Take a Magical Space with You

After reading Chapter 17, can I ask the author how old the protagonist was before time travel? Two loaches who knew the secrets of space were actually released! If someone says they swore an oath, do you believe it? And how do you, a novice, know that swearing is useful in this world? Where is the brain?

I just don't drink the spring water, I just don't enter the space, I just don't use the golden fingers, alas, I just play.

The protagonist doesn't drink at all from the magical spring. It's unreasonable to stay here to raise loaches. It would be like living a second life in vain.

If you don't have intelligence, just let them go, but if you have intelligence, how dare you let them go? In the world of cultivating immortals, how many methods are there? When was someone encountered and kidnapped, this loach would not say anything to save his life? No vow, no matter how binding, can be compared to immediate death. And selling eggs? Are you so short of money that you risk your life for money? Are you and your fourth uncle just as strong as you? Dare you sell alien eggs on the street? Do you think others are stupid or your life is too long? If you sell all the warriors for two days, all the aristocratic families will take you back and torture you? Do you dare to show off with a little bit of strength? What use does making this little money do to you? It's enough to improve your family's life by catching a few fish and turning them into exotic animals to sell. Can you make more money to improve your strength? Just raise what you need and eat it directly. Do you have to come out to seek death? An adult soul? Isn't this just a time-traveling fool? Don't understand common sense? It doesn't matter how smart the protagonist is, at least his IQ is the same as that of a normal person, right?

What the author of this book has written is broken. First of all, you have space. This is your biggest secret, so let the loach let it out. Secondly, the author's space is used for what purpose. It has the function of accelerating time. If he does not farm and practice well, the purpose is not written out, or he is unable to write it down, making the space function almost useless. I'm saying that the author describes so many characters, and the ending is often useless, so why are you writing about him? It's useless to be a tool. The characters are not explored enough and are completely streamlined.

If you like a single heroine or no heroine, don't force it🌝

The two loaches were conscious and yet they were released. They were not afraid of exposing their golden fingers. They were so generous.

The corpse sealed the city and ran away, knowing that it was dangerous, and the whole family didn't have much strength. Why not strengthen the black dog and the big rooster first? Putting your family's life on someone else? Don't talk about secrets or not. The secret is more important than the life of the family.

The Dragon Palace dungeon is fine, but the problem is that if you have this gold finger, you don't farm and you come to join the army and level up. What's the point? There are only two loaches that transform into dragons in the space, and there's nothing else. Tea leaves can open your mind, and eggs can drive away evil spirits. Dahei just leaves the house alone and comes to join the army.

When I saw 168, I was ready to leave. It was really poisonous and I was frustrated all the way. It's not a cool article at all, it's abusive.

In order to keep the protagonist in the first place, he simply forgot that he had a golden finger, right? 😒

The protagonist has semen in his brain and can't walk when he sees a woman. It's really poisonous.

It's been more than thirty chapters, what is the protagonist doing? Playing with loaches, growing wild vegetables, catching bees, raising chickens, selling eggs, moving, and messing around with all kinds of people! The description of the cultivation is just a horse stance and a visualization chart, but there is no way to say how the cultivation is going! Author, even if you want to write daily articles, you must have a main line and some highlights, right? What's the point of keeping your running accounts? The author should not say anything like "I am foreshadowing this". The foreshadowing will hide the readers and write it for themselves! I came in to take a look because the introduction was quite attractive, but here's the result!

I don't quite understand why the protagonist is placed in the first level. After practicing one kind of skill, can't he practice others? Do you have to have the Dragon-Tiger Golden Body Art? In an environment full of powerful people, a land of opportunities, instead of seizing the opportunity, you just wander around? Do you know that you are the protagonist and cannot die?

The writing is good and can be read without thinking. The loach mutates too quickly. . There simply wasn't enough time. The ratio between space time and external time is a bit small. Sleep is generally 8 hours, 8 hours is 480 minutes. 480 minutes is equivalent to half an hour in space before you wake up. Disappearing in the house for half an hour without fear of someone breaking into the house? And he is very urgent in doing things, not very meticulous. The crime of having a jade is unexpectedly unknown.

After reading more than 50 chapters, your name is Niu Sheng, which sounds better than Niu Xiaosheng. Then your fourth uncle's family insists on keeping diaphragms, which is disgusting. Isn't it interesting? The protagonist always says that his aunt is good-looking and so on. If you want to write about the emperor's uncle, don't write it here. You won't be able to write much, and it's still annoying.

The writing is very good, but it's not the plot I want to watch. Isn't the portable space supposed to be a story where you spend most of your time farming, cultivating alchemists, building up your power, and killing your enemies? You pig's feet are always running around and being fucked by others. It's so depressing.

After reading Chapter 156, I felt aggrieved throughout the whole process. I really couldn't bear to see the Zhou family. How dare a military commander dare to disobey the angel? ? ? It's just a short time, don't you feel disgusted? What does the captain do for food? The first level of officialdom can only be used to crush people to death when the villain crushes the protagonist.

After reading them all, keep writing. The development of the protagonist's space beads is too slow. There is no advantage of the protagonist at all. And this mess of blood moon is so disgusting. It almost kills the human race. The monsters have been upgraded several levels at once. If you continue to write like this, everyone will run away.

I was confused after reading Chapter 100! What a mess!

The protagonist in dozens of photos has yet to break through to the first level. How exciting is this? Obviously the plug-in is described as very powerful, very awesome, it can speed up time, mutate animals and plants, and even awaken blood. This is equivalent to mass-producing natural and earthly treasures, without using any of them, just playing and wandering around, and you are still a child. If the author is just for fun, then continue to play, and no one can control you. If the author wants to make money, then I wish you to stay at this level for the rest of your life, and make money like this in the future, and never improve.

According to this logic, pig's feet are no different from traitors like Wang Jingwei. After the blood moon came out, the human race has been being slaughtered. I'm still thinking that after the Demon Queen takes power, she will set aside a place for you to keep the human race in captivity. It's disgusting.

The plot of this book is very confusing. Everything happens suddenly without any reason. It feels like something is happening all the time. In these events, the protagonist has no idea or goal and just goes with the flow. Then the combat power is very vague. Fighting must be the core in fantasy novels, but the combat power here is very vague. Why do other authors always talk about the strength of how many kilograms, how many tigers, how many oxen, how many horses, etc. The power of the tripod, and then what realms have what characteristics, just to give readers a clear idea of why the protagonist can fight, why he dares to fight, why he has fought, and why he has not been able to fight. Here it is, fought, fought, and never fought. It is very confusing and tiring to watch. It is inexplicable that the protagonist has fought, and it is inexplicable that he cannot defeat, and the protagonist has no advantages in the same realm. Anyway, to be honest, the writing is very poor.

The author has a bit of a strange plot, and I wouldn't be surprised if there is an ntr plot later.

Don't want to complain, it's a mess

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What are the chapters written after Chapter 222? You like to engage in gangs, eradicate the roots, and kill people all over the house. Hundreds or thousands of people were massacred by you in various ways just because two people offended you. .