Emperor Xuan Zhao

As a historical traveler, I don't know that the king of Wushuang Kingdom is fierce, and he has not even gone to the most basic high school. You don't know the detailed historical trends and details, so how can you ensure that you can do better than Fu Jian and write a shitty novel that can survive for a few episodes?

The protagonist doesn't know Fu Jian, which is a bit too deliberate. It's normal to not know the specific history. If this person hasn't heard of it, it's just too much.

To do big things but cherish one's life, to see small gains and forget one's life is not a hero! The image created by the author at the beginning is a bit too cowardly. If Fu Jian was really that cowardly, would Wang Meng abandon Constant Temperature and follow Fu Jian?

Personal opinion: The author wanted to change Fu Jian's fate, but he also wanted to show the charm of that era. Therefore, he could not improve Fu Jian's abilities too much, so he gave Fu Jian the identity of a time traveler. Showing the slightly different Five Hus and Sixteen Kingdoms is the cause, and the identity of the traveler is the result. But in the eyes of readers, the cause and effect should be that the time traveler is the cause, and the change in fate is the effect. The author just wants to write a slightly different story. The protagonist is aboriginal and a time traveler. It has little impact (in the early stage, the protagonist may look more like a modern person, but later he will become more and more like a normal feudal monarch). The time traveler is just to facilitate the grasp of the protagonist's thoughts. Therefore, in addition to modern people's ideas, the protagonist has no scientific and technological knowledge, no forward-looking vision, and no powerful force. The only difference between him and Fu Jian in history is his concept. This is the fulcrum of the author's intention to leverage history. But readers often care about the author's dispensable setting of time-travelers, because readers regard it as a fundamental factor in changing destiny, which means that the needs of time-travelers are quite different from those of Fu Jian in history. The time traveler does not need to have strong scientific and technological knowledge, but he should have some basic physical and chemical experiments; he does not need to have a strong forward-looking vision, but he should at least know the words "Fu Jian and Fat Water of the Former Qin Dynasty"; as for force, emmm, readers should not care. The author's lower limit is mentioned between the lines. It can be seen that the author's writing is still excellent and has the style of ancient prose. But the author's upper limit should be based on the overall control of the article and its smooth logic. You can't forcefully arrange an unreasonable identity as a time traveler in order to achieve the goal of changing your destiny without changing your destiny too much. How many times can you add someone who only has a character who has traveled through time, but the rest is still exactly the same as Fu Jian? It can round up some points that the audience doesn't understand. The purpose and way of thinking of the author and the reader are different. It is the ability to bridge both sides with logical and self-consistent articles. --"If history repeats itself, then why not read history?"

After reading the above, I can only say that he is just like Shunfeng Yuan Shao, or even worse than Yuan Shao. He cherishes his life when he does big things, and forgets his loyalty when he sees small gains. Although he is from time travel, it is really not reliable to fall in love at first sight, and then he gets angry and does a lot of things for a woman. A scrawled plan to usurp the throne... You have to resist the political marriage. To be honest, the soldiers under your command have not been trained for a few days. Even if you succeed, you will control the central government, but with only three thousand soldiers, your strength is weak, and your reputation has been ruined. In reality, it is basically a part-time job...

Fu Jian in history was too kind

What is the difference between traveling through Fujian and traveling through Dorgon?

That's outrageous! Fu Jian and Wang Meng would know it as long as they went to high school, unless the protagonist is illiterate. In addition, I would like to ask how many boys have not watched Romance of the Three Kingdoms? ? ?

In order not to write a Long Aotian and prevent Wang Meng from becoming a tool man, he forcibly lowered Fu Jian's IQ and wrote a mentally retarded protagonist? To put it bluntly, if you write well, no matter how good the protagonist is, Wang Meng will definitely shine. If the writing is not good, no matter if the protagonist's IQ is forcibly lowered to raise Wang Meng's, then the writing will still be bad.

What if I don't write that. Zhang Wan. It's really good. It basically describes the situation that an ordinary person would have to go through. But as soon as I get in front of this woman, my mother. It's like his mother is possessed by an evil spirit. A different person than before. A woman I have never met. It's good to be motivated by sex. It's love at first sight. His mother blocked the knife for him. You said no normal person would have such faith. Things that obviously don't need to be written down. Rather than write. And it's not well written. It was obvious that he was terribly afraid of death. But in order to highlight it, I just wrote that I am good at blocking the knife. As long as they are normal people. When he saw the knife, he never said not to hide. It was really good, but I had to write this heroine. I said before that it was for the dog's life or something. And now as soon as the heroine comes out, ah, I am so brave. Haha, I am a wanderer. Some thoughts from my heart. It's not that I hate saying anything about the heroine. That means you have to write if you can't write well. So this is the letter ball.

The main reason is that the protagonist that the author wants to create in the early stage is separated from the protagonist that readers see. The protagonist the author wants to create: After the test of blood and fire, from cowardice to strength, he continues to grow in one conflict and experience after another. The protagonist that readers see: can compete with Emperor Hui of Jin.

