks every day, but I find that I can't cut them😤

Dang Dang Dang, here I am again, giving this hard-working comrade a recommendation vote. (Whispering, I actually voted every day. Hahaha)

Let's talk about it, let's talk about a few shortcomings euphemistically. 1. The narrative of the story is relatively bland, and the characters have no characteristics, and they feel like tool men of animated CG 2. The background does not have a sense of slowly unfolding, everything is purely based on the reader's imagination, which should be a problem with his own writing skills 3. After two chapters, there is no one at all It feels like getting to the point. Everyone seems to be fishing in troubled waters. If you want to write like this, it will be all in vain. You should cut into the main event from the beginning. You can't be considered a slow-burner, you can't even get hot if you are hot This is a shortcoming that I personally feel. Good medicine is bitter. If you don't like it, you can ignore it.

Come on, the story is pretty good, but just a bit bland. You can add a bit of conflict and contradiction, and the characters' actions in the conflict will reveal their personalities. It would be better to also reveal the general plot behind it. Of course, I personally understand that it's good to have a look. If it's useful, it's good. If there are other arrangements, I look forward to...

I'll vote for you after I upgrade and have votes.