Three Mountains and One Lake

After a rough look, I will express my personal feelings: 1. The first few chapters are a bit confusing and boring to read. It got better after I dropped out of school. 2. The changes in the world situation after the great change of heaven and earth are a bit chaotic and hasty. It needs to be carefully laid out, otherwise it will have an impact on the subsequent development and settings. 3. The plot after entering the mountain for spiritual practice is quite attractive if you calm down and take a look at it. It has a bit of suspense and horror. 4. The practice skills seem a bit stiff if they are applied to the game. 5. There are many places that can be expanded, some branches and characters can be added, and the plot structure can be enriched. 6. After reading the outline at the end, the follow-up is quite grand. I hope the author will write better and better in the future!