Datang Li Zheng

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The plot doesn't make sense. In the era of cannibalism, the protagonists talk nonsense and ask people to give food to the public. Some funny protagonists don't even have a knife.

It is completely a civilian mentality. Not to mention in ancient times, even now a military region commander also has guards in charge. He didn't take his own life and that of his family seriously at all. He killed so many people and thought that others were kind-hearted. It's been like this since the first one. It's impossible that no one reminded me, but I still went my own way. Proper wisdom. The ancient nobles were definitely much more ruthless than people in our civilized society. Rationally speaking, the protagonist you wrote will not survive more than a month.

I came back here specifically to comment. This novel has a good start, but its shortcomings are even greater. The pace is too fast. Fast pace is a taboo in farming novels. Development needs to be gradual. There is also the part about fighting bandits. Normal people should avoid it if they can. If they can't avoid it, they will find a way to contact the authorities instead of organizing a group of farmers to fight. It's very speechless. I think we can refer to the novel Farmer's Little Lucky Girl, both in terms of rhythm and narrative techniques.

The writing is good, but I can't stand it anymore. In Chapter 37, two people went to face the Tibetan army that massacred more than a hundred people in the village. They could still accept it. In Chapter 38, they asked the protagonist to help build the canal. The protagonist refused and scolded the other party. In the blink of an eye, he gave the blueprint and method of building the canal to the Tibetan army. God's operation. This is more harmful than the protagonist going to help Tubo build the canal. I won't read the rest.

Make up a book that temporarily involves getting a map.

At first glance, the writing seems pretty good, but when I think about it, it's actually a mess.

The transition from farming to fighting directly separates the entire novel. Well-written is good, but both have their own points of view. Starting from delivering grain, we cannot see a return to farming in the short term.

The author writes a book. If you don't like reading it, you can write it yourself or not read it. Why do you keep posting negative and resentful book reviews when you have nothing to do? I always feel that nothing the author writes is in line with your wishes. However, the author's update time does not seem to be accurate. I think the content is quite good.

Name this book whatever you want, don't use the name of the Tang Dynasty

Datang, I know. They were beaten to pieces by the surrounding Tubo, Tuyuhun, Prairie, etc. They were defeated in battles and had to cede territory and pay compensation. Later, the country was destroyed, and things changed after the Song Dynasty, which emphasized military force over literature. Especially during the Northern Song Dynasty, the emperor personally conquered many times and defeated Dali, Xixia, Liao, and Jin one after another, and unified the world with great achievements. At that time, the status of literati was once again lowered. According to unofficial records, even an ordinary soldier dared to laugh at the illusory grand master of the dynasty.

Several hundred people in the village only had more than 500 acres of land, which was not up to par with the average at that time. The average per capita was less than 1 acre. The average at that time was at least 10 acres or more. The author lacked agricultural knowledge.

😅😅😅The horror of the famine years makes you write romantic feelings...

Is this a troubled world or a borderland of chaos? The protagonist is too kind, so it is better to be more decisive in killing. We readers are too constrained in life and need to find a sense of substitution and vent in books 😌😌😌

The author is really awesome, he just wrote it from scratch. What I know so far is that the author has an outline, but I don't know how many manuscripts he has saved. But I still want to say a few words. It's okay for you to write an abstract, but you have to hang up the Tang Dynasty. Well, it feels a bit fragmented. I don't know what you think. So far, this is not a good thing. I wish the author to reach the peak as soon as possible and become famous with one book. Come on!

After reading Chapter 3, this dialogue was not created in the Tang Dynasty and is the same as the dialogue in the rural areas in the 1960s and 1970s.

It's actually quite outrageous. Because people can't stand being hungry. No matter how good the bottom line is for ordinary people. It will also eat people when it is hungry. Follow this tax. Smoking should be banned everywhere.

The writing is pretty good, the plot is reasonable and relaxed, and the character structure is relatively full. If you stick with it, it will at least be a masterpiece.

For the first time, only half of the book is free

It's very good. I've read a lot of novels and feel that I can compare with Tang Qi. The author has worked hard and I haven't seen this kind of novel in a year. The ideas are very smooth, the fighting plot is exciting, and the characters are very vivid. It doesn't feel like some novels just like NPC. Work hard

I understand, the author is updating this fake corpse stream 😭 which is too difficult