The Void Walker in American Comics

First, the author never explained the source of the protagonist's abilities at the beginning. If I hadn't looked through the comments section and saw someone talking about warframe, I wouldn't have known which power system it was. Secondly, Warframe is a game, it is not a popular common sense, so if you want to use this power system, can you please take some time to explain the details of the power system for new readers? For example, the proper nouns and meanings of the power characteristic system, etc. If you talk about void but don't explain clearly which void it is or what its specific ability is, others will naturally be confused. Second, the writing is not good, and the plot setting is not good, which can be corrected through communication, but the writing is not good, which is something that needs to be learned to improve. I only read a lot of repeated expressions in the first dozen chapters. Third, the author's mentality is wrong. According to the description at the beginning, he is clearly a mercenary who has experienced bullets and bullets, but later on, various children show off toys endlessly. Could it be somewhat consistent with the psychological state of the experience? Are you used to the indifference and indifference of life and death? Even if you don't plan to create a mercenary who has gone through many vicissitudes of life, but you plan to create a cheerful and lively protagonist, can you please give him some behavior that is consistent with his character? Why did you write so calmly, so calmly and rationally before? Severe personality split. Fourth, the plot arrangement and character arrangement are naive. If you plan to use certain characters for a long time, then it is okay for you to spend space describing their growth, but do you plan to use them all? Why do you keep describing them in great detail? The result is that there are only a dozen chapters in a mess, with a lot of characters written and none of them standing up, and all of them are exposed on the surface, a mess. Final summary, I don't know how many books the author has written. Judging from the comments, it seems that this is not the first one. If the first one is similar, then I suggest you don't rush to open the book. Summarize and study it. You will not make any improvement after writing a book of this quality for ten years.

To be honest, the upper limit of the armor is not too high. If Tenno can raise the upper limit in Marvel, it is probably the power of the void. Otherwise, just relying on the armor alone, you can really see the upper limit.

Mutants are not human, this is the official setting, for money.

Personally, I don't like the character of this protagonist. After three years of blood and fire, he is still not calm enough. It feels like he is just a habit. I skipped reading, and when I saw the chapter about Superman's baby, I vomited. I spent a long time explaining to others, who are you? After experiencing so much, even experiencing the void dimension, I still can't see the growth of my character.

In front of you are interstellar pirates, Tenno bastards, absolute executors of the Three Lights Act, eternal wallflowers, cash repositories, material hoarders, internal fusion core devourers, high-tech gladiators, Kuva addicts, ruthless Zika machines, three idiot hunters, extremely vicious bounty hunters, spider-type mecha demolishers, and efficient and high-speed fishing. Expert, plains animal protection organization, void relic enthusiast, cat and dog breeder, Ayetan statue wholesaler, gold and silver potato grower, experience monster, Fuma black hole, mod collector, parkour expert, friend of the skeleton, reckless captain, platinum harvester, profiteer assassin, Tian·Extreme leisure·No liver, no krypton. Nuo warrior😬

I also want to get a shot, but he wants my liver.

I know that everyone likes to read it in one go, because it feels so good, and I also like to read it in one go. But after all, we are not great gods, nor do we have the ability to become gods in one book, so we can only take our time. So I still hope that all of you who have books can click on the book and flip through it, even if you don't read it, you can just turn to the last page. Finally, thank you. Thank you

This is not Tiannuo at all. What about your burning, killing and looting? What about your people who have made hundreds of millions in achievements? It feels a bit forced to play the role. The authentic Tenno warriors just use Wushuang. How can there be so many things?

I feel that one of the big problems in writing novels in Warframe is the upper limit. I always feel that the Warframe will only reach the military level in the end. If you go up to the next level, you will have to create a second creation, otherwise it will be very confusing. After all, after playing the game, you will be very sensitive to the settings, and most of the Warframes give people the feeling of It has high attack and low defense, and it is easy to die suddenly when hitting high waves, so writing things like head-on confrontation will give people an indescribable feeling (except using Eidolon, Cow, and Cow) ps: This is my feeling when reading Warframe novels before, it is just a personal opinion

I don't play Warframe, so I don't really understand the upper limit of Warframe! Judging from the current performance of the protagonist, most mid-term villains in American comics can beat the protagonist! Not to mention the people you meet after coming out of the planet! Also! The DC protagonist can't even pass Earth!

Shen Nong tasted the herbs and found that they were poisonous. He died from the poison, gg

Voidwalker. . I thought it was Jb face. .

After reading Chapter 28, I wonder if the author has improved. Following the plot was the routine of ten years ago. Nowadays, excellent fans still follow the plot, especially since nothing has changed in the first operation. Now writing the background and NPCs of the fan world is just a brick, and the author needs to build it himself. The further step is to dig out the things behind the background and use his own brain to make up the logic to create new materials (glass reinforced plastics). Other problems in the first 28 chapters are okay, but the plot advancement is out of date.

At first glance, the latest chapter is all about building mechas, but since I haven't played the game and the author hasn't posted any pictures, I feel a bit uncomfortable.

It feels quite chaotic, with no main plot. The protagonist is running around, not even for the essence of Aye, but just running around.

I've never played the game, so it looks frustrating without the picture above.

Hamster probe, damn Tiannuo bastard

Looking confused, I really don't know what's so exciting about it

How strong is the protagonist now? Is he at Heavenly Father level?

You are updated ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's over. I've watched it for the second time.

Refining

The author actually finished it🤔

I don't even understand the pretense and slap in the face, the key is the Holy Mother style

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

In Rune Continent, if a mage can control the void, he will definitely become a demon god and the protagonist. . . Some people say that if a pig lives for a thousand years, it will turn into a pig spirit. But a pig spirit is a pig spirit, and it will not become a god because it does not have the character or wisdom. The protagonist is also a weirdo. He doesn't know how to use the void. He only steals other energy to make a lot of clothes. He keeps copying the skills designed by others in the cartoon.