I, Who Was Always Trying to Get Things Done, Actually Became a Model of Cultivating Immortals.

Well, let me tell you my opinion. This book gives me the feeling that it is suitable for relaxation, relatively leisurely, mainly funny and a little pretentious13. It's not a big problem. I've read so many and the one I don't think is very good is Blood Alchemy. First of all, the disadvantages of this secret method are huge. The description at the beginning seems to be mainly about breaking through the realm, but compared to other methods, it has a great impact on itself and requires too many resources. The subsequent description of this secret method focuses on refining weapons. The refined flying swords have bonuses, and that's it. In my opinion, there is no need to invest so much in such a secret method where the investment and reward are completely disproportionate. Although it is said that there will be a higher level later (generally the settings will definitely be very boring in the later stages), but from the perspective of the protagonist, he has no idea what the subsequent rewards will be, which seems a bit stupid. Another point is the issue of combat power and demons, in other words, the background setting. If you want to change to another book, it will definitely be a big problem. But after all, the subject matter of this book is similar to that of a light novel, so there is no need to be so rigorous. Specifically regarding swordsmanship, the threshold for meaning is too low. Even if there is unity and Mingdao later on, because the threshold is too low and the protagonist improves too quickly, it will not be easy to write later. On the other hand, the protagonist is now the top scorer in the national college entrance examination, and his strength is the best among his peers. After entering college, it will be difficult to write. You can't be almost invincible before, and then one after another talented people who are no weaker than the protagonist will pop up. Now that I have entered college, writing about college overlaps with the previous high school, which makes it difficult to write subsequent plots. Now that the protagonist has only just established his foundation, his swordsmanship is about to touch the Ming Dao. The contrast is a bit big. The current setting of the demon clan feels a bit too arbitrary. From the current point of view, it seems that the purpose of the demons in destroying the cultivation civilization is to prevent themselves from ascending and not to allow others to ascend? Or is it to plunder spiritual energy? Moreover, the demon clan follows the technological trend. Once it involves some deep-level aspects, if it is not written, it will appear that the setting is insufficient, and if it is written, it will be full of loopholes. So I feel that the author's outline is not very clear, and there is no idea about the subsequent plot. You can probably see a little bit of it in the recent chapters. The battle between the protagonist and the kendo prodigy is one of the few highlights. The protagonist also responded with all his strength, and the chapter just ended here, but then it was passed in one stroke. To be honest, it felt anticlimactic. The battle scenes are not described enough. The subsequent plot felt like it was overdone, and it can be seen that the author wanted to explain some background, but maybe his logic was not rigorous enough from the beginning. In short, the writing is too scattered, and it is difficult to understand what I want to explain. I originally planned to raise books, but I was afraid of dying. When I saw the highlight of the protagonist, I thought the rhythm was on the right track, and then slowly revealed the world view. Unexpectedly, it fell apart later. Maybe it's because of poor grades, maybe it's because the author can't balance work and writing a book, or maybe it's all the above reasons combined, but this book is cut short. I personally feel that it is a bit of a pity. After all, I personally think it is quite interesting, but that's it. See you again when we are destined. (I haven't read the last few chapters, but only glanced at them. The writing during this period was really too scattered and I couldn't read them, so I may not be clear about the author's additions to the setting.)

The previous data was very bleak, and it was originally going to be released naked. After the smart push, there is a slight improvement. The editor thinks that this frog can be used for first aid, so he made a recommendation 😠 Come over the weekend, let's try some poison. This article is very easy, and I don't even know what fragmentation is 😃. It's good to come in every day and have some fun. After it's on the shelf, click on the automatic subscription and you can keep the books as you like 😌 I'll bear with you ❤️ Gua Oh and bosses, if you give a reward and don't give a review, I can only lick it at the end of the volume or in the acceptance speech Today, book friend Yi Feng Yiyi rewarded a four-digit number 😠 Today's chapter says, fortunately, I retracted my tongue in time.

Blindly guessing the demon clan is the ultimate form of technological society. Classes have been completely solidified, and oligopoly may have produced the finalists, this witch. These warriors are probably educated to be soldier ants from birth. In the society of demons, who does what and what they eat? Spouses and everything else are all well arranged.

