Becoming a God Across the Heavens

I came here from the author's first book, and there are a few things I want to say to the author: First, the character of the protagonist is too negative, he is simply the biggest old demon in the world. Why do you say that? The protagonist is selfish and harms both good and bad people. In the world of White Snake, he keeps saying that he wants to kill demons. In fact, the protagonist is the biggest demon. A person who harms and kills his own kind is not worthy of accusing monsters of eating people Second The Legend of White Snake is written according to the original plot, and there is no point of interest. This is a kind of laziness, using other people's plots to complete your own novel Third Every world steals the origin of the world, so that immortals and demons have no conditions for cultivation, and mortals have no chance to pursue immortality. They flatter themselves that the mortal world will thank him for his deeds. This is a big mistake. If mortals know that such an old demon has destroyed their path to seek enlightenment, they will definitely curse him and die badly. The reason is that a world of immortality has spiritual energy. Mortals have a minimum lifespan of more than a hundred years. Even if there are demons who cause harm to the world, there are also righteous people who kill demons and eliminate demons. Moreover, without immortals and demons, the destructive power of wars, diseases, disasters, and various chaos in the mortal world is no worse than that of immortals and demons. What's more, the mortal world is the lowest world. If you bring disaster to other people's world, how can others thank you Third The most unreasonable thing is that a diamond bracelet can steal the origin of the world. Even the chaos beads can't do it, so this setting is very long-lasting.

Is there something wrong with this book? It was quite interesting at first. Then, the protagonist's qualifications are so rubbish. In a world with spiritual energy, there are inheritances, techniques, and resources (at the beginning, he was stronger than Yue Buqun even without resources). After practicing for more than ten years, he reached the third level of Qi training. After acquiring Baojing, who could travel through the heavens, and gaining the power of God, they practiced to the fifth level. Then Yue Buqun, Feng Qingyang, and Wang Chongyang were able to reach almost the fourth level in a few days. Several of their disciples reached the third level in just a few years. I suspect that in a few years everyone will beat the protagonist.

When I saw Zhang Sanfeng, who was at the seventh level of qi training, at a loss when his disciples questioned the spiritual cultivation method, he came to the chat group for help, he knew there was no need to continue chasing books.

Brother, if you want to kill Li Xiaoyao, just kill Li Xiaoyao. Don't find any reasons or excuses, okay? You taught him the divine method, but he practiced it for ten years with no results. He said he had no talent, then gave up, and then he was killed. In the original TV series, he just watched Jiujianxian practice it for him and he remembered it. From then on, he started to fight monsters and upgraded all the way. In almost a year, he was able to fight against the leader of the Moon Worshiping Cult. Although he had never fought before, the result was You have been practicing your magic for ten years, and you have become lonely. Even if he has been doing nothing, and there is Lin Yueru behind him, they are just two women. Until Ling'er was imprisoned in the Demon Locking Tower, he still penetrated the Demon Locking Tower, right? I also rescued Lin Na. Why did she look like a bird when I arrived at your place? If you really want to join him, wouldn't you just kill him? I look down on you very much, do you know that?

Protagonist's character: timid, cowardly, fearful of life, arrogant, willful, selfish

The protagonist has a golden finger and spends a lot of time in retreat every time he breaks through the cultivation level. It's very unpleasant for people in the chat group who don't have golden fingers to break through the cultivation level casually.

The protagonist's so-called low-key is very pathological and deliberate. The real secret is to merge a drop of water into the sea. The protagonist's behavior can be said to be abnormal and eye-catching.

Haha, give up, I promised that the woman would affect the speed of drawing the sword, but in the end, women came to me one after another. If I don't write about love, love, love, I won't be able to write a book.

It would be a mistake for the protagonist, who has a persecuted and paranoid personality, to join the sect. Joining the sect will have no effect on the protagonist at all. The main character's golden finger is to teach the Dharma. According to the protagonist's urine, the Dharma will not be passed on to the people in his world at all, but will only be passed on to people in other worlds. The protagonist has made no contribution after joining the sect. He practices behind closed doors all day long and doesn't care about anything outside. He might as well dig a hole in the mountains to practice.

In fact, the idea is very good, preaching in every world, and then the protagonist will be the mastermind behind the scenes (no derogatory meaning here), but I don't know why the author always chooses the poisonous points to write, and he will write about the poisonous ones. There are all kinds of pitfalls, and some places are wrong, such as Lin Chaoying. I don't know if this is the author's self-pleasure. It is unnecessary and he always likes to elaborate.