After Rebirth, I Am in the Human World

How stupid is this villain to think so? Poisoned me to death

Come on more

Ever since Zheng Juan left, I couldn't bear to be with Zhou Rong again. . What is the difference between this protagonist and Feng Huacheng? Both time and place. . . . Abandon the book, goodbye

I couldn't stand it anymore. I didn't read many chapters. I read the reviews and read it, but I was disgusted. There are too many trolls now. You have to act and stand up, either you should be more open or you should be honest and forceful. If you say you are not capable, just take care of the Zhou family and Zheng Juan. Zheng Juan is okay. The Zhou family needs you to save them. Don't you look at your own conditions and others' conditions? If you don't want to open a harem, don't open one. If you want to open one, open it openly. And you want to take away all of Zheng Juan's biological parents in Xiangjiang? We still want to talk about Zhou Rong without looking at the background arranged for us? What does the protagonist have? What else is there besides a person who cannot see the light of day? He wants culture but no culture, he wants status but no identity, he wants money but no money? Zhou Rong is a literary girl and you have no power. The other Cai Xiaoguang will kill you instantly. Does your Cai love her? How about living a quiet life and getting married to Zheng Juan, which would be the best thing for her, and why are you looking for her parents? Are you still looking for Xiangjiang? You think her life is not miserable enough, right? Is this person unable to give birth? You are still a girl, you have not seen her for decades, and you are still a rich man. Are you mentally ill? In the original work, Zheng Juan just wanted to live her own little life. Your forced pretense is a bit disgusting. You just think it's good, and you still follow the same routine ten years ago. I don't know where the good reviews come from.

In fact, I didn't want to watch it when I saw that I was getting married with Zhou Rong. It was too bad of character.

A good story about the struggle of an era, it has to be transformed into a big stallion, a story about a harem, the more I read it, the more rubbish it becomes, so I gave it up.

The recent plot is really unbearable. Once you set the protagonist at the beginning, don't switch repeatedly. Zheng Juan went to Hong Kong and could no longer be with Zhou Rong. This made sense. But the protagonist of Magnolia's problem repeatedly reminded himself not to have an affair with Magnolia during the process of getting to know Magnolia, and finally added this plot. It's really boring. If you write like this, you might as well write the protagonist in a more elaborate way at the beginning. Who can stand to see it like this now? I saved it for a week before watching this off-putting plot, and I will not subscribe again.

Everything about the TV series is good, but it's too deliberately inflicted. Even if his brother avoids suspicion and doesn't help him, the title "mayor's younger brother" is enough for Zhou Bingkun to struggle for twenty years. How could he do so poorly?

There are other ways to help Zhou Rong. Why give up Zheng Juan because of Zhou Rong? If you write a single heroine, then Zheng Juan should be the main one. Why can't Zheng Juan be the main heroine? How big is it? What you write is really uncomfortable. In your case, Zheng Juan is not as good as Zhou Rong. You are pretending and standing up.

I still couldn't help but wanted to say something. Some of the small details in it sounded weird. For example, the way Lu Tian's parents called him, some parents may call him by name directly, but more parents called him by their affectionate names. There are also Zhou Rong and Zheng Juan. Since they are both husband and wife and lovers, they should be. Brother Tian, etc., Dryly said that the name is weird, and finally Hao Dongmei, how can there be a sister who usually calls her brother by his name (unless the sister is angry), okay, the last key point is, can the author quickly end Lang Daping's line? Do you want to irritate the readers to death? (The above are all complaints, please don't complain if you don't like it, please Q)

Forget it, I can't stand it anymore because I'm so addicted. I've written it now and the logic is wrong. It's not a plot that normal people can think of. I'm already addicted. You Shennong continue to be disgusting and raise other people's children every day. You are still a love rival. Holy Mother, you are great. I don't know if the author is like this. If not, it would be too hypocritical.

The second-generation family setting is a failure. With so many trump cards, it has to rely on the second generation of officials and the second generation of rich people to support it.

Damn it, what kind of novel is this, Wolf Sword and Wolf Screen. I haven't put it away yet, especially the Wolf Sword. He has so much evidence of illegality, so don't deal with him. The main character is so fucking holy.

The author's writing is so disgusting, it's always someone else who doesn't fight back when they deal with you.

How did this develop into a stallion? Author, you have failed to live up to such a good work. Zheng Juan, and Zhou Rong can understand that it was the helplessness of that era. It is a bit vulgar to pop up a white magnolia. I suggest that the author directly stud it and we will enjoy watching it.

I can't understand so many people praising Zhou Bingkun and belittling Zhou Bingyi and Zhou Rong. In the past, when there were many children, those who provided for the elderly were almost always the least capable sons in the family. After providing for the old man and dying, the old man's property will belong to the son. Most of the other children paid to come and have a look when they have time. Regardless of property, especially houses. Isn't that what the Zhou family is like? It's no different from most families. How did you become the boss and the second child, being selfish and not caring for the elderly?

