I'm Doing Magic Spells in Zhu Mie to Return to the Battle.

The writing is so good, why isn't it popular?

It's okay, there's nothing wrong with the writing, it's very smooth, but the climax is a bit bland. Also, the protagonist's talent is great, but his growth rate is a bit slow. It feels like the protagonist is being pressured all the time. Also, the protagonist's character was thought to be a neurotic genius, but turned out to be schizophrenic? He is just a fool every day. Knowing that Yiyong's character was offended by a few words, he was not stable at all. Another point is that the golden finger given to the protagonist by the author is very good, but the protagonist is not worthy of the golden finger. It feels like a waste of this talent and golden fingers.

Tolerate!

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Volunteer

In the face of spells, aren't the so-called ghosts and ghost-killing teams just small characters and small organizations? Is it like two villages fighting? These two things can't develop at all.

Immortal River

Lin Bei, I am invincible

Hashira Mie uses spells to fight back, Konoha uses spells to fight back, Pirates uses spells to fight back, Marvel uses spells to fight back, and Comics uses spells to fight back. Where else can they go from there?

This introduction will at least dissuade 99% of readers who like Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, are you writing this for Demon Slayer Kuroko?

🌝Author, please become a ghost too so that you can keep updating.

I don't quite understand what this introduction says. What is the protagonist in this first sentence? Human? A cursed spirit? Or a ghost? Is it a dark wind? I think the last sentence is about turning people into non-human beings? Let a good brother explain it

Real person

It seems that this book is about eunuchs. I originally thought it would be updated in a year. It seems that I can only visit the tomb.

Come on author, humans have limits, stop being human.

How to integrate these timelines? One is the Taisho era and the other is the modern era, or is it that the main timeline is Demon Slayer and the secondary one is Fukai?

It has been lying on the bookshelf for half a year. I just wanted to see if the author would fake the corpse. But in the end, I had to come to visit the grave.

