Son of Apocalypse

In addition to a spiritual ability, a self-healing ability, a flying ability, an energy release ability, and an ability to manipulate matter like Apocalypse, plus the protagonist's current abilities, can't they become more perfect and flawless? Why go all the way to the dark side? What is the difference between the protagonist's current ability being directly sunk into the sea or thrown into the universe, and being sealed forever? It's just a suggestion not to spray if you don't like it🤔

It's a mess. The author wanted to write it in a fun and funny way, but the readers were left confused and in a state of self-pleasure. It's quite suitable for self-entertainment. It doesn't matter if you make money, no one is a fool!

I can't quite describe what this protagonist is, is he arrogant and brainless? After killing other tribe leaders and destroying half of the tribe, you tell me that you don't want to harm ordinary people? Are your loved ones who have just died a little happy to see their favorite movie characters? Drinking with Thor at the age of ten? It's completely impossible to tell the protagonist's IQ and code of conduct as a person, just like a naughty kid holding an AK!

It would be much better if I deleted the first chapter

It's too embarrassing, and Ultron is multiverse-level. Can you withstand his fist? Also absorbing gem energy?

It feels like the author has let himself go and is probably ready to abandon the book. Novel must be brought into the novel, you are not human unless the plot is well written or no one will read it at all. I'm curious why you keep strengthening your body? Thor's body is also very strong, but he is very flexible! With such excellent initial abilities, you are no longer prepared to be a human, and become a monster with serious partiality. In this case, the perfect configuration should be: an indestructible body, super recovery, a strong soul or mental power, either the ability to fly or the ability to teleport, and a few elements must be mastered. There must be a power to absorb and transform the core. Hexagons with equilateral sides are really strong. Although they are naive, they really have no sense of aesthetics.

American comics are just beautiful comics, they have to be written in a way that we can't understand.

Cut it off, updating it once a day is just scratching the surface, and the author will not design the plot. Writing it down is just a waste of time and a good "idea"

Chapters 5-60 completely fell apart in the end. Although the excitement was too high in the beginning, at least there was a context, but it was completely gone in the back. It was pure passion and excitement 😅

The most powerful one, I think is Charles' son, who has more than 3,000 abilities. If he could unify his personality, he would probably be invincible

It's already broken. The author's creativity is very good but it's time to cut it after his own universe was destroyed. I can't stand it anymore. Diversified Intelligence is terrible. For example, if your wife is a Phoenix and a Scarlet Witch, you must marry the Phoenix and the Scarlet Witch from 999 parallel universes.

Can you give me some advice on writing? I am a new author and I don't know anything. I really need your advice. Please 🥺

Abandon it, abandon it, slip away

Don't read this book, I'm so disappointed! Nothing to see!

A kilometer of sand cone weighs only a thousand tons, which is too light, right?