I Feel so Brave After Getting the Simulator

After getting the simulator, I was really frustrated I wrote the settings carefully, wrote the characters with my feet, and mixed the plot with poison I put it down after reading about forty chapters, let me share my personal thoughts Overall evaluation: Although it can be seen that the author is very careful in writing settings and describing his own world, he has made a lot of low-level mistakes In terms of settings: Although there are often a few in one breath. The pile of extraordinary and simulator settings made me dizzy, which slightly affected the reading experience, but it can be seen that the author is serious in this regard, which is also the motivation for me to read Chapter 40. Although there are some problems, but overall it is a good thing that does not hide its flaws In terms of characters: the author does not describe girls but uses their strengths and avoids weaknesses. The portrayal of the heroine in the first few chapters is really unlikable, but the heroine in the later chapters is less described and makes her look more cute. It can be said that the male protagonist has no personal charm at all. I forgot what he looked like when I put down the book, and I didn't even bother to comment Plot: With all due respect, I doubt whether the author has a detailed outline, the rhythm is too weird. Generally, online novels develop according to events, starting (initiating events), continuing (encountering problems, upgrading, ambushes), turning (fighting, cheating, pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger), ending (rewards for dropping treasures), and the interspersed points in the middle are usually a comfortable part to watch. However, in the simulator text, in each part of the inheritance, there will be multiple simulated settlements, which brings the excitement of the integration of rewards. In this book, what I saw was that it started and continued and continued (the part about killing the assassin) and then I couldn't stand it anymore. More than forty chapters later, I still can't see any hope in the first big dilemma. I am always frustrated, my patience has been exhausted, and the author is still spending money to break the situation. The things given by the simulator are said to be more awesome than the other, and the actual things are more useless than the last. They are not exciting at all. Reading novels is more frustrating than reality. There are several other poisonous points: the performance of the heroine at the beginning, the simulator's deduction (even if the protagonist cannot perform well, it is better than the simulator), the protagonist's performance in fighting (is this all your sword master experience?) And other issues, but compared with the dull plot, it seems not a big problem.

The more detailed and complicated the combat system is, the more loopholes there will be, and it will consume the enthusiasm for reading. On the contrary, the combat system (attribute panel, and skill introduction) should not appear too much, and should not be so detailed that attribute points are accurate to decimal points, or skill damage percentages, or things like guaranteed hits, which have no reference value. Instead, blur the settings of combat skills and attribute points, and focus on describing combat processing. We readers will automatically imagine the combat scenes. Rather than pale skill values.

First

First of all, thank you to my friends who have been chasing books. Because the writing is really bad, how bad is it? I can't stand it even from the beginning. The plot is not prioritized, and the settings are thrown out without any follow-up. What's more exciting is that I finally encountered one and was dragged away again. I'm sorry, I'm really a newbie, so I didn't present the story to you in the best possible way. But I'm not here to make a fool of myself, or to give an explanation, let alone a eunuch's statement before running away. I just want to talk to you about something else. First, the development of the story. I wrote a lot of things that I wanted to express before, but it diluted the main line and diluted the fun. What I want to write is actually the process of deciding the only savior (competing for the throne) among a group of saviors who are like kings in a world that is twisted and on the verge of destruction, like a game of chicken. In the eyes of the uninformed, the protagonist is a husky who has mixed up with the wolves, but in the eyes of the insider, he is a real boss (because of the dream simulation). That's a bit far. According to the outline, the protagonist just picks up the king's ring at the end of the first volume, and it's not until the third volume that he truly makes up his mind to become the king. I am writing this to give myself a way to prevent my writing from going astray, and also to tell everyone that I will try my best to write exciting stories, but the story will not develop too fast, nor will it be too easy (after all, it is soul-like, light and easy to overcome, but the ending must be a happy ending.) In addition, I will change the title of the book after it is put on the shelves. The current title is really cool. I would like to apologize to my investment friends for putting it on the shelves. I have not had enough time recently, and the writing is not good. My idea is to finish the first volume and put it on the shelves around August. The second is to talk about the setting issue. There are many settings in the front, which are redundant and impractical. They have no other use except affecting reading. They may be deleted in subsequent modifications and will not appear again in the future. Thank you again for your patience in reading this. With such poor grades, I didn't know how to cut the paper, so I had to be mentally depressed for two days and correct it while writing. We strive to bring you an interesting story with a better reading experience.

Why do you have to write the follower as a tsundere? The kind of tsundere that gets in the way.

After traveling through a brothel, he was caught, beaten and killed. The plot of the first ten chapters is like this, leaving tens of thousands of words of setting.

The logic is not very smooth. I know it is smooth in the author's world view, but I don't have the chakra in Naruto. Can the author make the next book more approachable? What you write is like a combination of Japanese harem and scar literature.

Is the setting of follower cards too redundant for the emulator? Or is the follower card specifically used to recruit a harem?

After reading it, I was a little confused in the early stage, but as Andy's positioning and usage of the simulator became clearer and clearer, it became more and more beautiful and exciting 😁 Also The author will update soon! It's getting better!

Although it is said that the author's glory should be based on attracting people through his works, not kneeling in the comment area. But what I'm saying is, please read a few more chapters, it's really great after chapter 40.

I watched the latest update in one go, and found no problems. I watched it smoothly. Is it because I don't have to wait for updates? I was almost misled by the comments. On one point, there seems to be no definition and related change methods for soul harmony. Others are quite detailed. Some damage percentages seem unnecessary at the moment, because there are no conversion formulas and damage formulas later. As a reader, I can't convert them at all, so I might as well just write about a small improvement xx. Or just add the first attribute simply and straightforwardly, and readers can directly compare the attribute differences. However, because the attribute conversion rate and skill multiplier are unknown, and there is no actual comparison meaning, the impact of skills that have multiplied damage is still very large. So now the only intuitive and reliable comparison for readers is the grade, because the grade is suppressed and the price is relatively guaranteed. As a result, the previous settings are useless now. Maybe we can slowly improve and provide details in the future.

I don't understand, am I not serious?

The writing is too mysterious, it looks too high-minded, and there is no specific information. It is very philosophical.

I feel that this book is a bit delayed by the ordinary title. No matter whether other readers like the style of this book or not, this book is really special and definitely not as ordinary as the name. I hope that the book review can be seen by more new readers and have a look at the dozens of free chapters to get a feel for it.

Newbie, new book, I hope the story I want to write is the story you want to read.

The author has achieved great success, he broke the chicken and was reborn, come and see, come and see