Looking back at Tsukuni Iwakatsu's life, people will find that two words "jealousy" are written throughout the article. He is a warrior who has been trapped in the feudal Warring States clan since childhood. He is an evil ghost who eats people and drinks blood. He has lived in the shadow of his younger brother his whole life. In order to surpass this god-like man, he did not hesitate to become an evil ghost and abandon his family. However, looking back, it was only when he was about to die and asked himself about his life that he discovered that what he really hated was just himself for not surpassing Yuanyi. It was clear that he was wielding a demon sword with ghost eyes, but he never saw his own path clearly... It was 400 years ago in Japan's Warring States Period, when a pair of twin brothers were born to the famous Jiguo clan. The elder brother was named Jiguo Yansheng by his father, which means always winning. The younger brother was named Jiguo Yuanyi by his mother, which means that he hopes that he will pay attention to the fate between people. In that era, twins, especially boys, were regarded as an ominous sign, because the reality was cruel. Twins often meant competition for inheritance rights, and the tragedy of fratricide was very likely to occur. Therefore, there is a saying spread in ancient times: "Twin emperors, one son leaves and the other returns." And the younger brother inherited the country and became a being destined to be abandoned because of the weird markings he was born with. Thanks to his mother's crazy protection after knowing about it, Ji Guoyuan was saved from death. But even so, my younger brother Yuanyi still had to become a monk at the age of ten. In addition, the younger brother and older brother were deliberately allocated, and their treatment was very different, ranging from tea and meals to residential education, all of which were deliberately divided into two levels: good and bad. " Jiguo Enichi, who does not laugh or speak, is treated as if he was born deaf and mute. He is like a child who has not grown up. He sticks to his mother's left hand all day long, playing with the same hand and foot... "He is so pitiful!" At this time, Jiguo Yansheng was full of pity for his younger brother, and he gradually came up with the idea of ​​protecting his younger brother. After that, he took advantage of the night to secretly find a chance to have fun. But the good times did not last long. His behavior was finally discovered by his father. In anger, his father beat Jiguo Imsho severely. But the next day, Iwakatsu made a piccolo with his own hands and gave it to his younger brother Yuichi. "When you miss your brother, just blow it, and I will appear by your side immediately" This pure brotherhood lasted until Iwakatsu was seven years old, when he was practicing swinging a sword in the courtyard that day.       "？……！"     ""       The bamboo knife fell at the sound, and Yan Sheng was completely stunned when he heard this. He couldn't believe that the person who was regarded as a deaf-mute by everyone, the one who stayed beside his mother all day long and acted like a spoiled child, would be sent to the temple to become a monk at the age of ten, and the younger brother who saw his elder brother working hard, actually dreamed of becoming a samurai like him. This is really ridiculous, this is really an insult to the samurai! Looking at Yuanyi's first smile, Jiguo Yansheng felt that Yuanyi was a little disgusted and disgusted for the first time. After that, Yuanyi would pester his brother every day, watching him practice swordsmanship with his father's subordinates, his master, and asking him to teach him one and a half moves. Under the indifference of this father's subordinates, they gave him a bamboo sword and told him some basics and formulas of swordsmanship. However, what no one could have imagined was that Yuanyi suddenly rushed towards the powerful enemy in front of him like a violent storm. "Brush" "Touch" "Touch" "Touch" With just four moves, it was easy to knock out the teacher who Yan Sheng had never defeated despite his life. In an instant, he was knocked unconscious. In embarrassment, he became the first person to test the sword of a peerless genius. He has also become the only person in Jiguo Yansheng's memory who has survived Yuan Yi's four moves. This duel was almost devastating to Yan Sheng. His efforts day and night were a joke in front of his monster-like younger brother. And my father also heard about this. After that, Enichi never said anything like "I want to become a samurai" because he hated the feeling of hitting others. But Yan Sheng is yearning for this, and he is anxious and still has one last fantasy - maybe he just mastered the method to become stronger? After repeated questioning, Tsukuni Enichi's words far exceeded his imagination, "A person's lungs will change significantly before an attack. By observing the movement of the lungs, the direction of the bones, and the flow of blood, anyone can easily judge the opponent's movements." It took Yan Sheng a long time to understand, and then he realized that the world in Jiguoyuan's eyes was very different from the world in his own eyes - it turned out that all living things were transparent in Yuan's eyes. This innately transparent world, just like the markings he was born with, is something he was born with and possesses, and his body, which is like a masterpiece of the gods, provides the foundation for the easy and perfect realization of all the skills in the world. But