Cultivating Immortality, Starting as a Brain Bug

The author is advised to note that he is writing about immortal cultivators, not mortals. For example, can immortal cultivators circulate internally for a period of time, do they need oxygen, and who is the strong guarantor of the author's acquisition of the sect?

It's either human or not, insect or insect, immortal or immortal, demon or demon, all kinds of abruptness, logical jumps, it's okay at the beginning, but it sucks after ten chapters. I sincerely hope that the author will write a good article about insects. I haven't seen a new article about insects in a long time.

Come on, develop towards the Cthulhu Mythos!

If everything requires you, the senior brother, to rush forward, this sect will be really miserable. The worst thing is that you don't have your own cultivation system and can only cross the river by feeling the stones.

In order to limit the protagonist, I wrote the East-Yi Hammer and West-Yi Bangchui. I couldn't stand it until I watched it directly in the later stage. It was so disgusting.

It feels like the author is coming out as he wants, but what about the main plot? Were you eaten? Why is it now a war between the insect swarm and the witch clan? Where did the parasitic cultivator go?

Someone actually did it? I have always had ideas like this before, but my writing skills are not good, my typing is slow and I am too lazy, so I stopped working on it once I started.

There is no big problem, but I feel that the structure is a bit small, and there are books that need to be run. You can place advertisements in other books, etc. You can give a big treasure box for people to collect and pay attention to. The aroma of wine is also afraid of deep alleys. Although yours is not particularly fragrant, you can still read it And your story plot, I personally recommend that you write it more grandly. How do you understand this grandeur? I don't know how to say it. The pattern should be bigger. Yes, it is the pattern. Your pattern is not big enough, and the way you do things feels a bit petty and not upright enough. Bad people can also do things upright. Anyway, you have to stand out and be upright.

The current look and feel is very strange, and the rhythm feels wrong. The plot seems to be getting worse and worse. To put it simply, this book collapsed. What a pity! I don't understand what the protagonist is going to do now, all his actions are inexplicable. There is no clear goal in doing things. The purpose of the novel is also unclear. Using various emergencies to promote the plot will make people feel that the protagonist is passive, has no ideas of his own, and is a pure tool. The more mysterious statement is that you can't get the soul.

Author, don't you know how people who marry into the family are treated? To actually let a native say that the protagonist is getting married Does it mean that immortals don't kill people? |･ω･`)