I Build a City in Another World

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Little princess

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is young and the protagonist is very silly. Hey, I want to read this type of book, but I always have a dilemma about subject matter and writing. Come on, the author is making great progress in his writing!

In fact, this book is not too bad to read, but there are problems with the treatment of the indigenous people, which makes it easy to watch. Author, you have to understand that the protagonist is a savior, not a philanthropist. The purpose of saving the indigenous people is for labor (even these labor forces are not necessary). So, don't turn these low-value indigenous people into nurturing uncles.

Will you add elements such as soldiers or the army in the future? Now these enlightenments are all made by the wife. You can't leave everything to your wife, right?

I really like this kind of novels. The aborigines can use them. Also, the rate of eunuchs in this kind of novels is very high. Come on.

It's a very imaginative book, and the writing is pretty good. I haven't found any flaws at the 50th chapter. I just hope that the author can not disappoint in the setting and storyline, then this book will be a hit! 11 Votes support every day, author, come on 🤝🤝

It's completely a self-pleasure article. It's normal that no one will read it.

Come on, come on (づ ●─● )づ

Brother, I think you haven't finished fighting zombies in the early stage. Will it be very messy if a bunch of evolved people suddenly come in? Moreover, with the presence of evolvers, it will become a technological system against a cultivation system. To be honest, several authors have written this way before, but all of them were rejected without exception, because most readers cannot accept it. In particular, many readers who are die-hard fans of Red Alert will feel that the system of Red Alert has been tarnished. I think you'd better weigh it carefully... After all, it's hard to say which of the two systems is stronger and which is weaker, and how to balance each other is also difficult. I hope you can control it 😥😥

The subject matter is good, but the main protagonist seems a bit honest and lacks the awareness to be the master

Why does it seem that the humanized Apocalypse is not as good as the original tank, a bit useless, can the humanized body be summoned? Tank Girl drives a tank

Real ink marks, a lot of verbosity

After reading nine chapters, the protagonist's IQ is very low. The protagonist has too many problems and seems to have insufficient IQ.

Colorful heart but no color courage, boring

In the "War Game", the protagonist still lacks his own personal weapons. Although there are many "machine girls" or "tactical dolls" with various enlightenments, which are all suitable for elite combat, the basic combat units are still not enough, and the defense is sufficient and the offensive capabilities are insufficient. A large number of combat equipment is unavailable, and the survivors are temporarily untrustworthy. Without the "consumable" of "infantry", it would be too wasteful of resources to clear the field and rebuild in subsequent battles.

Is your main base occupied by others? I came to live in the base just after it was built. There is nothing to say. Directly let people from your main base. I can't accept it. You remove all defenses. Others will no longer recognize your main base. The aborigines don't know it. What about the other chosen ones? You do not undo main base defenses and infrastructure. Then just leave your belongings there for others to play with. Go camping by yourself?

This book is sure to be a hit (it doesn't cost money after all)

A heavy machine gun can easily penetrate a 30-70 cm sandbag. The heavy machine gun the author writes about is like a toy, and it has more than 300 molecular bombs.

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I would like to give you some advice. People with low-level weapons can sublimate by devouring high-level weapons of the same type. Alternatively, people with full favorability can improve their strength by devouring weapons of the same level and type, with a chance of sublimation.

Is the protagonist 1.8 Meters tall or 1.7 Meters tall?

The tank has three drivers, the commander, the gunner and the driver