Liaozhaizi Is Silent

Author, the fighting you wrote is a bit bad. Don't you have some magical powers? Like flying into the sky and escaping from the earth, overwhelming mountains and seas, destroying mountains and rivers with your eyes

I would like to make a suggestion. Since this work is based on history, it keeps making insinuations that true cultivation is rare, and those with high cultivation are even rarer in the world. The story should be more balanced and use more natural disasters and man-made disasters in the style of historical literature. The main reason is that the proportion of the protagonist encountering monsters and monsters is too high. Basically everything has some strange power behind it, which really doesn't seem rare. In addition, I hope that the existence of foreign countries and foreign religions can be reasonably depicted in the later period. Many works involving the background of the Qing people have been written here.

Do you think the protagonist is the one who fantasizes about time travel because his master died and he couldn't bear the pressure, and then he had mental problems?

I feel that this book has been written crookedly in the middle and later stages. It is about cultivating immortals and seeking the path, and not about slaying demons and monsters. It has to be about dynasties fighting for hegemony. To change the world, you need to have territory and power. What is the protagonist doing in the back? He is doing nothing. He wants people but no one, wants land but has no land. He is still fighting for it. What, I'm afraid the author doesn't know how to write it later. When I saw "Want to Fight for Hegemony", I felt something was wrong. I'm afraid there is no outline. In the future, if you see this kind of thing, then suddenly turn around and write about something else, be careful. It's not far from being unfinished.

Subduing demons is a great merit. Expelling the Tartars and restoring China is the right path and great merit. Pig's feet are first used to preach in the mainland and accumulate wealth, and then go to foreign countries to invent and set up companies to accumulate wealth, and then raise the flag to rebel and expel the Tartars. Otherwise, how can the heavenly gate be opened to a place full of smelly smells?

With a bad character, the Taoist doctor has entered the palace, and this one seems to be coming soon? Last comment, delete the book and block it, goodbye

Can you be a better doctor? It's true that the old eunuch is too rotten to continue writing and learn something. An art student will never finish a picture if he gives up sketching when it gets serious. An author will never finish a book if he doesn't tell a story well.

It's poisonous, the female ghost takes over the body, sucks the protagonist dry, and associates with the devil, the protagonist actually has a crush on her

When I read the title, I thought it was a book about the world view of a Chinese studio, but it turned out to be the same as Jiuliu Xianren, a literary practice cultivated in the late Qing Dynasty.

I knew it would collapse later

After reading Chapter 30, I felt comfortable with the plot and the writing rhythm was excellent. However, there were too many typos and incorrect sentences, which greatly affected my reading. I can't remember where it is now. For example, it's similar to: What Xiao Liu didn't expect was that this situation was unimaginable. Xiao Li raised the sharp sword high. Xiao Zhang took out a bunch of keys from his pocket and took them out This kind of sentence appeared many times. I remember that high school Chinese called this kind of bad sentence "mixed", right? After the author finished coding, he took a good look at it. No matter how good his writing was, he couldn't handle so many wrong sentences and typos. No matter how fragrant the rice is when it is stewed, it will hurt your teeth even if you eat it with sand.

Hey, this author, let's talk about it after finishing the book.

Brother, can you please update "Taoist Medicine"? It hasn't been updated for a few days. I'm going to hit someone

The old book was updated, and I thought this one would be updated too, but it ended up being finished! ! !

Why is such a good novel no longer available😭

I really want the author to write a detailed cultivation system and world view setting. The traditional Taoist cultivation method is really imaginative In contrast, the popular fantasy immortality novels are basically RPG upgrades and game-changing skins.

I will never read this author's book again

😅 The first book I ordered after I entered the trap, and I just sent it like this?

Did you send this book as soon as you kept it? 🤔

I asked why there are no more chapters. When I looked at it, I found that it was completely finished. I will read your new book "I am a Dog" again.

Why did the author change so many vests?

It turns out the book is finished? It was cut too fast.

Dixian just wants to farm, Dixian flow, farming flow

Today, I'm going to make a scene (ꐦ°᷄д°᷅) marked as finished~(TロT)σDon't leave after school!

This book has been cut and the author's new book will be on the shelves soon😭😭😭

Well written, could it be cut?

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