whenever it comes to swordsmanship, the young Yuanyi always looks extremely bored. He just chases his brother and asks him to fly a kite with him. Fighting really means no more to him than playing. Seeing his younger brother who regarded magical skills as child's play, Yan Sheng fell completely into the abyss of self-doubt and despair. He kept swinging the knife day and night, and put in 1000% effort to eliminate even 1% of the flaws. In front of this monster-like younger brother, he became as ridiculous as a tortoise crawling. How wonderful it would be if God could give talents to those who desire them! He was helpless, he hated, why, why did he put in so much hardship, and in front of the word talent, it became so... Funny. At the same time, he also understood what choice the rational father would make after learning about the talent gap between the two. After learning about Yuanyi's powerful talent, it was inevitable that the situation of the two would change. Sometimes fate is so unpredictable. Who would have thought that the brother he once loved would take away everything from him in the blink of an eye. At this time, Yan Sheng was heartbroken and filled with fear. He was afraid that Ji Guoyuan would take away everything from him. In this muddy emotion, he spent the longest night in his life. But that night, Yuanyi knocked on the door and told his brother that his mother had died of illness, and told him that he was about to go to the temple in advance. "I will cherish the piccolo given by my brother as a brother, and I will never give it up even if we are far away from each other." Immediately, he showed the happiest and happiest smile that Iwakatsu had ever seen in his life. The pure Enichi put away the piccolo that showed his brotherly love and left this home that didn't have much warmth. But he didn't know that his brother was only unhappy at this moment - he didn't understand, he didn't understand why Yuanyi was laughing. He regarded the piccolo, which could only produce weird out-of-tune sounds and was tone-deaf, as a useless waste. He watched blankly as his younger brother lowered his head deeply, carrying a backpack with almost nothing, and finally disappeared into the night... But when he was looking for his mother's belongings, he looked through his mother's diary, and finally realized that his younger brother seemed to know that his father was about to change the heir, so he left early. It was only then that Yan Sheng realized that he had never truly understood Yuanyi, when he left voluntarily considering his brother's future, and when he supported his mother who was suffering from a serious illness through the last few years. Wait a minute, I'm suffering from a serious disease! ! ! ! It was then that Yan Sheng realized that Yuan Yi's coquettish behavior when he was a child was actually just supporting his mother who was paraplegic! No matter it was his talent, his love for his mother, or even his noble character far beyond his age, Yan Sheng felt that he had tasted the taste of a miserable defeat At this time, Yan Sheng's head buzzed and his chest hurt. He looked down and saw a smear of blood flowing from the tip of his nose. He was not moved at all, nor was he grateful at all. When [honor], which the samurai regards as more important than [life], is completely defeated, he hates himself like this, and even more hates Yuanyi who shows mercy to him. Please, don't live in this world. Monsters like you should never have been born in this world in the first place. People like you, just existing, disrupt the common sense of the world The elder brother viciously cursed his younger brother with the most despicable and dark malice. The next day, my father learned the whole story and regretted it. He anxiously sent people to the temple to recover Yuanyi, but he was told that Yuanyi did not come to the temple at all. The subsequent development was just as he expected. As soon as the fate of the country disappeared, even though his father ran around to fulfill his mother's last wish, he could not be found... Was he killed by a bear in the forest? Was he kidnapped by a trafficker? In any case, he disappeared after all. In the more than ten years after that, his father died early because he missed his mother. He inherited the family business of the step country, married a wife and had children.       ，        ，，，，，， Under the bright moonlight, Jiguoyuanyi cleanly killed the evil ghost who wiped out his troops with one sword as if he were a god coming down to earth. He easily cut off the evil ghost's head. Under the reflection of the moonlight, it looked so dazzling and unworldly. Iwakatsu was shocked by Enichi's appearance as dazzling as the sun under the bright moonlight, and could not return to his senses for a long time. However, like a god, he lowered his head this time and listened to him tell his apology for being a step too late for not being able to save all his brother's men, but he did not see his brother's internal organs filled with jealousy burning again. Destiny played a big joke on him. The wish of the once strongest warrior was easily fulfilled by his younger brother. This was undoubtedly something he would never tolerate. Seeing the perfect connection between strength and character, the jealousy that had been gradually wiped out by ordinary life, and the desire to be the "strongest warrior" once again filled my brother's internal organs. In order to fulfill one's wish, in order to reach the realm of joining the country, in order to