Through the Gate of Fairyland

The setting of "Golden Finger" in this book is okay, and the plot is okay, but the protagonist is not a time traveler, so many aspects of him are unreasonable. Success is also a failure, and there are gains and losses. I hope this book can be longer.

Zhu Tianwen, it's normal for you to write about aborigines. After reading two chapters, it's a bit bland so I won't read it. Goodbye

First of all, the title of the book. At first glance, I thought it was Zhu Tianwen. After all, the function of the door is to let people pass. Then the story is okay, but the sense of substitution is not strong. Even if you win the battle part, it will not give people a very satisfying feeling. Anyway, keep going.

There are not too many chapters, and I enjoyed reading them.

The writing of "The Devil's Nest" was too erratic and ruined the rhythm.

Being exiled at the beginning🤔 So miserable Then Chapter 2 introduces Goldfinger

You are suitable for drinking my bath water.