I Will Become Stronger When I Fulfill My Last Wish

The author is a person with personality, and his writing is okay. At least before he met Young Master Ye, it was a good book. But after he defeated Lin Tianlong, the plot of "Fighting to Break the Sky" was very mysterious, and then he met love. I have met her twice in total. The key is love at first sight, not just love at first sight. In fact, when I saw Fang Qingxue and the protagonist Fa Xiang thinking about each other, I already acquiesced that this was the heroine, but the author did not give any hint that they would have emotional scenes. Hint, I thought the villain would be Fang Qinghan, and I guessed that the second time they met would be after entering the Patron Sect, but obviously I guessed wrong, and the progress was so fast that I was caught off guard. I thought the first one was Fu The second side of the story is about connecting the past and the future, introducing the villain and foreshadowing it. The third side completely detonates the conflict between the two parties, and officially confirms that they are in love with each other. In short, the author has condensed what you want to write too thickly, and I am choked anyway.

{"NickName":"Fat Bookworm","UserId":376254424} We must remember the reality. Novels are mainly light novels, and they are all fictitious. Don't really sink yourself into them. They are just some beautiful expectations of human beings. If you write like this, it will directly destroy the mentality of many of us. Do you know? It's equivalent to saying something wrong, the head is not the head, and the butt is not the butt. In fact, it was fine before Chapter 73, but it collapsed immediately after Chapter 73. The previous text is completely inconsistent with the later text. Of course, it doesn't mean that your writing is not good, it is very good, but can you give him a step-by-step process? You are equivalent to fighting a war one second, struggling to survive, and getting ready to sleep in the next 0.1 Seconds. The gap is too big. If you still believe in this kind of once-in-a-lifetime plot, you can actually open another book and start writing the beginning again, with one protagonist and two routes. Which route is inspired, just write whichever route you plan. Don't want a book like this, where the personalities and plot lines of the two protagonists are lumped together.

No matter how good the writing is in the front, it will be worse when compared with the writing in the back. Starting from the emotional scene, the following plot seems to be a different person. If in the front it was Yu Gong moving mountains and overcoming difficulties one by one, in the back it would be driving an excavator and carrying TNT to open up mountains. It has become a chronicle-style novel. If Golden Finger doesn't dig it out, there will be a big boss descended from the sky to take care of everything.

I re-read it. It's not as good as the first half. I won't talk about the relationship. It's a failure. It's not well written. Joining the Patron Sect is also a mess. The master is crazy to pull the protagonist back to the right path. The protagonist is obsessed with fighting for power and winning over the outer disciples below. Putting the cart before the horse, but in the author's writing, he is very smart. The master's wife starts to fear this kind of protagonist. It's outrageous In addition, the smartest people understand You have to be clumsy, be small-minded, and have small ideas that can be seen through by others. For example, the protagonist gets a huge benefit and has to play both sides. This will bring endless prejudice to the people above. I don't know if the author has ever worked. For example, if you usually play tricks, or be lazy, or quibble, even if you are right, you just did it once, or you were right in the first place, as long as you are found out, it will bring endless prejudice. Sometimes I feel that you know how to be humble, and you explain things clearly as soon as you get started, and the protagonists win the trust, and then they start playing both sides, bullying the superiors and hiding the truth, and putting the cart before the horse. Maybe the author wants to change this situation, but judging from your outline, even betraying the master for the second time has not changed this I feel that the author was influenced by other books and did not calm down. He had many ideas but was not overly good. In addition, he repeatedly jumped between being loyal to himself and catering to the readers, which made him feel very confused. I actually suggest that you write your own things completely and stop caring about the opinions of those who did not read them before. This way you will not feel uncomfortable writing and watching.

