Los Angeles Detective

This is what I felt after ordering all the copies. This work is worth watching. The author referred to many American dramas and real-life cases. Overall, it feels like an American TV drama and criminal investigation film. The author is also trying his best to write different types of cases to bring different experiences to readers. At the same time, although the novel is mainly based on cases, thanks to the author's excellent character creation, the daily interactions between the characters are also very interesting, and life and family add a touch of warmth to the work. The only regret is that the author is in poor health and has to rest, but as a partial unit drama, it is not surprising that the novel stops wherever it goes. I hope the author can continue writing Luke's story. Personal evaluation: Recommended

It ended unexpectedly. I thought it would be about Luke standing in a high position in the entire Los Angeles Police Department, but the author is not in good health, so he should take a good rest, take care of himself, and bless you ~ Thank you to the author for bringing this novel, thank you for your hard work ~

The very second point in the design of the story of committing suicide in exchange for insurance is the contrast between the two families. One is an upper-middle-class family. What wealth brings is not happiness, but betrayal and calculation; Although this does not represent everyone, it is very representative. People are self-centered, so as time changes and the environment changes, the feelings between people are not static. So I never expect to last forever, I only cherish the beauty of the present, understand the possibilities of the future, and try to avoid bad possibilities, just do my best. I hope Paipan will continue to work hard and write better stories!

I've been watching TM for half a month after charging 6 yuan, please work harder, please 😭

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Happy 20th birthday to Dianniang

Why do you like books with European and American backgrounds? Because you can write freely, as long as they don't involve domestic issues, they are rarely blocked.

I found that the protagonist often uses the experience of the Chinese police to act in the United States. This is actually wrong, because the national conditions of the two countries are fundamentally different. The Chinese police's experience can easily be used by the American police. American police work in pairs. Once they encounter a suspect, their first reaction is to point a gun at the suspect and shout. If the suspect disobeys orders and makes abnormal movements of his hands and feet, the police have the right to shoot directly. When the suspect made a gesture of surrender, a policeman stepped forward and handcuffed the suspect. A policeman kept pointing a gun at the suspect not far away. If there was only one person, he would call his companions to help. He only had one life. Anyone who dared to step forward and handcuff the suspect alone would definitely be called a lone hero, and this kind of person is most likely to die. Generally, the police will not arrest suspects in crowded places for fear of accidentally killing passers-by. If a suspect wants to escape in a crowded place, the police will not rush forward to arrest him at close range. They will keep an eye on the suspect's escape route and call nearby police to contain him.

Since it is a novel, I think we can add a small climax and bury a big main plot. Pinkerton is very good. It can leave a long-span suspense, similar to the plot of the American TV series True Detective And I think the supporting characters in the early stage were quite plump, but now it feels like it has become a ruthless case-solving machine. . . Xiao Hei can continue. What about David? Where's Raymond? Where is Jenny? . . . I think everyone has their own story, which allows the protagonist to continue to inadvertently intervene in their lives, just like the American TV series "Psychic Detective". I think the interaction between the protagonist and these people can also have a lot of plots to explore, and I am also like the old man before. I think the protagonist should have several core skills now (I personally think that marksmanship, interrogation, and on-site investigation are the advantages of the protagonist system). In terms of describing firearms, Free Country Rifle Tactical Equipment I think this area can be explored in depth (I personally am a tactical equipment person... I can describe missing cases in the wild jungle... After all, detective novels should not only have the thrill of solving crimes, but I think the thriller element is also very important...). Personally, I think we can create a very talented villain who can closely follow the protagonist at every step. . . .