become the strongest samurai. Yan Sheng resolutely abandoned his family business, his wife and children, and became a ghost hunter like Yuanyi. However, Enichi took it as his brother's recognition of the path he was on, and recommended him to the Demon Slayer Squad and the Lord... As soon as he entered the Demon Slayer Corps, Enichi Tsukuni taught him the Breath of the Sun. This skill can inhale a large amount of oxygen, greatly improve one's heart and lung function, and can also emit a light similar to the sun's light from the inhaled oxygen. However, no one, including Iwakatsu, has learned it... So Enichi created the water, rock, fire, thunder, and wind breathing methods based on the Breath of the Sun, as well as everyone's specialties and abilities, and the existing five sword systems. The Demon Slayer Squad reached unprecedented heights. They once curbed the growth of ghosts with their overwhelming force. Although Iwakatsu was unwilling to be unable to learn the Sun Breath, as he became more advanced in the Moon Breath that he created, which was closest to the Sun Breath, the same patterns as Jiguo Enichi's gradually appeared on his forehead. He began to believe that as long as he practiced it, he would reach the height of Enichi sooner or later. "No one can compete with you and me. The inheritance of the breathing method is disappointing." On the plain, Yan Sheng, who was extremely proud of this, said to his younger brother. Iwakatsu, who desperately pursues his younger brother, sometimes thinks about the heir, but no one can learn their brother's breathing method. Jiguo Enichi is strangely optimistic. (No one can learn the breathing method of the sun and moon of their brothers) The breeze blew gently on Yuanyi's face, and he said, "We are not such great people. Maybe at this time, a baby with far more talent than you and me is being born." Yuanyi said with a stiff face and a smile: "We can bid farewell to this world at any time without worries." In this regard, the arrogant brother only felt disgusted and ironic. He did not want to lose to anyone, including his descendants after death. However, all of this slowly changed as time went by, and the swordsmen who turned on the patterns died, and it turned out that the patterns were just a way to extend life from heaven. Even those of them who have tempered their bodies to the extreme cannot bear the side effects of turning on the patterns. No one who has turned on the patterns can live past the age of 25, and this means that Iwakatsu, who is about to turn 25, has no time to catch up with Enichi Tsukuni. And in this confusion and confusion, he met the man, the ultimate goal of the Demon Slayer Squad - Onimusi Muzan. On the rooftop of the beams, Oni Wushi Wuhan said slowly: "As long as you become a ghost, isn't it easy to solve it? As long as you become a ghost, you can have unlimited time. You want to practice your sword skills to the extreme, and I also want to turn a swordsman who has practiced the breathing method into a ghost. What will happen? You are different from them, you have the right to choose, what do you think." Faced with the bargaining chip proposed by Wu Kai with eternal life, Yan Sheng, whose deadline was approaching, could not resist the temptation. He finally took that step and drank the blood. It took three days and three nights to transform into the sword ghost, from him to it. It became one of the first, last and strongest strings.                  [，]      ， As its recommender, Enichi Tsukuni was expelled by the Demon Slayers, and the Tsukoku clan implicated by Iwakatsu fell into decline. For hundreds of years, they made a living by logging in the mountains. Muzan, who originally didn't take the Demon Slayers seriously, experienced the battle in the bamboo forest and felt the same fear of being dominated by Yuiyi like Iwakatsu. After a lucky escape, he came up with the idea of ​​forming 12 Ghost Moons to fight against the Demon Slayers. With a body that is always at its peak, coupled with the special way of becoming stronger by sucking human blood, Hei Shimo's state of mind gradually stabilized, and that annoying younger brother should have long since been wiped out by stripes because of his fragile human body... (End of Part 1)

I've read all the updated ones. It's well written. It's a very well-written scene in the fan novel. Everything about the plot is very interesting. The integration of combat power is also good. There is a strange feeling about the protagonist's combat power. The abilities are all great, but the people who use them are useless. None of them are proficient. What is the protagonist's strongest ability at this stage? Is it a vampire, a sword skill, a vampire plus physical combat, or a spell? You have to describe it clearly Looking at Xia Xianyi's various abilities, they are all used, but they are of little use to me. The method of defeating the enemy is not clear I don't understand. The part where your Chanel fights the protagonist is very good The part where Hu Yong fights a real person is also pretty good. Why is your protagonist's crotch stretched so badly when he plays the first string? Well, and the temple scene To put it bluntly, is the protagonist currently mastering Q or W? Now it can be seen that the protagonist in your novel now masters all four skills, but it seems to be of no use Good luck, the writing is good, and you have your own ideas. Come on 🤓

Cute Nezuko

The image is pretty much what I imagined.

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