The layout is small, the start is good, but the plot goes astray starting from the killing of the master. The starter is established, but the golden finger is gone later. Did the author forget the title of the book and the protagonist needs to join the sect? Only fools practice hard. I, Lu Sheng, rely on talent and hard work. Golden Finger can directly acquire the skills of others who have practiced hard for decades, so why do I need to practice the Kung Fu myself? The best way to use the Qi Men Yin Men Technique is to deceive, frame up, and make a last wish. For example, two geniuses or masters who originally have conflicts, and the protagonist adds fire to both sides, making both sides think that the other side did it, and they can gain decades of achievements from both sides at once. Moreover, the so-called geniuses cultivated by the sect since childhood are not as powerful as the old people. Some old people were once geniuses. The protagonist can look for these to start. After practicing the skills for so many years, it is just that the life span cannot bear it. If you touch the cultivation level of any one, is it not a casual abuse? What's more interesting than a hairy kid? It has only been 20 or 30 years since I was young, so where can I put it to kill the immortal? Mortal flow? It's an old cliche. Remember the title of the book. It's such a powerful golden finger. The writing is so useless. It's polished. I hope the next book will be good.

I'm a little doubtful. Has the author changed? From the decisive killing at the beginning to the unprovoked love now, the apprenticeship plot? And does the protagonist have a brain tumor? Tell me about your experience of killing your master? I spoke about my experience without any reservations. I feel like it was poisoned to death. You should say that you were forced to attack innocent people. In order to clean up the family for the master's request, you also added superfluous things and said that you knew he was his master. Were your decisive killings and witty survival at the beginning just a pretense? And your golden finger is so strong Whitewashing is not about making yourself look like a fool, you can be a person like a generous martial saint Start from being an outer disciple, disguise yourself as a generous good person, collect corpses for masters, and fulfill your wishes If the love story for no reason just confuses me This apprenticeship story made me poisoned to death There is also a story about the master asking him questions If you don't believe me, just let me go back and be an outer disciple. Who cares that I cheated all the way from outer disciple? Isn't it better to be appreciated by others? You have to live like a dog, but you also have to talk about the scenery of being a dog in other people's homes?

Why are many people bothered now? Some authors write emotional dramas. This book is a typical example. It is inexplicable and confusing. They suddenly rape a woman. If you don't know how to write, don't write it. Such a simple thing must be made so complicated. I just want to say: Yo-yo

It feels okay, although the sudden appearance of a female protagonist is a bit awkward, but it is understandable. In the whole book, this female protagonist is a little bit nicer to this male protagonist. Looking at other people in the book, the protagonist's family, master, friends, boss, senior brothers and sisters, passers-by, no one regards the protagonist as one of their own. The protagonist just likes a normal person, but this female protagonist does not feel like a good thing. Her feelings for the protagonist are like finding someone to have fun before getting married.

It feels like the protagonist has been controlled by various control methods, and even in the Dharma phase state, is it possible for an individual to make a few mocking remarks? It feels weird, but the book is okay.

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To be honest, the previous ones were very good, but the one about Ten Thousand Years Later was a huge failure. After the failure, I got out of control. What was written was all about. The descriptions after entering the Patron Sect were also messy and not attractive anymore. It feels like the author has completely lost his train of thought.

The protagonist has been working as a gangster for so many years and is decisive and ruthless. Suddenly he falls in love at first sight. It's like changing the character of the protagonist. It feels like he has changed from surviving in the wasteland to rural love. The author hopes to pave the way for the next book.

The character of the protagonist is so well written in the front, but there is no foreshadowing in the back. Do you believe that a person who has suffered all kinds of hardships will fall in love at first sight? He is also a person who bullied the protagonist a little in the past. The emotional line can be rewritten from the time he entered the sect. There is time to lay the groundwork. The more I read, the more I can't stand it. I ordered two or three chapters and still got into the original state. It's ridiculous.

Chapter 77: Love at First Sight suddenly comes. I will read your next book, this one, or forget it.