The original name of the book: "Everyone is cultivating immortality, and the inner volume maniac is actually a salted fish" (😑When the results were reviewed, both " inner volume" and " salted fish" were said to be sensitive words, so I was killed) The style of this book is light and funny, light novel type, suitable for reading🙆

Fishing (seduce lsp)

Jiang Xinyue's plot is so disgusting that I deleted it three times after reading it. When I met her male protagonist, she started to speak pornographically as if she was mentally retarded. Jiang is also mentally retarded because the dark protagonist who worked tirelessly in a competition had no strength and had to go through the back door. She couldn't see the difference. She ran abroad alone for some reason. No one would think she was cute, right? The male protagonist was talking in a pornographic tone, but he didn't feel sorry that there was something wrong with him, and he was just teasing the children? Can you take the main line? I feel aggrieved to be surrounded by a mentally retarded girl every day, and I still feel aggrieved by trying to die. This girl has so many scenes, there won't be any disgusting plot about rejoicing with enemies in the future. Unless this girl is caught and killed by the demon cultivator, so that the hero is determined to pursue the investigation, otherwise I really can't stand it. If you have seen the plot, tell me about it.

The subject matter is good, but the author turned it into a romance novel. Why don't you go write urban novels instead of cultivating immortals?

It is recommended to delete the heroine and end the emotional drama as soon as possible. It is too discouraging to quit, or to have a vigorous love affair. Or stop it immediately. It's so disgusting. What's the difference between him and a scumbag? Hanging the heroine?

I started not to understand when I stopped cultivating. Is cultivating an immortal just for yourself, and is it enough for the time being? Not long after being beaten by Ouyang Xuan, something happened to Pigfoot's parents, so there was no sense of crisis? A bit anti-intellectual

Shouldn't the place where the old liar first appeared should be revised? Although the author later patched it up, saying that he hasn't deceived anyone yet, but the protagonist doesn't know! ! ! The reader reads this: The protagonist uses most of his net worth to fund a person who just wanted to defraud him of his money. This is a stupid and unfair act. This is definitely a big poisonous point.

Write less about emotions, or follow the normal process of getting to know each other, fall in love, and get married. Because the author obviously didn't express it well, he deliberately used a chapter to create conflicts. The author wanted to show the protagonist's true love for the heroine, so that she could not abide by the rules, but it was obviously not written well, and even the conversational pretense with a single in the game later was too redundant. The description of the scenes is not very good, and describing the inner monologue is boring. The interesting setting around Goldfinger is the only highlight, and it is also the motivation to keep watching from the beginning. Later on, it gradually got sidetracked. When it came to the flying sword competition, most people who were interested in the flying sword competition probably gave up. The protagonist's tone is obviously winning at the beginning, but later on he tries to work hard and keeps asking for trouble. He took a few first-level exams and wrote two conflicts. The author is obviously not good at conflicts and simply didn't write them at all later. It also seemed redundant. If the ability to achieve a cool point is not exposed, it is better not to write it. In fact, it is very easy to write. The details should be written in more depth, instead of being the same thing. In the first year of high school, you jumped to the third year of high school. It didn't take long for you to realize what you had realized before building the foundation on the ninth level. What else can you write after jumping so fast?

It was well written at first, and I like the subject matter but the inexplicable addition of a female protagonist didn't make it look good. The heroine was added for the plot or for the word count It didn't feel like it was forced to be written together and I couldn't stand it anymore.

