Dongli Drinks Wine After Dusk

I think the author's storyline is great, but the writing language should be considered more carefully. For example, too much modern Internet language is used when writing ancient Chinese, which greatly affects the overall atmosphere. A clean and self-controlled speech style will definitely improve the style and quality of the work. Come on

It's just a little rule. Compared to the police training the heroine received in her previous life, it should be trivial. It can't even compare to the military training of college students.

The writing is fluent and the level of water characters is quite good. You can see the water characters but the story is not draggy. It is worth enriching and recommended.

Come on, the writing is good, okay, it's gone, it's gone again, please update it quickly, it's not enough to read,

Excellent article, the author has a great background, I look forward to the follow-up as always

There's no need to write down the emotional line between Chen and Xu in such detail. I don't want to read it at all, and it took so much space.

It seems that the old lady did it. Her son was replaced? But maybe she was deceived and her son was still her biological son.

I read this book twice in succession, describing my work and life that can lead to peace of mind. Although there is no thrilling process, the pursuit of middle-class life is very enviable!

It was good at first, but then it started to fall apart. The heroine's presence was too weak.

The writing is good and logical, but the word count is too short and I didn't read enough.

The article is good, but it's a bit short and I didn't find it enjoyable to read. Looking forward to the next one.