Island Survival

I am just one word poisonous! ! ! ! ! !

I actually like the sandbox survival game system but saw Xiu Xian. . Instantly mmp, it's normal for Chinese people to like the element of cultivating immortals. . . However, it feels weird to have an immortal cultivator in a sandbox game. With this sandbox game system, it can basically survive the early and late stages and even dig through the earth. There is no need to have an immortal cultivator.

I originally wanted to give it a thumbs up, but the author of the book review seems to be very active, so it can be seen that he is not a seasoned veteran, but a newcomer. It's not easy for a newbie, and some flaws are inevitable, as long as you don't make them again in the future. I am also a street writer. I have changed my waistcoat several times and still get sprayed all over, so I will just give you a few small comments. First of all, the transition from start to finish is too abrupt, coming suddenly without any warning, and is too stiff. For example, after the female protagonist appears, the description of the male protagonist's performance and the female protagonist's performance are normal, but why do so many readers complain about it. The summary is that there is not enough foreshadowing, in other words, there are too few water words. Before the heroine appears, there is no description of the male protagonist's tendency towards women. In addition, the description at the beginning is mediocre if not smooth sailing. Without a trace of conflict, there will naturally be no mundane fireworks. In other words, it is not grounded enough and has no human touch. Naturally, your readership has been screened before the heroine appears, and many of the readers left behind are the kind of readers who are quiet and leisurely in the midst of the turmoil. In other words, they are the sultry readers. These readers like to read ambiguous, seeming, and nonexistent, real gentlemen with a bit of coquettishness. As soon as your heroine appears, the male protagonist immediately becomes emboldened and can't move. It instantly gives this kind of readers a disgusting feeling of eating flies. To put it bluntly, it is vulgar, not tactful enough or not coquettish enough. Therefore, it naturally disgusts a group of people, and this group of people is key among your readers. As for the second turning point I saw, the scene where the robber appears was still too abrupt and blunt. Originally, it would be okay if all your readers were left with was the boring kind. Because although these people have boring personalities, they are calm and composed. Naturally, if you continue to chase them, you will see the fun points later, so your grades will not be too bad. But your down-to-earth attitude in the front disgusted these boring people, and they ran away. However, it also attracted a group of viewers who like to read straightforward articles, so that no one read the content that requires people to be patient. People who read cool articles are not here to be angry. Naturally, it is the face you mentioned, and you are so disgusted that you directly sprayed it. Therefore, this is the biggest miscalculation of your book. In the front, I can't hold myself back because of the sound insulation, but in the back, I can't hold myself back and I'm pissed off by you. Why did you write these pictures? The cool articles are not straightforward enough, and the farming articles are not boring enough. If you think about it from my perspective, it's just because you have reached a bottleneck and can't continue writing without some conflicts. But if you don't write about such an abrupt turning point, I think you are a newbie and have been criticized by some veteran writers who are second-rate than me. The routine is very bloody and the turning point is too abrupt. This is a brief summary. If you think my words are too unpleasant, just come back and block me and delete the comment🙂

Ever since Su Su appeared, there has been something wrong with the protagonist's brain. It is not recommended to fall into this trap.

After reading about the heroine's release, many people were poisoned by their desire to be free and could not accept this. I can't accept it either. Originally, this obedience was because one person could not take care of too much and wanted to have a subordinate to help the protagonist develop. But after discovering all kinds of mentally retarded sweet dogs, I can still accept them because they are too lonely. But what I can't accept is that I don't know much about the heroine's character when I first came here. Various things are given away for free, just explore the map to understand it, it is quite courageous and prone to violence. This kind of character is not afraid of him seizing power in turn, which is a plus. Also, the protagonist worked hard to complete achievement tasks and only earned a few hundred achievement points. He didn't even have complete trust, but he agreed to give her freedom just because of the heroine, regardless of the consequences. According to normal people's approach, one should be a servant of others or a master. If you were a normal person, you wouldn't think that your life would depend on someone else's thoughts. I don't peel the pig's feet, they are so black. But as the saying goes, you must not have the intention to guard against others, and you must not have the intention to harm others. But you should also take precautions. If you are a student, for example, you can develop this island with me. The main thing is that if you show enough trust, I will definitely give you a free body when the time comes. This way is easier to say. Just like drawing a big pie, you first want him to recognize you, obey your command, and develop well, which is Xiaodao. Otherwise, maybe you are a person of absolute ability, so you can hold him down without fear of her betrayal, or there is something wrong with seizing power. It is hard to say whether you can fight him or not. The system has prompted you, but it is still too vicious to be such a licker.