After a lot of playing, I just saw that the protagonist drew a criminal investigation sketch card. I have some suggestions. Don't let the protagonist's skills be too comprehensive. He can be an all-rounder, but he must not be proficient in them all. Giving this proficient skill to other characters can enrich other characters, instead of the protagonist doing all the work, and other characters being incompetent and reduced to background. As long as the protagonist has maxed out the two skills of force and reasoning, and then interacts with other tools with proficient skills such as portrait painters, the story can come alive. It would be boring if the protagonist did all the work. Now the entire protagonist group has a description part. The protagonist does too much work, which affects the impact of the supporting characters. Refer to the composition of the main and supporting characters of the Spiritual Book Detective. If you want to enrich the characters, you have to be willing to give skills to the supporting characters, especially the skills of the tool people. The supporting characters can have various personalities, but The supporting characters must have proficient skills, just like the skills of Xiao Hei's network resources. Forensics, portraitists, SWAT personnel, SWAT officers, snipers, blasters, and assaulters are all individually created, and one to two are set for each person. Just one specialized skill is enough. You don't want to let the protagonist do all the work. Two groups of people will serve as thugs for the protagonist and play a supporting role in the battle plot. Xiao Hei, and the second generation of officers are responsible for finding people, and the other two people with characteristics and specialized skills will be responsible for the battle. If everyone can perform their duties, then the novel will have a much better look and feel, and the characters will be fuller. Don't skimp on skills. The protagonist should be a brain with strong force, enriching the tool man. The current character creation is still too thin. The reason why it is thin is because A tool man cannot play the role of a tool. The forensic doctor cannot just give a report, give the forensic doctor a name, have a story related to him, and dig into the past of the character. However, as a portrait artist, if the protagonist has basic skills, he can only use them to describe the appearance of the prisoner in more detail. Going too far is not enough. Don't overdo it. The protagonist can be a wise man who knows everything, but he cannot act like a fool and do all the work. It is very important to let other people in the police force support them like a master, give them skills and let them work‼ ️

I have been subscribing and reading. The author's writing is very good. However, as someone who has been exposed to the English environment for a long time, I feel that the word "yeah" is too dramatic. At first, I can replace "yeah" with "yeap" and "yes", but it is a bit overwhelming and it does not match the character. There are many words for affirmation in English. In addition to the above, there is OK, which is the most commonly used. There are also okey, okey-doke, of course, absolutely, surely, or very slightly, you can use Uh huh, children can use yep, just one yeah every time, which is too funny. I saw that the authors of several recent photos have made some changes in this aspect, and I would like to make some suggestions on this, hoping to help the authors.

Md It's such a pity that the book is of such high quality that it has been completed. It has the flavor of an American drama. The characters and the descriptions of the cases are all of high quality. I think a sequel can definitely be made.

A very good book, with a smooth plot and good character development. At the same time, I also gave some opinions and chatted casually. 1. The protagonist is promoted too fast, level one a month, which is impossible in any country, and it doesn't have to be so fast. If you get promoted further, you will be the deputy director. It is impossible for the deputy director to go to the scene. Currently, the main theme of this book is investigation. In fact, the position of detective is very good and more suitable. He will be promoted to captain in the middle and later stages. At the end, just mention what position he will be promoted to at the end. Of course, if the investigation turns to officialdom later, just pretend I didn't say anything. 2. The system seems to be a bit broken at the moment. The protagonist is not short of money, and the bulk of it is money. Cards that are not powerful are of no use, while cards that are too powerful will cause them to jump easily. It is recommended that there be more cards that strengthen the protagonist's personal abilities so that readers can look forward to it more. 3. It is easy to feel tired after consecutive criminal cases. It is good to have more daily life. It can be more daily life for teammates, and the supporting characters can be more vivid. In addition, Pinkerton can be used to intersperse some human commissions to solve the protagonist's economic problems and expand interpersonal relationships. The key is to switch to another case.

Have you watched the news? Information about hundreds of undercover police officers in Los Angeles was leaked by the mayor. The reality is stranger than fiction.

