My Martial Arts Life Simulator

I really want to complain! ! I really don't know what the protagonist is thinking! ! The protagonist himself said that at least he would have to wait until his innate ability to get out of the game, but the protagonist has no intention of being stubborn at all. If you want to say that the protagonist's simulator requires money, luck, and other things, that's it. But he doesn't need it, he just needs to wait for the cooling time to pass. With such a cool golden finger, as long as you get through the deadlock at the beginning, you can find a remote mountain village deep in the mountains and old forests, and you won't have to wait for ten or eight years, not even one or two years. As long as you wait for at least three to five months, the protagonist will not be as stupid as he is now, encountering several life and death crises! ! Obviously, as long as he keeps a low profile for a year or two and then comes out, he can basically start the side push mode. To get to this point, I really doubt that the protagonist's brain was squeezed by the door! ! (๑˙ー˙๑)

It's okay in the front, but it's really funny in the back. To kill that season or something, it's so disgusting.

Although the writing is okay, I don't feel at all happy.

Just let him go if he says he will let him go? I'm speechless

It was poisoned as soon as it was released. There is a chapter where the protagonist is chased by outsiders who trespass into the temple in his sect's Vajra Temple... Wouldn't the protagonist scream as a warning when being chased? Did the teacher come so slowly? With so many sects watching the ceremony, aren't there patrols to prevent accidents during this special period? In recent chapters, everyone has been able to bully the protagonist to the point of going to the Vajra Temple. He went to the Vajra Temple and beat the protagonist. Each one became more arrogant than the other, and even the relics were stolen. I said earlier that Vajra Temple is very strong and has a lot of confidence...

This book does have a lot of problems... 1. Pig's trotters forcibly reduce intelligence Referring to committing a crime and living in someone else's house and causing trouble to others (the key protagonist has already thought of this) Buying materials for concealed weapons... Going out in disguise in the inn Wait 2. It is obvious that you can strictly design such a sophisticated plot and it is very blunt to force the plot 3. There is nothing exciting... It can be seen or not I feel like I will jump...

Now I can't understand more and more what the author wants to write? Touch the minefields of various readers one by one, and drive away readers who like various genres one by one?

Cutting one's hair once and coating it with honey is called unforgettable, two cuttings is called exposing the darkness, and three cuttings is called consuming feelings. I couldn't stand it when I saw that after finishing Ma San, I went on to do Ji's. I hope you can think about it carefully and don't write it by destroying logic in order to eliminate evil and win people's hearts.

This book fell apart after the protagonist's extra life experience.

Now I understand why so few people watch it, your pace is too slow. The story is almost uninteresting.

What I wrote before is generally understandable, but I don't want to be a monk licking my face and calling him master, and arrange the biggest failure of the Vajra Temple. The later plot is not easy to develop, and because of the bald donkey, a large number of readers are lost. It is purely a sheep's head selling dog meat, which is in name only.

Being idle feels so childish. You write like this and you are destined to make a choice. You can watch it, but you will never survive Except for the newbies, not many people will subscribe to you after you put it on the shelf. They can only rely on the little money you get from Dian Niang.

It's well written, but a bit too cool. But if it's just the world of martial arts, it will rise too quickly and collapse easily. Come on, author.

From the beginning, I was told that the protagonist's parents were dead, so he had to work hard on his own, and then he just went to the temple. Relatives and fiancée also appeared, and it became cliche and was withdrawn.

The book is good. I suggest you change the martial arts level. Zhenmen is really a bit of a trick. Beginner martial arts, advanced martial arts, superior martial arts, Zhenshen secrets, and mythological secrets.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author: read Feng Qiyue's book and absorb some of the essence, plot arrangement, story rationality, logic, and its effect on the protagonist's growth history.

As of now, I won't talk about the plot. Regarding the current martial arts of the protagonist, I would like to share my thoughts. It feels like the author has his own ideas, but they are not planned at all, and there are even many traces of temporary changes. Take internal strength as an example. The author said that Buddhist internal strength is about accumulation and stamina, but this is not seen at all in the book: when Yu Qing beat Ji Silun, he was basically an empty opponent. The two geniuses of Jingang Temple almost couldn't stop Manager Fang. Of course, Mr. Fang is in the top five of the Heavenly Ranking of Combat Power. However, not to mention the many pitfalls of the Heavenly Ranking, the people who dominate the ranking seem to be descendants of the Zhenwu Sword Sect and those Taoist sects, right? Furthermore, the author uses the words of a thief who was born in Tangmen to tell us that Buddhism has high defense power. One of the secret arts of Vajra Temple, Arhat's Golden Body is a defensive martial art of Gangqi type, right? This skill has been proven by the author to be inferior to Shaolin Temple's Vajra Indestructibility and Confucianism's Haoran Tiangang. I would like to give the author a little advice here. Introduction to the Vajra Temple: The Vajra Temple was originally a prison for the previous imperial court. No matter whether it was a heinous crime or a serious injustice before, it was almost impossible to survive after being imprisoned. But all this was changed by an ascetic monk: he broke through himself in the cold prison, used his own power to humanize everyone, established a temple on the spot, and accepted everyone in the temple as disciples. Since then, he has continued to save evil people and achieved the prestige of Vajra Temple. Good at: having thick blood (defense is calculated separately), excellent resistance to abnormal conditions, good at enduring pain, and being able to maintain a good state to fight the enemy even when the remaining blood is empty. Good at punishment skills. Bitter Zen Kung Fu: An introductory internal skill that requires no bones or understanding. The only way to practice is to endure pain and examine your heart. The more pain you endure and the more sins you wash away, the more you can improve your inner strength. Therefore, the hard meditation skills are calculated in years, and there is no such thing as a great success. Differences from Shaolin Neigong: Shaolin Neigong pays more attention to recovery and treatment. Another point: Ascetic's attitude toward the protagonist's ability to learn the Moonlight Traction Technique is very strange. Generally speaking, if you practice internal skills that are completely incompatible or even opposite in nature, the host should be shocked. The host's intriguing attitude now should indicate that Yu Qing's operation is definitely not unique.

To be honest, the article is good but the updates bring it down.

I haven't been able to watch it since I wrote Kongangji Temple, and Eunuch is also normal.

Why does the author keep updating so often? I really like reading it, but it's very painful to read with such irregular updates.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Is it understandable that the author wants to abandon the update? It feels too frequent and I will stop updating without warning.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Are you accumulating energy for ten updates at a time? Then I look forward to it

Md Another one died. I remember I was in Sanjiang and the writing was quite good at that time. In Gala