Xuanwu Principle

Because I saw the book list comment before, I came in to read the preliminary works before reading the recommended novel, so I should come in and get to know the author~ Because there are not many existing chapters, I read it in ten minutes in one go. It can be seen that it is a test work. Personally, I think the author's writing skills are actually quite good, but the fatal problem is that the narrative is too anxious, so that the story structure gives people a messy feeling: The author seems to want to explain everything, but because of his anxiety, nothing is explained clearly, so that when reading the second half of the second chapter to the third chapter, the reader's sense of experience begins It's weird - For example, when my attention was still focused on the suspense of "the little junior sister is weak", the author suddenly changed the focus of the incident to "investigating the truth about the beating" and quickly entered the "fighting on the boat" plot (and it felt like the characters except "Wei He" were not fully explained... Which was very uncomfortable). What's more outrageous is that until the beginning of this plot, my "internal" understanding of the protagonist was still very vague - part of the description that should have allowed the reader to fully understand the protagonist (the process of the protagonist becoming familiar with Goldfinger and the world after being "resurrected" from the martial arts school) was accidentally skipped by the author, so that when watching the subsequent plots, the sense of immersion never came up. ——Well, I am not a professional, so what I know is only superficial. I think the author must have discovered more other problems, so he stopped the loss in time hahahahaha. No matter what, let's look forward to the new book first. Creation is not easy, please keep your original intention and pursue your goals!