I won't talk about pirates who abuse their masters. After all, this is not a game where the protagonist is alone. The real world may indeed develop like this. But! Your follower system is too useless. Co-authoring is basically not mandatory. Like the traitor, I thought about it and the protagonist had no choice but to kill him, and he could still fight back! Even if you are a woman, there are a lot of girls nowadays who don't care about sleeping with each other, so they can still ignore the protagonist. Is this a follower or a boss? Then let's talk about the traitor. Did you, the author, use the trick of subduing intelligence? You are a follower. Even if you are a slave to a pirate, I am still afraid that you are a spy. How dare you offend your master? What are the benefits of this operation? I thought about it and decided that the only advantage was that the protagonist would not dare to kill him. What kind of brain circuit would he have to become a traitor? I'll just look at the author's actions in the next two chapters. If the traitor can't do better than Su Su, then give up as soon as possible, because it means that the author only wants female followers, and all the men are trying to kill them. The most disgusting thing is to build a memorial arch for a cousin!

In order to increase everyone's sense of participation, 🤭🤭, we are now opening this collection post for supporting players. Due to the particularity of this article, all supporting characters may survive for a long time and be upgraded to supporting roles. Everyone is welcome to use your imagination. Requirements: Character's name, gender, personality. Character identity (player, soldier, hero, freeman, pirate, etc.) Character strength, skills and all related matters. If you are interested, you can also design a unique line. If you have the chance, you may be able to say it. Finally, I invite everyone to come and sit in the group. The number is in the introduction.

If you're not good at writing emotional scenes, don't write them. It's okay at first, but then it becomes a bit uncomfortable when the woman comes out. Just keep the original style.

I beg you all to favor me.

Thanks: Boss, everything unknown is burned to ashes, for not letting me spend a New Year's Day in embarrassment, thank you!

It's on the shelves today, it's the first time for a newbie. In the previous November, I received support from many book friends. Of course, there were also many who were unhappy, but I won't mention them here. Thank you To_the distance Playful little eyes Peng Tianpeng With your support, I will definitely continue writing, thank you

Too little😆

The beginning was okay, but after the heroine was introduced, the male protagonist began to kneel down and use all kinds of imbecile language and actions. It was simply poisonous.

Aren't you a follower? Why are you licking me so hard as if you have a mother?

The island part in the front was good, and Susu was also okay. When I got to the two followers, the pirate part, I gave up.

The protagonist is mentally retarded +1. It is recommended to recharge the IQ. I am about to be persuaded to quit.

The first few pictures were good, but since I created a follower, I have become a dog-licker. It's disgusting.

The author has great writing skills, but why does he have to write the protagonist as an intellectually imbecile who wants to use poison to dissuade everyone?

The first part was fine and interesting, but after Susu was introduced, I felt that the level of the whole book had dropped. . No matter how much you were embarrassed before, now you are just everywhere, giving a bad face on other people's islands?

It feels very poisonous. First of all, the female protagonist is antagonizing the male protagonist, but it is a trivial matter that is not important, so it can be treated as daily life. The second point is that the male protagonist is too speechless.

After Su Su came out, she was always jumping to watch it.

The name should be changed (The daily life of a diaosi licking a dog in the harem)

It's just the lust of a dying person, just look at it, look at it with pleasure, withdraw if you don't like it, look at me, then withdraw.

The part where the pirates attack is really poisonous, these pirates are too strong

I actually like the character Su Su very much. Don't understand why so many people hate him. Later, the protagonist opened a harem and couldn't stand it anymore.

This book is interesting. Come on, author. Please update more.

It's really sad to see the author rewarding himself😖, na! Don't be too little for your meager efforts⊙∀⊙!

I feel that the context of the article is quite clear. The first volume, a small island in this world, is really just one person and a follower. In the second volume, I feel that the theme is the motivation, preparation and subsequent decisive battle to resist the pirates. I won't talk about the big topic. Let's just talk about why I can persist in chasing updates. I have chased many novels before, but I gave up after chasing them. Of course, there are reasons why the plot does not suit my taste. But more importantly, the plot progress is too slow. Like the author, it's good. Each small goal can be completed in a day or two. Recently, there is a slightly larger plot, and the updates are sufficient, so the results can be seen within a few days. I still hope that the author can stick to this writing method - multiple small plots under one or two major main lines, multiple small plots and a more enjoyable mode. Don't write a plot for too long. You can leave questions, but solve them quickly. A plot like this where jungle monsters attack the city (I feel like the author is still working too hard, and maintaining three updates is considered a better progress) is interesting, but if it really drags on for two weeks, it will really be a failure. After all, the main thing is to take care of people who are catching up or fattening up for less than half a month. Still, he said it was quite enjoyable to watch.

I think it's good to have this follower. The whole novel finally became somewhat popular. Whatever it is. It's better than the main character coming alone.

This book is awesome, it's awesome and has 20,000 followers