Warhammer: The Savior Rat

I imagined underground life in my mind

The Battle of Cripple Peak, the picture is taken from the seventh edition of the military book The war that the protagonist will currently participate in is the first war between the Skaven and Grandpa Nagashina.

A rare piece of Skaven literature. The author is also very good at restoring the background knowledge and characters. As a fan of Total War Warhammer, I am very happy, but I am very dissatisfied with the portrayal of the protagonist. I hope there will be improvements in the next book. First of all, as a Skaven engineering warlock, the protagonist only uses spells as a means of combat in the early stage. Especially as a modern time traveler, the combination of warpstone technology and modern science should be the main focus. The horn is a very big advantage, especially when the Dimension Gun has not been invented. Secondly, when the protagonist is very weak, he blindly pursues the magic eight winds and the evil god technology. When he knows how deep the water in Warhammer is, it is not in line with the shrewd characteristics of the rat people. And later telling the elves that he only wants to be a happy rat person is not in line with the greedy characteristics of the rat people, which leads to the collapse of the protagonist's character.

I read most of it, and later paid to read it. I have to say that the author is really struggling to write, with more than 800,000 words, and it is still spinning. Let's talk about the small details. Most of them are various spells and projects. In actual practice, the detailed explanations of such spells and projects have little bearing on subsequent applications. There is always a vague feeling between the text and the plot It really feels like being in the water.

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Map of Nehekhara Directly above and to the right is Nagashzar, which is the current battlefield Below the skull is Laemia

The plot changes from one point to the other. I want to write about this and that. "If there is a gun in the plot, it should be used" Has the author made an outline? Just write that if you want to.

Eski's hair should be smoother and his teeth should be whiter.

We promised to prevent the destruction of the world. Why are you attacking Steamed Egg? I really think that all the steamed egg dragons are dead. Even if they are sleeping now, after the fight is like this, do you still expect peace talks later, just to beat Essin? Now this is no different from Master Na's teaming up, right? Although the protagonist probably doesn't know it yet, it gives readers a really bad impression. Although Rat Rat is not a good thing, isn't your main plot to prevent the destruction of the world?

I remember there was a setting that said female rats were not mentally retarded in the first place, but they were mentally retarded only because of the deliberate torture of male rats. There was even a warlord who raised two very capable and loyal female rats as mates. They were called the Ava rat sisters of Skaven.