The First Immortal in All Worlds

I'm speechless. Does the protagonist know that he is being hunted, is he not just on a spring outing, and is he still in the mood to drink and talk nonsense with others? It can only be said that the body is extremely talented, but the brain is not very good.

I think the first immortal should be: before I came, the world was helpless, but after I left, it was endlessly prosperous. Thousands of years from now, I will be history; ten thousand years from now, I will be myth. This is the number one immortal in my heart. The seeker is alone and needs no bonds.

The protagonist is the first to cook fried chicken. Does anyone know the prices? Ancient oil is not cheap! The same goes for salt, plus chili powder or other seasonings. Ancient spices seem to be more expensive than gold! And it's not easy to buy, it's rare and precious! Can the protagonist make money?

It's very strange😳The author is a normal serious novel, but when I read your book review, I thought it was Liu Beiwen! Tsk tsk! Sure enough, there was no road in the book, but the readers built viaducts and dug tunnels!

Chapter 10: Screening readers, old bookworms can withdraw. The coolie at the wharf earns 30 taels of silver a day, and the beggar girl who picks up graves pays 15 taels of silver a month. One tael of silver is equivalent to about 1,100 taels of silver. Tsk tsk.

It is our duty to rebuild the character of Jian'an.

Productivity is not good, where can I get the oil to fry things and sell them? I feel like the author is a junior high school student, and many places have childish ideas.

This timing unit makes my balls ache, even if you are from a Western background. Since the author is using an ancient oriental background, don't use weeks to measure time. In ancient times, time was measured in ten days, one season, and one year. Now, it's like twelve o'clock, one cup of tea, one stick of incense, and one moment. You must be writing a book to make money, so polish the details.

Personally, I feel a little moved by myself. Are you excited about writing this?

I would like to give you a suggestion. If the author doesn't know how to write about trivial matters, you don't need to write them down. For example, if you give your sister-in-law a monthly salary of 15 taels, you can write down the salary, but there is no need to write down the amount.

Alas, the more I write, the less it makes sense. At first I thought it was a good book... Come on! I couldn't stand it any longer and quit.

The protagonist's behavior at the beginning was like seeking death in ancient times. It would be strange for a book like this not to be supervising

Is this a substitution? Why is it not as good as the last one?

This kind of person can survive to the end of the book because the writer forced his life to continue.

Why does ancient culture need group tours? Because if you don't join the group to keep warm, you will die. Otherwise you are still being oppressed. It's too naive to think about getting ahead. In modern times, if you want to get ahead, it is difficult to control the resources in the hands of the powerful. The protagonist is supposed to go hunting in the mountains. Studying medicine is more reliable than doing business. It's good to sell poems and songs for money. There is no difference between making food and doing business without a backer, or seeking death.

A rubbish protagonist, no tight writing style, a fluffy novel, a book destined to be a eunuch

Can it

It's really cool. It's more perfect than Cao Thief.

Chapter 6 starts to be toxic. At first, I want to make money and spend money to buy talents, but later I seem to forget about it. The protagonist is poor in literature and rich in martial arts. It doesn't seem to work for the protagonist. If it doesn't work, just don't write it, okay? Practice for half an hour and you will grow a few centimeters taller, awesome

If someone has a bit of fame, a girl will appear. It's an old routine.

In the later period, I felt like I couldn't do it anymore. It was a little bit low.

I stopped looking after changing the map, and it turned out to be a eunuch.

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You still have to cultivate immortality, and you have too many abilities, with new settings popping up all the time.

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This protagonist has no IQ at all

It is the first time for an author to write a book, so the requirements should not be too high. The first book will have many loopholes and many ill-considered aspects. You can just learn from experience in the future.

How many hundreds of people invested in this book? I don't see anything interesting about it

What others have written about in one stroke has been turned into a novel by you. I came in by name, but the content didn't attract me. I wanted to keep reading to see if it would be attractive, but unfortunately it wasn't my cup of tea.

It's ugly, not as good as the previous one