Elf: I Can Add Points to Skills

A suggestion: Don't rely too much on skill CDs to learn the skills of elves. I bought similar CDs in the book many times. Now that the protagonist's elf has learned it, he can teach it to another elf. It's impossible to learn it by watching the CD video, so your partner can't teach it, right? Or is it deliberately written so illogically to suppress the protagonist?

I have read a lot of elf articles and I have some suggestions. When the protagonist is still relatively weak, try not to write about confronting the mythical beast head-on. It is easy to collapse. Just contact sideways to gain benefits.

Chapter 5: Saving Dr. Odamaki, I don't understand this a bit. Dr. Odamaki and Dr. Oki are from the same issue. Even if Oda Inu is not as strong as Ohgi, he is not that good. A famous research doctor cannot beat three cats. I can see it. You just write it according to the plot of the game. Come on, come on, just complain and write slowly.

Is this the reason why I haven't recommended it? 😓

The invincible herbivorous (no grass-eating) Yu Yueyu likes it very much, but the king of marsh is fed up with the vegetables and superfluous food.

Use money to upgrade, with a multiplier of 10 times. Sooner or later, this elven world will have deflation. Author, what did you think when you set Goldfinger? Money itself has no value. Is there any difference between Goldfinger collecting money and paper? Now that there are not many words, let's think about it.

Another good thing is that in some places, it can be written more formally. The ground attribute is the ground attribute. Don't always write the soil attribute.

Will the protagonist kill Huo Yan? Both sides have been hurt by Huo Yan, so why not take revenge? Besides, the protagonist has completely offended Team Huo Yan, so don't let it go. After all, if you just catch them and lock them up, you still have a chance to escape, so just kill them to save trouble. Of course, it cannot be obvious that you can disguise yourself as a water fleet. It is best for the protagonist to subdue a few poison-type ones. It is easy to kill people with poison, or ghost-type ones will work. It would be best not to even leave the body behind. For example, Arbor monsters, molten beasts, etc. Of course, the super-type must also be subdued. It is so easy to escape and dodge by teleporting. If there were a super-type protagonist, he would not be so seriously injured.

Is the police's IQ not up to par? They knew about the ruins at the beginning, but they did not deploy troops at the ruins. Moreover, the police station was raided. Isn't the idle alliance too useless?

Looking at the latest chapter, if she is not reported to the super organization and gets rid of her, I may not want to read it. Hypnosis trainers are already a bottom line issue for the alliance, just like xidu in reality. Not to mention hypnosis trainers, even civilians are a bottom line issue. Your super organization has hypnotized trainers and civilians, are you planning to rebel? As long as she reports this, someone will definitely investigate, and Tie Ling will testify. Even if she is not killed, it is certain that she will not be able to be a member of the Huoyan Team. Maybe the Huoyan Team will send her out directly. Otherwise, a group of superpowers will monitor her every day. You see, the Huoyan Team will not be able to withstand it.

I feel like the level issue has not been sorted out. An Interpol is only a level 35 delinquent, and a cadre with a billion reward is only level 40. So what are the levels of king and champion? Is it possible that the protagonist will become better than Huo Yan and the handsome guy in just one year? With this level of design, the more I look at it, the more unreasonable it becomes.

Is there a female protagonist? I hope it's Sirona

The author must have read Legendary Trainer. Although that book is a bit unfinished, the Swampert was really successfully created in it. I hope the author can write something new.

I can't understand why there's a Swamp King after the Water Leaping Fish. The Swamp King is just a low-end, bankrupt version of Swampert. What's the use of it?

Why do so many novels like the protagonist to go through n levels of plot? It's too bad that the protagonist always surpasses his own level many times. The level 70 enemies will not kill the protagonist instantly.

Water type, well, I thought of Dragon Slaying Sword and Dragon Slaying Bei, which can go down the route of Kona. A certain dragon type champion is actually a flying type person who has been suppressed. It makes me happy to think about it.

The positioning of an elf is awkward and whether it is strong or not. In addition to skills, it also has characteristics. The author should not forget the importance of characteristics.

Author, you are really awesome. It has been more than 100 chapters and you haven't finished the gym yet. Do you mean this because this novel won't be finished in a few thousand chapters?