The author has been emphasizing not to write about Long Aotian, but in fact this is a Long Aotian novel. Writing a talented and decisive protagonist is not Long Aotian. You write about a little loser who is indecisive and incompetent, and yet he becomes a beauty in anger. Such a person can gain the loyalty of Wang Meng. Being the emperor is the real Long Aotian.

I can only say two words: "hypocritical", give up, give up

I traveled through time and became Fu Jian 1. The author didn't understand the coolness at all and the protagonist was very naive 2. In the early stage, Wang Meng and others persuaded the protagonist to usurp the throne, but the protagonist refused. He was cowardly at first and later said he wanted to accumulate strength. , But because of a woman, he got so angry that he wanted to rebel. Is the author writing about Wu Sangui? 3. In order not to write about Jackie Chan Aotian forcing himself to suppress the protagonist, the performance in the book is far worse than that of Fu Jian in history. I only read 50 chapters, and I thought Wang Meng was the protagonist, and did not see the role of the protagonist at all. They all need marriage, but not the protagonist. Can the protagonist surpass these few on the way to the emperor? If you like falling in love, you can go to other areas 5. The protagonist doesn't know history, and he doesn't show wisdom that is different from the ancients, so why should he be set as a time traveler? 6. But it's not impossible to read, it's just a rat droppings in the pot and it's very big. The book wasteland is still worth reading.

Forget it if you don't know Fu Jian and Wang Meng, the protagonist still doesn't know Xie An? No history classes in junior high school? Even if there is no history class, there is no Chinese class? There is no part in the junior high school Chinese language text about Shi Shuo Xin Yu: Xie Daoyun is not as good as catkins blowing in the wind? Your teacher doesn't introduce the authors of Shishuoxinyu in class, or the characters who appear in the text? Is the protagonist still a college student with this level of knowledge?

I feel that the Fu Jian written by the author does not have the same personality charm as the original version. He is prone to arrogance and anger. I don't know why people follow him.

Anyone who knows a little bit about the history of the Northern and Southern Dynasties will know about Murong Chui, and anyone who has read novels about the Northern and Southern Dynasties will know that the protagonist knows Fu Jianque but not Wang Meng. The author may not want the protagonist to appear to be very familiar with history, but there is no need to deliberately set the protagonist up to look like a history novice.

Author... What you wrote is not as good as Fu Jian in history... What is the significance of time travel?

For a female prisoner who wanted to die, she gave up eight hundred war horses and turned against two other people. I wonder if the protagonist still remembers what he wanted to rebel against and how hard he fought for them. While he wanted to show that he was serving the country and the people, he was also worried about a woman who wanted to die. He sent troops to escort her and made all kinds of arrangements. I was speechless. She's just like a love virgin bitch.

Can you please be a little more mature, you are a time traveler?

The writing is getting better and better. The front part is not good, but the back part is really good.

I knew I couldn't continue writing. Why do people like to read historical novels? They just want to change, farm reform, the collision of modern ideas and ancient ideas. Who likes to see the protagonist acting like a pig in heat when he sees a woman? He behaves as if he has never seen a woman before.

The protagonist's victory in the world is nothing more than Meng Qing's taking over the Central Plains and another Shenzhou land sinking.

How did Wang Meng recover? I feel that this is the biggest poisonous point. It can be changed in the early stage, at least to have a shining point (Liu Bei even visited the thatched cottage three times, you Fu Jian just...), Such an inexplicable Long Aotian.

I'm speechless, let alone the writing, the plot is understandable from the beginning, I just traveled through time! Later in the plot, when the girl appears, it's like eating shit. She's pretentious, she's attracted by sex, she's romantic, she's doing all kinds of things, it's hilarious, or it's just a one-shot, it's disgusting, no matter what the plot is, it's disgusting anyway, so give up!

Why does it have to travel through time? If you don't travel through time, you can't publish it. Isn't the normal "Five Hus and Sixteen Kingdoms" bad?

I want to know if the author is Han Chinese, or if there are few Han changes. There is no other meaning, I just want to know. Can the author answer this?

After writing the talisman after death, I can no longer stand it. It is extremely poisonous.

What should I say about this book? I just want to be a fan of the Time Traveler brand, but I also feel that I can do it and want to write my own style. In the end, everyone understands that the key point is that readers who like historical texts understand the history to some extent, but you are still innocent? It would be better if you don't carry it with you through time travel and be reborn. Wouldn't it be better if you want to become an amnesiac time traveler?

The overall strength of the three kingdoms of Jin, Yan, and Qin was Qin's last, so Qin took advantage of the fact that both Jin and Yan were defeated and took the opportunity to annex Yan. In order to appease people's hearts, the concessions and pardons made by the Queen of Hebei and Henan were understandable. After all, they later relied on these powers to surrender. After paying for Yizhou, Bashu and Xiangyang and other places, as long as Qin can firmly control Guanzhong and the states of Luoyang, Nanyang, Xiangyang and Bashu, that will be the situation of the late Sui, Li, Tang and Northern Zhou Dynasties, firmly occupying the first and invincible position, and Hebei and Henan will slowly be digested remotely.