-.- This book probably didn't have an outline, otherwise it wouldn't have resulted in the main plot being basically absent in the first 20 chapters, including character conflicts, accidents, the best way to use the golden finger, and plot branches. These are basically written in a scattered way, which makes people uncomfortable to read. They just write wherever they think. I will give you the basic outline of the entire online writing routine, take a look. Main plot: high school training - university training - the arrival of the demons - the plight of the human race - the protagonist's expedition - the bloody battle between humans and demons - the victory of the human race - the new crisis - StarCraft The branch plot: the protagonist's life experience - the blood feud between his parents - establishing power - fighting against the evil forces of the human race - fighting against the traitors and dignitaries of the human race - becoming a high-level official - becoming the master of the planet Events Protagonist Goldfinger - Unexpected event to send equipment - Campus training - Campus conflicts - External schools come to exchange costumes - Human race evil forces plan - Whole city crisis - Commendation for meritorious service - The college entrance examination is coming and get the first summer vacation training - University entrance costume - Emotions Both parents are dead - the love of the neighbor's sister - the little fan girl who met and got entangled by accident - the parents' death is suspicious - the crisis at the neighbor's sister's house - solving the crisis - Chapter 1, the protagonist appears Chapter 2, Goldfinger appears Chapter 3, Goldfinger is awesome Chapter 4, an unexpected incident occurs, the murderer , monsters, anything is fine Chapter 5, accidental crisis Chapter 6, solving the accident, winning the magical costume Chapter 7, the big boss's attention Chapter 8, my chance encounter with the big boss Chapter 9, the big boss's shock Chapter 10, the story that my neighbor sister and I have to tell

Chapters 60-61, stupid as hell, written in a mess, the character is ruined, and I'm trying to persuade you to quit. Say goodbye. You're in love before you even fall in love. Forget it, so you can take care of yourself.

If the protagonist has been pursuing the development of the second grade cultivation model of immortality, this book should be able to become a god. It's a pity that he collapsed after participating in the sword racing competition. There is no need for so many emotional scenes. High school role model. A model for college after completing the college entrance examination. Then when entering the battlefield, it's great to show off all the way. I could write about some competition or something, but it's a little delayed.

The heroine He Qiu is an eyesore! Is this a romance novel? Why are they all about the protagonist falling in love?

Vomiting blood, I found the eunuch after all bookings were made 😆

Ah, it's a eunuch who came in? ! This is forcing me to work hard and study hard, right?

The author is a eunuch! Or he is a eunuch! He is a eunuch! Eunuch! Prison! It's gone! ! As a subscriber, I am like a fool My mood and behavior are - If you don't love me, don't hurt me! I finally trusted the author, but he failed me so completely! Wow, I cried. I feel so angry and deceived by authors everywhere. Can this world get better? When will we readers stand up!

1. The writing style is a bit immature (dialogue between relevant characters and how things are handled) 2. It lacks a main line. I write wherever I think of it. It is recommended to look at your own outline 3. It is too stiff, and the description of the third person next to it is even mentioned in one stroke 4. It does not break chapters. In fact, the quality of broken chapters is very "motivating" readers to follow up 5. This book can still be read, but it requires a certain amount of advertising and operation. Good luck to the author.

The creativity is very good, but the protagonist has no special characteristics of his own. That is, anyone with this plug-in can do it to this level or even better. There is no irreplaceability of the protagonist at all. Moreover, he is proficient in everything but cannot surpass his peers. Even if it is an ordinary person, it is equivalent to eleven people practicing, but for the protagonist, there are only ten

You have finished telling all the stories at such a fast pace. Are you ready to cut it? The plot feels okay, but as you push forward, it feels like running away with a bucket. What are you doing?

What did you say? You promised not to enter the palace, can poor grades cure your laziness? 😆

C. Goodbye. I don't want to read anymore. Excuse me. Farewell.

Sure enough, the book is finished! He also told me that it would take at least a month to finish writing. . .

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It's hard to say, but the pressure in reality is indeed great. If you are not a full-time author, you should focus on your life. I hope Guagua will write a new book when he has time.

There has been no system for a long time, and Blood Alchemy feels like this

Oh, why can't I open the book?

I've been learning about it for a long time, and I just saw the part about it being put on the shelf. It is said that the protagonist's first and second years of high school are all majoring in majors. I'm a little confused when reading the article. I always feel that every semester they major in one thing. For example, in the first year of high school, in the second year of high school, they study Fulu, and in the third year of high school, they study another major. I'm a little confused. For example, I was very good at martial arts in the first year of high school. In the second year of high school, don't I have to learn some liberal arts such as talismans? Wouldn't this slow down my original progress in martial arts? So I want to ask, it is said that I am very good at a certain item recently. I don't need to learn other things in the next semester, so I can specialize in what I am good at.