Fantasy: I Became the Empress's Traveling Spirit Beast

Very good work, but too many typos. Hope to improve

Get rid of the label of being a single heroine. The plot of your book is a harem. Do you know why it's a bit jerky? It's because of the plot of your harem genre, but it is forced to be written without emotion. Just follow the plot, and don't end up learning nothing in Handan.

After a brief look at the setting, it was too messy. I wrote whatever I thought of. Everyone has read more than 20 chapters of the companion spirit beasts, and they are waiting for each other and the princess one by one. The monetary system is chaotic, the martial arts skills are thousands of spirit stones, and there are thousands of other messy things. I didn't have enough money at the beginning, but then I forced myself to create some martial arts skills. I arranged some money for the princess, the tool man, to buy them. Many things were written without explaining them clearly. I also gave the tool man a whole system to buy things for the protagonist. The writing was messy and could not be read without thinking. There were too many problems.

Picking your feet, inconsistent, withdrawn

Forget it if the empress is reborn, there are still plug-ins

This is my first time publishing a book at Qidian. Please give me your support!

The word poison is extremely poisonous. It still has multiple female protagonists, and the label is still single female protagonist. It deceives readers and the content is deceptive. It is a waste of good ideas.

The author also has monkey in his name😁😁

Is it reasonable for your companion spirit beast to be so much higher than its master? I've never heard of such a contract.

The main character is a monkey? It's very good, you don't need to transform, you can directly talk to the heroine...

What a mess this realm is, one moment is the Spirit King, the other is the Fusion Spirit

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's very well written, why are there so few people?

Just like the Lu Bu I just read, it is the best novel I have read on Qidian😍😍

I went and watched half of it. My head was buzzing. It was so difficult.

Isn't this what frogs are supposed to do?

Hurry up and write so slowly, there won't be enough to read.

It doesn't make sense, the details of the plot are unreasonable, and it's poisonous.

The system can also have conversations and chats, it's so poisonous

... Side by side - Hou? 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

It's so beautiful. I've never read such a beautiful book in my life.