One Piece: Bloodhand Marie

I don't know what the author is thinking. The protagonist can be said to be the most important part of the book and the most critical "poetic eye". The Shampoo Land may be meant to reflect the five other navy personnel, but overall, it is a failure. After the protagonist left the navy headquarters, he made a plan and went to the Shampoo Land. Until the war started, he cleared out the trash and gave the Shasha Fruit to a little girl. With more than twenty chapters, the protagonist's story can even be compressed into two chapters. What's even more outrageous is that the two compressed chapters are not interesting. Everyone knows that Xiangbo Land is the paradise of the Celestial Dragons. It is extremely dark. The identity of the protagonist is also mentioned in the previous article. These readers all know it. So what story are told in these twenty chapters? The protagonist is confused because of his identity and explores, what prophecies, dragon emblem Celestial Dragons, information in the tavern, and the fight at the end. What is the significance of these? During this process, the name of the protagonist often does not even appear in two or three chapters. The role of the supporting role is only known by the pirates whose names are unknown and whose abilities cannot be recalled. Is the role of these people too heavy? What did the protagonist do during these processes? Is the story of these twenty chapters interesting? Has the author thought about it... At least, reading these twenty chapters is irritating and depressing for me personally. This is fan fiction, and the protagonist must be the most focused. You must understand what the point of this book is. At least I am following the setting of the protagonist to see the protagonist create a different storm in this familiar world of pirates. In any case, no matter what the novel is, the reader must start from the perspective of the protagonist, and can switch perspectives in a short space of time, but this is to tell a good story, not to create supporting characters. A large number of supporting characters and too frequent perspective switching will only make people bored. Even original group portrait novels are not written in this way. The characters of the group portrait are also constructed through the protagonist. The protagonist is the reader's "sense." The construction of the other supporting characters is similar to meeting a person in reality and understanding him from the perspective of the protagonist. This is what I think of the group portrait construction. Constructed. In my opinion, the author has been too hasty and unclear about the purpose. The biggest benefit of fan fiction to creators is that there are a large number of character templates and settings in the original book, which can be used as blueprints or even directly used to build the protagonist's own story. But no matter what. Anyway, the protagonist is the most important thing. The reason why I said so much is because these twenty chapters were too depressing, which was far inconsistent with my original expectations for this book. In my original opinion, although this book has flaws, it can still become a masterpiece, and it can even become a must-read classic among Pirates fans. But now, judging from the senses of these twenty chapters, I am a little disappointed. Well, please come on. If it affects the author's perception, I can delete it. But no matter what, I still hope that the author will think about it and tell the story in a better way.

Author, you don't want our readers to feel immersed~ I don't think there are many poisonous points in this book, but there are still some, but the flaws are not concealed. The development of the protagonist's strength and psychological well-being is the best I have ever seen in a book. The depiction of combat and the shaping of characters are excellent. The various skills at the beginning are dazzling. Later, the author also changed and was able to listen to the readers' opinions very well. This is a great advantage. The self-created characters are also flesh and blood. The appropriate jokes make people smile, and the lines also make people's blood boil. If the first 20 chapters can only show that this is a good book, then the following chapters make me think this book is a high-quality product. (Only personal opinions, welcome to refute, but don't be angry or weird) But there are some places where I still feel that the sense of substitution is insufficient. No matter what kind of web article it is, a sense of substitution must be considered to some extent, but there are some places that make me feel uncomfortable. For example, when the protagonist is doing push-ups, Garp is asked to sit on him, and he is obviously looking for it casually. A dumbbell or a heavy object can be used instead, and there is also the matter of walking around in the corridor in my underwear. To be honest, I did this when I was in the dormitory, but I would never do it when there was a dormitory aunt, not to mention that the protagonists have all become women. (If it's still the parentheses above, you can refute, but don't get angry and communicate well. If the author doesn't like it, you can delete it) (By the way, some people may think that I have too many words in the "finding fault" part at the end, but this is not the case, because I didn't expand on the parts where I praised, such as Kuhlman, Weiwei, and the psychological development of the protagonist, so it seems that there are too few words. I hope you can understand)

From the author's resume, it seems that the protagonist is a pure war maniac, but when I really looked at it, I found that the protagonist's personality is actually very good. Except for his extreme attitude towards pirates, he is quite attractive in all aspects.

A clearer picture found online (deleted for infringement)

Let me evaluate it a little bit, my feeling, from chapter 1 to chapter 50. 1Admit it! Lsps, you are just here for Tanya's setting 2 The main plot is a bit vague, it feels like writing wherever you go, but it's generally okay 3 The crazy girl is cute, you have to appreciate it, don't worry too much about normalizing the protagonist, but don't be too crazy. For example, Tanya will sometimes release a slightly humane chapter.

After reading the old X, the recommendations became less and less reliable, and there were 80% fewer books to read. But I can find a book worth reading, which can be regarded as rp's return. First of all, this book's portrayal of the aura and evil protagonist is still in place. At least it was enjoyable to read. It's not like those so-called dark genres that spend a long time just torturing the supporting characters and the protagonist to disgust the readers. There are two hidden dangers in the chapters I have read so far. The first is the system's control over the plot. Many current system novels deliberately cover this up with many elements, and many even make the system disappear from the novel as soon as the plot unfolds. Currently Generally speaking, the protagonist needs more reasonable "motivations", that is, the protagonist's personality must be established, rather than just being a good gentleman once the system is dismantled, which will be cool. And this is not simple. It is still not easy for a newcomer with great potential like the author, who needs to figure out the character more.

The main character is single! I will hang out with beautiful girls, but my relationship is with family and affection rather than love! The friendship with men is a comradeship!

Personally, I hate this hodgepodge of abilities.

I finished reading it in one day. It's really good. I haven't encountered such a good article in a long time. The protagonist is not a mindless pervert, but also points out his own flaws and strengths through the narrative. Moreover, it is reasonable to improve oneself. Like the broken stone on top of the war, I feel that this is how normal people think. After all, if there are props that can block pain, I will definitely want to use them. After receiving the broken external props, I also had enough ability and psychological quality to apply my own abilities because of the experience of the past six months. The "justice" of the protagonist is also well described. From the beginning to collect fear points to kill pirates due to system tasks, to later experiencing a series of incidents such as pirates killing people, he became a firm believer that pirates must die. This point reached its climax in the final proposal of the War on Top, which at least made me feel very satisfied and powerful.

The setting is pretty good, but the power system is too complex.