Reshaping the World of Elden's Circle

The Qidian Dharma Ring fanfic seems to be relatively good at the moment. Of course, it has a lot of flaws. For example, the character development of Melina is a bit too much, at least it shouldn't be so talkative. There are still a lot of doubts about the plot of the game. It is recommended that it be like a game. At least there will be less words in the early stages of the book to maintain the mysterious feeling, otherwise the players will hate her like a piece of wood, right? Secondly, the plots of the old thief are relatively obscure. Players use a few clues to piece together the plot from the perspective of bystanders. Several other fan fictions, Pig's Knuckles, are eager to come up and reveal the entire plot to other characters. As a time traveler who knows nothing about this book, Pig's Knuckles also behaves too smart in some places, which leads to contradictions. For example, Jin Zhen easily discovered that there was a problem and killed the bug. He pretended to be dead and easily figured out Millicent's life experience and informed Millicent. This resulted in the plot of the fan fiction being even thinner than the original work. Maybe the author wants to give each character a good ending, and writes the protagonist to take the perfect or even better route as much as possible in "One Week", with less struggle, less wrong paths, and less unsolvable endings. The whole family can be happy but also less soulful. Another question is, I don't know if this book will have multiple female protagonists. The author may want to find a reason for the protagonist to survive and become stronger in this strange world as soon as possible, plus the hidden thread of the three fingers, so he established a relationship with the blind girl early, which is a bit taboo, and it is strange that Melina would come out to call a scumbag. I hope the author can work hard and at least inherit some good things from the original plot, such as the epic feel

In fact, I think Melina is quite pitiful. She has been living for the mission given by her mother all her life. She only cares about the sentient beings in the junction. If she can re-establish order in the junction by sacrificing herself, she will throw herself into the sea of ​​fire without hesitation.

Everyone's support is my motivation! Request/Collect/Comment/Reward/Monthly Ticket. Let me mention here that some readers say that Irena is a flower vase. Let me mention here that she is one of the important main plot characters, so I won't spoil it here.

Boss, Godwin is the eldest brother Mengt. The relationship is a bit misplaced.

I order you to quickly support Teacher Se Lian as the main palace official! 😡

In order to encourage you, I specially made a starting point, because when I was searching for Elden's Ring fanfiction a few days ago, I read several other books, and only the author's writing was good. I'm afraid you won't be able to continue writing, so I will vote for you when I have the votes. It seems that I have made a starting point for free reading 😁 Whether it is a harem or other, the actions of the protagonist and supporting characters must be consistent with logic and character. I think Lani's performance above is very natural, come on💪💪💪

Raya, Lani

It's gone. It's gone. I asked in the group. It's already been cut.

It's a bit early to write now If the perfect details of dlc and updates are not consistent with the novel, it may collapse. It is recommended that the author write more ambiguous words (pretend to be the Riddler), and then pay attention to the character's fan audience. If you offend some fans, you will not only be scolded, but you will also become a niche among the niche. Then the novel was sent.

This is the only fanfic that I can read about Old Headband. Come on, author! Must order when available

This is the only Dharma Ring fanfic I have seen so far that is well written. Come on, hurry up and get more updates.

At least when the Supreme Will summons the faded ones, it invariably gives the blessing of resurrection. The character fragments in the plot look down on the faded ones, but the faded ones are the ones with the most legitimate law enforcement rights in the game. "According to the order of the Emperor (Supreme Will), we will fight against the rebellious ministers and traitors"

In just 5 seconds after meeting Lani, I was taught how to be a good-looking person, not a cookie-cutter person, and write well.

🐶The author will continue to write

I think love is Miss Melina's hand that wants to touch but then takes away

It can be said that Shuangwen, which is covered with a layer of old headband skin, has no soul smell at all. Fill white water in Moutai bottles

Platinum is done

By the way, this time it's an open world, and I hope the author can save some tragic subplots.

The protagonist doesn't know the plot, which is very interesting to watch

This is very well written. It's really pretty.

Come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

This theme is really good, I'll follow it

Looking forward to the plot between Millicent and Valkyrie, I especially like Millicent

It's really well written, keep it up! I will always support the genuine version

You can let Irena learn the inheritance of the blind swordsman. After all, this dear man has sealed the corrupt goddess. It can also help the protagonist. Blind Swordsman Irena