A Spellcasting Qi Refiner Plunders the Heavens

The idea is good, but it's not visually appealing.

The second world of Chen Laosi from the Taibai family (∗❛ั∀❛ั∗)✧*. Has Taibai finally started to ascend to a higher dimension? (Finally someone is writing about this genre!! Each world in Taibai's works could practically be a book in itself! But why are all his readers so poor? (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

It seems the readers of this novel haven't broadened their perspective. They exaggerate and overstate things. Multiverse, countless parallel universes... The Milky Way galaxy is a barred spiral galaxy with a diameter of approximately 100,000 to 180,000 light-years, composed of stars, nebulae, interstellar gas, and interstellar dust.

To be honest, the first conflict was poorly designed. Long Xuehua was incredibly stupid, and she dragged everyone else in the sect down with her. Before advancing to Qi Refining, cultivators could choose to take out family loans. These Qi Refining cultivators, for the resources promised by a princess of a dynasty and her beauty, actually went to kill disciples from another sect who had reached Qi…

Is this a machine-written novel? Probably automatically generated.

The premise is alright, but the writing needs improvement! I've read about ten chapters, and it's all written like a system's ledger, completely lacking any sense of immersion. Reading your work doesn't feel like writing a novel; it's more like keeping accounts.

Dude, you're from the Black Forum, and you already said Fei Fei was just a tool for you a long time ago, and then what? I'm totally confused after reading part 92. It says you developed feelings for her, and then you owe her a favor and have to repay it later? What does that mean? I don't even dare to read on.

A diary-like novel, like keeping accounts.

A nonsensical, illegible novel; I have no idea what it's trying to say.

Indeed, the writing style is like a diary entry, lacking any appeal.