There's Something Wrong with My Apprentice

Isn't the cultivation of immortality written too lightly? Isn't the purpose of cultivating immortality just to seek immortality, experience all kinds of things in the world, and be free and at ease? The fairy in the article makes me feel like a Buddha,

When will you give me the title of great disciple? Or since it's done, let's do it again with the master? 😜

Come on, I only realized now that the names of Ming Youruo and Yue Youruo have been switched, and now the memory formed by the fingers is marked as Yue Youruo. This shouldn't affect reading, right? If it doesn't affect it, just change it to Yue Youruo.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that there is a big problem with the positioning of this book. I personally think that if it is a fairy tale genre, it must be biased toward a refreshing literary style to attract readers, otherwise it must sell the plot and worldview to attract readers. This book has a low degree of fit between the ordinary daily style and the extraordinary world view. It's not easy to control the plot, and if you don't have enough skills, it's easy to fail. Everyday articles that are not supported by exciting points and a huge plot and worldview are actually the most difficult to write. The appearance of characters, plot interactions, etc. Will affect the readers' senses and subsequent reading. New writers really don't recommend this kind of bland writing style. There are too few authors who are at the peak of their career in the online literary world.

Character drawing of Gu Qinghan, the human form is described according to this picture, the picture is for reference only, the Internet picture has been invaded/deleted

Daily Guide found this book, and I thought it was very well written. I saw that there were few comments in the comment area. Don't all of you Yanzu be diving?

The writing is flowing, and the narrative is a bit confusing. You can't understand what the author wants to express at a glance. The writing is still not solid enough. After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I still don't understand what kind of story I want to tell. It's easy to get bored.

The moon is like a figure, the human form is described according to this figure, the picture is for reference only, the Internet picture has been invaded/deleted

Yun Muling's character picture, the human form is described according to this picture, the picture is for reference only, the Internet picture has been invaded/deleted

After reading about ten chapters, the plot is actually pretty good, but to be honest, the writing style is a bit poor. I suggest the author practice the details. Basically in every chapter, I can find several places where the logic is illogical and the description is confusing.

Yunshan Snow figure picture, the humanoid depiction is described according to this picture, the picture is for reference only, the Internet picture has been infringed/deleted

Yun Muling's character picture, the human form is described according to this picture, the picture is for reference only, the Internet picture has been invaded/deleted Just look at the picture, it is used to increase the imagination of the face

I have only read Chapter 30. Although it is too early to comment and I don't know what will happen later, for now, this cultivating immortality feels like Buddhism to me.

It has nothing to do with the wind and the moon, it is not the snow moon.

Ling Lingruo character picture, the picture is for reference only, the online picture has been invaded/deleted

The situation is a bit complicated...

Gu Qinghan version 2.0 Character picture, the picture is for reference only, the Internet picture has been invaded/deleted

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

My suggestions will be completed after writing 1 million words, paving the way for the next book.

Although it was a little dull in the early stage, it felt much more exciting after the Fairyland chapter. Come on, author