Online Games: Entries Dominate the World

I don't know what the introduction is, it's best to change it. As for the content, after reading the latest chapter, I realized that the author just writes whatever comes to mind. It is better to write a global gamification about rebirth when the protagonist grabs the only skill in the beginning. Is there no currency in the game? The person who comes to the protagonist to forge equipment is a newbie, and his teammates are also newbies. They have never played the game before. It seems like only the main character in the world has played the game. The plot between the protagonist's gay friend and his wife doesn't seem to make any sense. How about changing the map to a place with more experience? Don't you know the protagonist's past life? Since there are players, news will definitely leak out. Then suddenly a set seal appeared → brought to reality? Make an outline and read it over again after writing it. Don't make the preface and the follow-up irrelevant. The protagonist is reborn and has the most basic equipment advantages → level advantages → kill high-quality monsters → upgrade equipment. I don't know if I should take advantage of it.

The messy writing is purely for my own enjoyment and is not for others to see at all.

Author, please, please change the introduction. I don't know what you are talking about when I see the introduction, how can I attract people to read it? Of course, I haven't read it either, so I don't know if your writing is good or not.

Brother, if it doesn't work, let's find a factory to tighten the screws.

. . . . Self-celebrity article. The book shortage is considerable. Not recommended for consumption

The title of the book is interesting, but the introduction is so confusing that I can't understand it. I think the main text is about the same, so I slipped away.

What you wrote is unclear, what level, what skills, what equipment level is vague, just like your introduction.