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I wouldn't even click on the protagonist's name. A writer. He doesn't even care about the name of his protagonist. What does it mean? You can experience it yourself.

I thought it was a modern person who traveled through time, but I didn't expect that it was a person from the past who traveled through time and didn't understand anything. He traveled through modern times and didn't know how to write. He got the golden finger and was a talent.

I'm really convinced. When I saw so many comments, I thought I had found a good book. But in the end, they were all negative comments.

This kind of book can also be written by a great god. It was written like this 10 years ago and you could read it. Now it's crazy. Writing like this, it's sold.

Qidian's officialdom novels are all harmonious, and the three of them, Recording Events and Joining the Army, Don't Believe in Pies in the Sky, and Hongmeng Shu, are all good.

Jack Ma has run away. What's the point of making money? Banks won't allow you to withdraw money. Is it useful to make more money?

The author is just following the trend. He didn't understand a lot of things of that era, so he just came to this type of food. The golden finger is too big, and the outline can't be seen. The progress is too fast. Originally, period articles are about daily life, but you are afraid that the protagonist will be shot.

The account of a great god was ruined just like that.

It's full of mistakes and omissions. The subject matter was originally quite good, but by the time I saw it, I was so embarrassed that I felt like having cancer.

After reading the first chapter, the second chapter did not match the previous one at all. After reading the second chapter, I felt that the author was careless and put other books in the first chapter. Then I continued reading, what happened to the sixth chapter? I barely finished reading Chapter 6, but Chapter 7 has not been changed back to the original plot. Is the author writing the book just to get rid of the problem? Who can read this kind of writing?

The protagonist gave me the feeling that I was in a hurry. Build a house and it was done in one day. Selling hundreds of thousands of tons of stuff at once. ……

Why does the preface of this book not match the postscript?

This book is good. I stopped following it for the time being as the bookshelf was updated. I read 20 chapters when I saw them on the shelves. Putting the reality aside, this is a parallel time and space, so you can't do anything too much. I don't know what other book friends think about it, but I've taken it in anyway. Is it reasonable to do this to sell hundreds or thousands of tons of goods to modern times? Of course, the novel can put aside rationality and look at the new world map at the end of the chapter, but my patience has been exhausted.

At first I changed the oil at a pound to a pound, but then I forgot about it.

Each book is so short, how can he become such a great writer? . .

The author put 6 million kilograms of seafood in his government-provided resettlement house, which is equivalent to the weight of 1,200 adult elephants 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 Do you want to be so poisonous?

I have never heard of a master whose name I have never heard of Looking at his past works, there is only one excellent one, and the number of words in each book is so small How can I be named a master Didn't I say that a master needs several books with thousands of orders as a foundation?

I took a look at the character card. . It was all trivial, and I was instantly in no mood to watch it.

Wang Xiaojun, Lu Xiaoqiao, Jiang Xiaoju; Hong Xiaoshu?

I was waiting for the two women to die, but they were not dead at the end, so I couldn't stand it anymore.

Evaluation, skillful self-pleasure writing.

There are too many women and it makes me sick to watch.

Hello, the author seems to have made a mistake in the chapter title. The beginning of chapter 389 should start with chapter 289.

The first hundred chapters or so are okay. The water is real water. The second part is so damn hard that I can't stand it. I keep dragging an earth that is 88 years old and a modern earth can do this and that for hundreds of chapters. I really don't know how this great god came out. It's NB that the author can create a great god like this. You should go out and work. There is no way out for writing books like this.

The golden finger of the protagonist in this book is borrowed from "I Have a Home in 1982", and is also integrated with another book whose name I can't remember. It can also be recharged with jade. This is understandable. After all, the various cheats nowadays have been thought up by authors with great imaginations, and it is indeed difficult to come up with new ones. However, compared with Wang Yi, the protagonist of "I Have a Family in 1982", the protagonist Wang Xiaojun of this book lacks a core, main and clear action goal. Wang Yi travels between two time and space to build Tianya Island better and lead the residents in the 1980s to get rich. Even in modern times, making money is to have money to buy the things you need. It can be said that Tianya Island in the 1980s is the utopia of the protagonist Wang Yi. As for Wang Xiaojun, the protagonist of this book, apart from getting rich and increasing his strength, he has not seen a more core sublimated ideal. One more thing, what is the type of this book? The first part was about making money, but the later part almost turned into cultivation. What I fear most is the inconsistency in content. Many readers were originally attracted by the content of the chronicle at the beginning, but in the end, it turns out that the world of cultivation, monsters, and immortals is revealed. It is better to give readers an explanation at the beginning. To be precise, I want to tell you that this book travels through the heavens and the world, and will not just stay in one environment. It will completely change to the infinite flow of the heavens. In addition, in order to avoid readers being uncomfortable when the book enters the world of cultivation later, the beginning can be set in the ancient times of parallel time and space. It will not be abrupt when it changes to the world of cultivation in the future. In addition, some details in the book really need to be considered. What best reflects the skill of period writing is the details that fit that era, and this needs to be improved.