It's over, take a good rest and think about your next work. Personally, I like to watch works with foreign backgrounds, firstly because I want to see different customs and customs, and secondly because most foreign film and television works have a good mental foundation. 3. It can be written about chaos, the domestic security risk is relatively small, the conflict cannot be considered intense, and it is boring to use words but not actions. There is no energy to fight in the nest, and the powerful ones have to use the resources of foreigners. 4 The most important thing is that foreign gun battle suits are interesting to fight against. I personally like guns very much. It's too expensive to play in reality, it's better to enjoy it by reading novels. I think the next film can try to write about a wave of Thailand, a period of chaos in Thailand, and the relationship between all parties is complicated. 2. You can hold a gun in Thailand. 3. The customs are also interesting. There are also many film and television works from various parties. Other East Asian countries do not have such serious conflicts. Those with great conflicts are not as safe. There is a list on the Internet saying that Bangkok is the most livable city in Asia. It is hard to say anything else. The scenery is no problem. 4. There are many Chinese people. Compared with Malaysia, although there are fewer people who can speak Chinese, Thailand is not a green country. 5. Occultism is fascinating. In bloody and violent cases, it is quite good to add a bit of Thai local religious occultism. It may not have mysterious power, but it can allow criminals to kill people according to occultism, Buddhist amulets, head-dropping masters, kingship, color industry, fraud, US military bases, cultural collisions, complex situations bring wonderful stories. I think this country is very expressive. Just a suggestion, it doesn't matter where I write. But this time, we really have to think about the character of the protagonist. Passive personalities are not suitable for being protagonists. Make the protagonist's character more sharp and bloodthirsty. The protagonist's side job shouldn't be solving crimes. Boxers, competition shooters, anglers, etc. Are no more interesting than solving crimes at work and solving crimes after get off work. Finally, I wish you a great sale in your new work. 🤭😃

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This is really the most comfortable book I have read in the American police subcategory. It is quite logical, the main character is not too big, and the female characters are also very comfortable to read. Unfortunately, the author is not in good health and basically had to undergo surgery. It's a pity.

When I was reading this book, I saw some buddies saying how dangerous it is for the US police to attack them. In fact, for black people, it is equally dangerous to see US police officers attacking them. Neither side can afford to lose. Take a recent popular video and explain in text how two malicious American police officers can kill an honest black man. A black officer was driving on the road, and the U. S. Police told him to stop. Because the road was dark at the time, the black officer drove for a few minutes longer and stopped only when he reached a brightly lit gas station. This is the background. Then, the US police held up their guns and asked the black man to pull down the window. The black man had a gun in his center, so he had to stretch his hands out. The black man complied, and then the US police asked him to get out of the car. (This is the first trap, because at this time, the black man has his hands out of the car window. As long as he dares to retract into the car, unbuckle his seat belt or open the door, the US police can force the suspect to pull out the weapon and empty the magazine.) The black man loudly said that he could not open the door with his hands raised, so the US police directly sprayed pepper, causing the black man to lose his vision and ability to resist. (This is the second trap. As long as the suspect cannot control his hand and rubs his eyes at this time, the US police can still use the suspect's hand to pull out the weapon and empty the magazine) But Brother Hei still stretched out his hands and did not dare to move, so the US police took him out of the car, searched him and pinned him to the ground. After going through the process, they found that Brother Hei was really invulnerable and had no choice but to let him go. Let me talk about the background. Why did the black officer have to drive to the gas station when the police asked him to stop? First of all, there are some criminals in the United States who will disguise themselves as police officers, ask for parking in the wild in darkness, and then take advantage of the darkness to kill people and steal money. So Ami, after the police ask you to stop, you can drive to a brightly lit place and park. And if Brother Hei really parked his car in a dark place, he could just make up any reason to shoot, and Brother Hei had no legal countermeasures. So in this story there are three attempts by the American police to trap and kill Brother Hei. Without any experience or practice, they really don't know how to die. There are scum among black people, and there are scum among American police officers. This leads to the fact that the more honest black people and American police officers are, the more likely they are to be harmed by the scum of the other party, and over time it becomes a zero-sum game.

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I really like books with big plots, especially The Detective from the Future! This book is another detective novel, and I can read wonderful stories one after another. It's great! I will first read Paipan Dada's other books. This book will be automatically subscribed first. I hope Dada will write more. If you write books for a lifetime, I will pay for them for a lifetime. 😚😚

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It's still good-looking, but it sucks.

I can't believe it ended like this. I'm so disappointed.

If it's closed, please tell me. I will remove this book from the bookshelf. After all, I keep this book just waiting for news about new books.

This American Police book is pretty good, you can read it when you are short of books 🥱

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Come on, author. I haven't read too much yet. I hope the updates will be helpful. I really like your books

I listened to the book at work at first, and it sounded really good. However, I kept hearing more than 200 of them. When I went to Las Vegas, the way they wrote about Daisy made me uncomfortable. I even went to read it specifically to know if I married him in the end. But I'm not just a runner, and I didn't even show up much in the later stages. The first one sounded really good to me, but the second one really didn't sound good to me and didn't suit me.

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