Simulation: Start with One Person

I have been squeezing my strength, and even for the sake of squeezing my strength, the third reward was not written out, nor what the result was. The fourth time I simply refused to receive the reward without looking at it, and even made a Kamen Rider Japanese anime at the beginning. Then I met Na Dotong when I went out. He was overflowing with lust and wanted to save Chen Duo. He was inexplicably unwilling to do anything. He was doing all kinds of things there. His mind was very immature, his IQ was low and his personality was like a little kid.

The book is okay, but I have a few complaints: 1. You didn't choose "One Hundred Years of Pure Cultivation" out of the three options, but chose a drawing that can't immediately improve your combat power 2. The protagonist is too casual

The author pretended to be dead and didn't answer. You could tell at a glance that he was a product of the studio, but this also had an advantage. He didn't seem to care whether you scolded him or not.

In one sentence, it's a downgrade, it's a cool article, it's downgraded, everyone understands it.

The writing is messy, and you can tell at a glance that the author has no outline and writes wherever he thinks. Creativity is wasted

The previous writing was very messy, but I preferred to watch the development, so I read it slowly and patiently. As a result, the simulation turned out to be a simulation. I actually traveled through the fox demon and the little matchmaker slowly experienced it. In an instant, the book collapsed, which violated the original intention. It was obviously a simulation, so the simulation would be fine. I don't know what the author thought?

The writing was too messy and gave me a headache to read, and I always felt that the author's portrayal of the company was too outrageous. According to the simulation in Chapter 17, the protagonist had a mechanical limb and was actually assassinated. It was too outrageous. The author probably didn't know how meaningful this thing was to ordinary disabled people. And according to one person's world view, the country's attitude towards aliens is to strictly control the population red line, which means that one person's world still belongs to the world of ordinary people, so the exoskeleton armor and Gundam developed by the protagonist are not of great significance to the country and the army. If such a talent is discovered by the country, how can it be possible for the company to take care of it, and wouldn't it be good to let him do scientific research? That would also allow other strangers to assassinate him.

It's boring. The beginning of the writing is good, but later it is revealed that the author is a novice author. To sum up, there is no main line and the writing is too messy. The author obviously wants to come out one by one, and he has not even written an outline.

Recently, there were a lot of frogs popping up last time, and now there are a bunch of simulations popping up. What will it be next time?

Literary youth is not a disease, reading is really terrible

I want to say that the male protagonist was not pretentious enough when crossing the cliff of Tianshi Mansion. If I were to write it, it would definitely be like this: I saw Fang Rui grabbing the sling connecting the two ends of the cliff and pulling it gently. The ground on the other end of the cliff crashed straight over and merged with the cliff at Fang Rui's feet. It was as if there had never been a cliff before. When everyone was dumbfounded, the male protagonist stepped across the opposite land, turned around, smiled at everyone and said, "Everyone, Tianshi Mansion Let's continue the test, it's also a test of your strength." After saying that, he kicked the ground, and there was a roar. The entire land under Fang Rui's feet moved to the opposite side, and the disappeared deep valley reappeared. The sling connecting the two ends straightened with a bang. Fang Rui turned around, leaving everyone who was at a loss and walked towards the back mountain of Tianshi Mansion.

The first part of this book is okay, but the second part has too many threads. I felt inexplicably irritated while reading it, and I skipped some chapters without even wanting to read them. I feel that the author's stall is too big and there is no priority.

The author's writing is not bad, but the content is a mess. Blind guess at what the author wrote: 1 The story has no main line, and the author doesn't know what he wants to express. 2 This book has no outline, or there is no outline in the middle of writing. I write whatever comes to my mind later. 3 In the early stage, I really wanted to write well, but in the later stage, there was no content and it was just too messy to save the day.

What are the benefits of being a Hokage? ? Staying so long? Are you still planning to bring people back? ? ?

It's all a mess, I guess it won't be written for long.

It is so poisonous that a twenty-year-old white prostitute died from the poison.

Simulation, it's either a studio or a studio

I feel that pig's feet are silly. There is a simulation system. I can quickly accumulate experience and strength first. Within a few days, I started wandering around. I am really convinced. Every time you simulate, you are accumulating strength. Even if you find a company, you can still run if you have the strength. After accumulating, you will have nothing to lose, and you have to waste time in the early stage. It's really no brainer. Wouldn't it be better to study your own skills and practice Qi?