Drinking Wine by the East Hedge at Dusk

I think the author's storyline is great, but the writing style needs more careful consideration. For example, using too much modern internet slang in a historical romance greatly affects the overall atmosphere. A clean and self-controlled writing style will definitely improve the style and quality of the work. Keep it up!

It's just a few minor rules; compared to the police training the female lead received in her previous life, it should be a piece of cake. It can't even compare to university students' military training.

The romantic subplot between Chen and Xu didn't need to be written in such detail; I didn't want to read it at all, and it took so much space.

A high-quality article; the author's writing skills are excellent. Looking forward to more installments that maintain this level of quality.

Keep it up, author! Great writing! *Muah* That's all, that's all again! Update soon, I don't want to read enough!

The writing is fluent, and the use of filler words is quite good. Although you can tell that filler words are used, the story doesn't feel drawn out. It's worth waiting for more episodes to air and is recommended.

I've read through this book twice now, and it describes a smooth-sailing work and life. While there are no thrilling or exciting moments, the middle-class lifestyle with its aspirations is truly enviable!

It seems the old lady did it; her son was switched? But perhaps she was deceived, and the son is still her own.

It started off well, but then it started to fall apart; the female lead's presence was too weak.

The writing is good and logical, but unfortunately there aren't enough words; I didn't get to read it all.