The Heavens Begin from Under One Person

Slightly toxic, but it's a brainless and cool article, and the writing style is a bit shabby.

The subject matter is good, the writing style is awesome, farewell!

Personally, I think it is a more pertinent suggestion, start with the Heaven Sword and the Dragon Slaying Knife! That part should be revised. I don't know how other people who have watched Under One Person feel about it. My feeling is that your character of the Heavenly Master is too broken. For the protagonist's scornful character, if you don't slap him to death, it's because the Heavenly Master has a high level of cultivation and can teach him the Golden Light Curse. Look at what the protagonist said in Heavenly Sword. He is completely like a demon! Longhushan is the leader of Taoism, Lao Tianshi is the boss of the righteous way, and who are the people besieging Guangmingding? Apart from anything else, it is impossible for Wudang Emei Lao Tianshi to be ruthless! The Emei Nunnery is full of old women, they belong to the Wudang Taoist sect, and they have a deep relationship with the Tianshi Mansion! Never mind how much love and hate there is! It's more likely to be a fight than a martial arts. It's outrageous for a Celestial Master to beat someone else's disciple. I want to explain here that it simply refers to the age at which the old Celestial Master appeared.

I didn't want to watch it from the beginning, it was too boring. It's a bit nonsensical. Why should I be a grandson first and then a father? I'm really speechless🙄. It's so hard to ask someone to teach you how to kneel down.

The subject matter is good, the writing is rubbish, it's a self-deprecating work, the appraisal is completed

The main character acts like a madman and everyone else is deranged

A brainless and cool article, but too brainless. And the plot is fast. What's more important is that the author is eccentric.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is too poor. The author needs to study hard. Also, there are too many typos. It means the passage of heaven to people, not the passage to heaven. Slipping away

I just want to ask if the male protagonist gets two systems. Do these two systems know each other, or can they not find each other?

Author,,,, I hope you will continue to work hard... See you in the next work... Bye

Brothers, the book has been submitted. Can you give some support to the newcomers?

The first few worlds are not good, but Xian Ni's writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

The character design of the protagonist is too bad, and he is particularly persuaded to quit. He is a typical character who doesn't want to give anything and wants everything. If you don't ask for greatness, at least you have to be tall. What do you want to do with this wretched protagonist?

Too fast for the starting point.

Toxic, Shen Nong has been driven to pieces. The old Heavenly Master has a half-step golden elixir that reaches the top of the sky, but his level may be too high. After all, he is also a protagonist of luck. But no matter what, I will recognize my father at the beginning... No matter how you say it, the Heavenly Master is still a Taoist master. Quan Xing can say a few words next to him. If you survive for a while, what do you, an ordinary person, have to fear! I feel very speechless. After all, a person who cannot go further because of the end of the world must yearn for the heavens. Why should he recognize his father? No matter how I instruct others to work later, I feel inferior! Adjust your emotions and consider plans during meal time, and use emotion and reason. Why can't you bring the Heavenly Master into the group? I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. It's great

A mindless plot written in the guise of one person, but after the first few chapters, the rest of it has something to do with one person? And the subsequent plot is even more mindless. Did you write it for your own enjoyment?

Uchiha Madara's feet, which are more than one meter long, can't even reach Akainu's neck.

Come on, practice your writing more,

It's really funny, Uchiha Madara beat Akainu, I'm speechless