I specifically subscribed to a chapter to comment. I originally thought the protagonist's character was from the GU real-life series (maybe not that ruthless). The sudden emotional scene in Chapter 74 made this character fall apart 😥 It's not that I don't want to watch the emotional drama, it's just that it really doesn't match the character of the protagonist. I saw the author's reply saying, "Life is terrible, I hope fantasy works can be a little more perfect." I can understand the general meaning, but a life that is too perfect is the failure of the novel. Besides, the protagonist's first half experience is not perfect, so why bother to make up the character. I will not hesitate to guess that the author may have had this kind of experience of not being able to love in his life (maybe). I rarely write comments. The previous article is really good. I hope the author will get better and better. From now on, it's better not to stick to such rules. It's troublesome to change things. However, I still have to withdraw 😐, best wishes.

Later, did someone change the writing...

Sudden change of style, starting from Chapter 73, be mentally prepared

It's no longer possible, the book is useless. I would like to ask the author, have you read the outline carefully? If I were to write the title according to your outline, it shouldn't be this. Have you re-read the introduction to this book you wrote before? In fact, it is also an outline. There is also a sudden gag, which is quite sudden. It's nothing, and it doesn't affect the viewing. The main thing is that the sudden glance at Wannian is quite funny! According to the outline you sent, you won't be able to write. If you must write according to the outline you sent, you might as well start a new book. Write out the outline of what you want. If you read your book now, fewer and fewer people will read it, and there will be more and more holes in it. Finally, let me tell you, if I didn't want to write this, I wouldn't reward you at all.

I specially subscribed to a chapter to post. I just want to say something, don't make trouble like this in the next book. I will still come back to support you when you open a new book and maintain the status before Chapter 74, but forget it now. I wish the author to write better and better.

It collapsed before I even paid for it. In the early stage, the protagonist was helpless, struggling to survive, killing and setting fire to all possible means. I can still understand, after all, he is an undercover agent in troubled times, or a multi-faceted undercover agent. The feeling of a person looking up to the light from the abyss is really well written. Then suddenly there was a fight because the next door was too noisy, and a rich second-generation man was quarreling with his fiancée, which led to the phrase "a glance for ten thousand years." I felt something was wrong here, and it was not in line with the character of the protagonist at all. Sure enough, the protagonist immediately fell in love with a girl from a super big family. This girl also has a fiancé who is a super hot pepper. She was born with a certain body shape and her family is so awesome. The two families must get married, and the protagonist swears in his heart. Do you still need to watch the plot behind this? It's not like I haven't watched the Qiong Yao drama from twenty years ago. The author also promised several individual chapters that it was an enjoyable novel and not abusive, please don't give up.

Before Chapter 73, I guess I hired a ghostwriter to write it very well, but after Chapter 74, I guess the author started writing it myself. Inexplicably, people who have looked at each other for thousands of years and have the same appearance should get married? Have some brains. This does not mean that the protagonist's skills cannot approach women, but his cautious character in the precarious days can be shaken by love.

Chapter 74 finale! There's nothing to see in the back! Extremely poisonous! ! ! !

Goodbye🙏🙏🙏

Chapters 74 and 73 are very well written, so there is no need to read the following chapters and think that the book is unfinished. Extremely poisonous! ! ! ! Be careful! ! !

In my personal opinion, the emotional drama was too awkward The middle section was quite well written. When I returned to Guoshanzong, the more I wrote, the less I could stand it.

The author can think of some emotional drama, but you don't even know what it means to look at each other for ten thousand years. Do you think that you can look at each other for ten thousand years? The woman is good-looking and can look at each other for ten thousand years, but the man is ugly and he is not a good person. There is nothing attractive about him. And then the woman only looks at each other for ten thousand years? You might as well just write about the marriage of system drinks.

There is a problem with the pacing. The protagonist is kept being suppressed, going from one pit to another. The protagonist's life is miserable, and the readers are tired and a little discouraged. It is better to let the protagonist practice steadily for a few chapters, or to pretend to be sexy and slap him in the face than to cheat him repeatedly. Reading is comfortable when you are relaxed

I hate Master and his family more and more. . . I wipe

Although I don't subscribe to many. . . But can you please stop scheming with those people from the master's sect? . . So hypocritical. . . All of them

Is it yourself first?