Return to Dream Zhuxian

This beginning is hard to describe in one sentence. There are too few stories about Zhu Xian. I hope the author will polish the first few chapters. Asking the protagonist which peak to go to, it has already been chosen for him. It is too deliberate to suggest going to the ancestral hall at this time, and the protagonist has just climbed the mountain. You should know the Ancestral Hall Becoming a disciple of Wan Jianyi is a good choice. In fact, you can consider that no one wants the protagonist. Daoxuan felt compassion and took the initiative to find a disciple for Wan Jianyi Don't underestimate the first few chapters. Most people quit in the first few chapters.

The protagonist's character should be well shaped. I feel that the protagonist's IQ is not high, he has snooped for information several times, and his words are full of loopholes. There are also typos and grammatical errors, but the new author is still very supportive and has been collected!

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