Metropolis: I Can Cut Off Other People's Opportunities

Social common sense is too poor. The author may be a student. Some things cannot be imagined. I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. I hope the author can gain more social experience before writing similar plots. Come on!

Ye Yang, Ye Yang, not positive at all? Written in a childish tone

I feel like I've read this synopsis several times, and the main character's IQ is good enough to be alive. He has a golden finger and still wants to go to work.

Well enough! It's just that this name is really ugly. "Han" has four tones, Liu Ruohan (sweat)

There are a lot of poisonous points. I really laughed when I saw the lottery ticket. I redeemed the 200,000 scratch ticket directly. The boss also said that he lost money, hahahahahaha

Goldfinger is pretty good, I quite like the idea. But the author's writing style may be due to his poor life experience. The dialogues and situations between the various characters all seemed too childish. From renting a house to buying a house, the kind of conversations and interactions everyone has in between seem too childish. Many dialogues can obviously be expressed simply and accurately, but they go back and forth and talk a lot of nonsense. The female secretary clearly knows that the other protagonist already has 2 million, so spending 200,000 yuan to buy a house is nothing. She clearly wants to remind the female secretary of her boyfriend's betrayal, but she starts with the sentence, "Do you have a boyfriend?" Cause misunderstanding. A very good idea, but it's a pity that I don't have the writing skills to express it.

I can still be creative, but the writing style is too young and the business content is too taken for granted. If you don't understand it, just write less. If it doesn't work, you can just check the information online and write it.

2 Million people told their family that they got it from work, but I stopped reading. I don't understand why they dare not say that it was given by others. If I did, it would hurt my self-esteem, or would I die?

You can write this stuff without using your brain.

Why are there just these few comments in a total of more than 800,000 words?

He also said that he would be smarter than you in two lifetimes as a human and as a dog in two lifetimes.

There are so many beauties, and they all have the same mold. Either they have a mine at home, or they start their own business, and they want to make a fortune.

Everyone knows that they will get into a car accident while test driving and still look for a job

Shennong couldn't bear it after reading this book. Goodbye. The subject matter is good and the ideas are wide open. Just don't have any brains when writing a book?

The old Ye family has another talented person. Sixty-seven of the ten novels are either named Ye or Zhou, but there is no other surname?