The more I read, the more useless the protagonist becomes. He is plotted against again and again. Hundreds of chapters have been written about a trivial matter. Just don't deal with it

I just finished reading Chapter 120, tell me a few points. I have never watched the TV series, and the author's writing is pretty good, but 1. The dialogue, the characters in it, do not have their own personality when speaking, which makes it difficult to bring the characters to life. It is full of written dialogue and repeated dialogue, which looks like it was generated by AI. For example, in normal daily conversations, it is enough to say "yes, okay, good". How can it be possible to repeat the subject again? Or reply "yes", which is generally used as a spoken reply for superiors and subordinates in specific situations. For example, have you had breakfast? General answer: Yes, I ate it. Rather than: yes. And each character has a different tone of voice due to different reasons such as occupation, age, experience, personality, etc. In your book, there is no violation in changing the dialogue content at will. For example, people in high positions talk to themselves but don't know much, and they try to figure things out on their own. On the contrary, the dialogue is also a negative portrayal of the character's personality. For example, in the few street robbers you wrote, I can't see the feeling of being casual and frivolous at all. In fact, many things are very simple, such as Shui Luo and his wife whistling when they saw Zhou Rong for the first time. For example, a few evil smiles when surrounding Juan. They can both enhance the characters and the environment. 2. The relationship between the characters, the emotional interaction between the two female protagonists and the male protagonist is really poor. For now, the relationship between Juan and the male protagonist, at least, doesn't make me feel like I'm not lovable. Similarly, Zhou Rong's emotional handling is also not smooth. Whether it is her transfer of feelings from Feng to the male protagonist, or her interaction with the male protagonist after Juan leaves, it is a bit forced. Generally speaking, between Juanzi and the male protagonist, if you are good to me, I will get along well. As for Zhou Rong, if he is talented, he will be good. This feeling is that even if the male protagonist is just stupid, as long as he fits the bill, is that okay? This brings us to the third point. 3. The male protagonist himself, Golden Finger is not only for survival, but also for help. It seems that the male protagonist is the system itself and a little prophetic knowledge? What about the hero himself? What is he? Everyone knows that the wooden man Guo Jing is upright, kind and a bit silly. Jin Yong showed his character in various details. What is it about you, the male protagonist, that attracts you? Humorous? Or are you ambitious? Extraordinarily intelligent? Or just lead but not send? He just did nothing. Even the copying official copied it without feeling at all.

This protagonist, someone else slept with his mama, probably without revenge. It was frustrating and boring to watch.

The only proof of Zheng Juan's age is that Zhou Bingkun said that he would marry a widow one year older than him. In 1969, when Zhou Bingkun was 17 years old, he concluded that Zheng Juan was born in 1951. This is very loose. First of all, Zhou Bingkun would deliberately tell little Zheng Juan's age at this time to gain family support; Secondly, in this book, Zheng's mother made it very clear that in order to protect her during this special historical period, she did not want others to know Zheng Juan's life experience. Therefore, her true age will also be concealed. After all, the identity of a child picked up in 1948 is too sensitive. Therefore, Zheng Juan's birth before liberation is rigorous and can withstand scrutiny.

I haven't read it for a few days, but I updated it so much in one go. I give the writer a big thumbs up. Seeing that now I can almost understand the big idea. The male protagonist first satisfies Zheng Juan's material life, and then satisfies Zhou Rong's spiritual life. Relying on force to protect Zheng Juan, relying on culture to infect Zhou Rong, making both beautiful girls devoted to him. Because it is a period story, it is not easy to have a harem, so the male protagonist has set a special life experience for Zheng Juan. If my guess is correct, before Zheng Juan returns to her parents, the male protagonist will only love her. After Zheng Juan leaves Jichun, the male protagonist will accept Zhou Rong. After the reform and opening up, Zheng Juan returned to Jichun to invest, and Zhou Rong was admitted to Peking University. By then, the male protagonist would be worried about happiness. I'm not right, so I'm talking nonsense😁

Just give up after leaving Zheng Juan. The eldest wife must have Zheng Juan! If it sounds nice in the front, I love Zheng Juan, but I will change the person later. Can you be more reliable?

I've been a bookworm for 18 years. It's very well written. I read it in one sitting. I'm looking forward to more chapters. It's better not to be a eunuch. I'm very optimistic about you.

After reading it, I felt very comfortable. In fact, I felt very uncomfortable when I first read it and almost gave up. But I still had the patience to finish reading it and found that what the author wrote was inexplicably in line with my wishes. Everyone is handled well. There is nothing wrong with the dual heroines. I think it is handled properly. Come on! As long as I write it, I will follow it.

I just started watching it, and I have a small opinion about the survival system. I think you can equip the protagonist with some skills later, instead of always adding the Orion survival skills to master level or god level. Chinese medicine, animal training. I personally like to show off this skill. After all, there are many things, and humans are not as convenient as animals.

Finally No. 1 Again.

Title Zheng Juan Innocence is seen in a simple era, and there is beauty in a poor and oppressed family. I think it was God who sent me a good match and happiness.

Title Lu Tian Youdao is reborn to see Lu Tian, ​​with a system in mind to overcome difficulties. Is there a Shura field in the book? I'm glad to see the two boats staggering.