Starting from Joining the White Lotus Sect

The book is okay, why do so many people criticize it?

The author's writing is good, but the story is too poor and the protagonist's character is not likable.

The officially designated brain temporary storage place for this book

The author of this book cut it, because he didn't grasp the characteristics, and the character positioning of the pig's trotters was inaccurate. It was okay before leaving the secret realm, but it was not good after leaving the secret realm. Others came here to read this book to read the White Lotus Sect. Readers will definitely like the pig's trotters that kill decisively, and the pig's trotters that are not the Virgin. This is very important. It must be good grass before leaving the secret realm. If it is written like that, it will definitely become popular slowly. After reading the comments, others said that they have been helping Huangren. I felt that there was no need to read it. Many readers would not like it. After all, why should I help if I have no relatives and no care? The author should write around the White Lotus sect, so that there are new ideas. In addition, the description of the realm is not outstanding and the fighting is inexplicable.

Be careful of the King of Hungry Ghosts. The White Lotus Virgin who took office has been wiped out, and King Baiyang is still enjoying the punishment of being devoured by crows.

If you want to say that this book is not very poisonous, that is just nonsense from people who have never read it. At least you can take a look. But this book! Overall, it's a mess, and there's also a lot of pretentiousness in it, which makes it awkward. Also, the protagonist is a bit not very smart. He has some brains, but seems to have no brains.

Is this a book to whitewash the greatest villain in the world?

😭😭😭 Stop raising books, you will raise them to death.

The number of water is understandable, but it is rare to see water before one hundred chapters. What is the main character of your author writing? To join the White Lotus Sect is to rebel. If you don't rebel, don't join. If you open a monastery with such kindness, how can you be a Dharma King?

The writing and settings are good, but the protagonist is wrong. I feel like the protagonist cares too much about the deserters. Why do you care so much about the deserters and even reveal that you are engaged to the Yao family? It's not that it can't be exposed. Now that they are so weak, the monk also said that the Yao family only marries with the eight families. If the protagonist can marry the Yao family, there must be a secret, or it should be exposed directly.

Holy Virgin, what does it have to do with you that people in the Northern Wilderness can't practice?

The beginning is very interesting. After entering the academy, various collapses began. How long did it take to practice? To show your holiness in front of various people, just rely on half-baked Xiao Ming Wang Jing? Flashed.

Oh my god, the first few chapters are well written, but the rest are like idiots. All the compositions primary school students learn are more interesting than this.

I thought the White Lotus sect was gathering faith to practice martial arts, but the main character, the Holy Mother bitch, was doing no good to herself by meddling in other people's affairs. Others wanted to kill him, and he was having fun with them. Why didn't someone come out and take pictures of him?

I came here to see the White Lotus Sect, where is the promised White Lotus Sect?

Under the banner of dark flow, holy scripture? ? ?

This book... Is a masterpiece! An absolute fairy-level work, with beautiful writing, tight rhythm and full sense of substitution. In the mythical section where there are many gods, you can innovate and create your own style, which is so fascinating! It's a pity that the number of words is too small, so I read them all in a while. I hope the author will put it on the shelves as soon as possible and update it soon! Let us readers enjoy it! Have fun watching it! Tickets have been sent, hope you can support us!

This book is amazing only at the beginning. The main plot of the later period is unknown. Developing towards pretentious and slap-in-the-face writing

Does writing east and west have anything to do with Bai Lian?

Now that I see it, I don't know why the protagonist came out... I feel like the protagonist doesn't know what he is doing and just wanders around without a goal.

This book was definitely written by AI. It started with the same background as "The Strange Fairy", but that book also collapsed later on.

I'm really fed up with everything being transferred to an academy. No matter whether the protagonist is cultivating immortality, practicing martial arts, or awakening his powers and learning magic, he suddenly joins an academy and starts pretending to be a slap in the face.

The introduction was unclear and many of the explanations were unclear, which made me confused.

The first few chapters are okay, but I feel dizzy afterward. It feels like dozens of chapters merged into one chapter. I skip over and over again... I don't know the speed. I want to write one paragraph at a time. The plot development is too slow to start and ends. I jump to writing!

It is recommended to start writing and keep the first few chapters and write about Shinto!

The two people from the White Lotus Sect and the secret realm at the beginning were actually well written, and they were written with great care. After about 20 chapters, it just straightened out. Whether it was the creation of the supporting characters, the dialogue, or the character of the protagonist, they were all unqualified. It was completely brainless. It was just for the sake of water. If you want to make money, you have to do it. Kung Fu is in the main plot, and the side plots are embellishments. We readers are all attracted by the White Lotus Sect. However, the protagonist does not belong to the White Lotus Sect. He deviates from the outline or has no outline. I think it comes out one after another. There is a reason for the poor results. Let's cut it.

It doesn't look good and has no meaning at all.

Brother, your book has the kind of protagonist who just follows the crowd. It's only over 200 chapters and you're reincarnated, like Pluto. And you're not writing about the White Lotus Sect. Your protagonist is wandering around every day, and it's not consistent. He's hitting here and there with a hammer. Your idea is good, but the plot is not good.

Have you rebelled? I really hate the rebels

Bai Lian also belongs to YJ now. Cut it off early to save your life.