Yushou: You Don't Understand the Importance of Appearance

This woman has no meaning. It would be better not to write about it. It smells like shit.

Guys, keep your claws open. Every day the data hardly changes. It feels like I am writing a standalone game. I'm not asking for votes or rewards. I just hope that everyone can take the risk to let me know that someone is watching. Finally, I would like to ask you to read it. Regardless of whether you can meet the recommended standards, you should always give yourself a thought. Grateful!

Emmm, let's be honest, it's not very good, or it's quite ordinary. Up to the plot of "Information of Death", there are several problems, mainly in terms of writing and plot. The writing style is indeed average, at a mid-to-lower level. There are typos in some places, and the expressions of many sentences are not appropriate. The words do not express the meaning, the sentences are unclear, and there are many grammatical errors. This aspect is a basic problem. There are many problems. I have selected some to comment on, so I will not go into them one by one. I hope the author will work hard to improve. There are currently two problems with the plot. First, the supporting characters, passers-by, and villains all like to question the protagonist as if they have been possessed by a poison. The positive characters will roll their eyes to show that they do not believe that the protagonist is so awesome. After listening to the protagonist's self-statement, they all think it is bragging, and then go in one ear and out the other without hearing anything (there are two of them so far), while the negative characters like to ridicule and belittle like crazy (the newcomers in the Second Omen). This kind of treatment can be said to be quite routine. I think some book friends think that this is the reason for reducing wisdom. The second is the plot where the news of the death was announced. To be honest, it was quite outrageous. I don't know how old the author is, whether he has ever seen a white-haired person giving a black-haired person a gift, or whether he has ever tried to assume the perspective of the deceased's parents. "My" child disappeared. Suddenly a young man contacted "me" and said he was my child's friend and knew his whereabouts. Then he came and said that "my" child was dead. How would "I" react? Doubts, excitement, anger, worry, only when everything is recognized clearly and the reality is clearly placed in front of you, will it be the sadness written by the author. Parents will doubt whether the young man is a liar, and will subconsciously refuse to accept the possibility that the child is dead by denying the young man (for example, the mother may angrily insult, saying, "Why did you curse my son to death?"). After accepting the news of the child's death, they will chase the young man and inquire deeply to find out how the child died and why he disappeared. Most importantly, they will want to see the child's body. I originally thought that the family of the deceased knew that the deceased had entered the "space", so they accepted the news of the child's death so easily, listened to the protagonist's narration so "calmly", and never considered seeing the child's body from beginning to end. However, the author wrote that the deceased's sister only understood that the deceased had entered the "space" and failed the challenge and died after listening to the protagonist's hints. This is unreasonable.

Is this how you behave after your brother just died? I'm shocked.

Let me just say one thing, you are exactly the same as the beginning of the book, except that it is a Russian turntable, but everything else about you is the same, it is Chou Ye, and that book also has 4 bullets, which is exactly the same as your hard mode, and what the little boy said is exactly the same, and what the protagonist does is also the same.

Young people are getting weaker and weaker, and can only update once a day.

What we are saying is whether we can put it on the shelves for a period of time before deciding on the eunuch. Who would dare to read the eunuch just after writing 12W? The content is quite good. Isn't that how everyone survives? Who is going to be very popular as soon as he comes on?

To be honest, there is really no need to join the official. The official reason for letting the protagonist join is because there is a shortage of people. It is a bit like being a cannon fodder. After he found out about the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine, he wanted to use the protagonist to get closer to the heroine's guild. The protagonist did not mention any conditions and did not understand it in advance. , I just joined directly. It's better to join the heroine's guild. At least you are one of your own. If you join the official, people may not necessarily help you, but the heroine's guild will definitely help you. Moreover, your writing is too watery, like a running account, and you are so good at that response for no reason.

I just hope it won't be bloody and the protagonist won't get into a fight with the Redbud Union. That would be simply outrageous.

It's a bit annoying to watch. The most annoying thing is that everyone has a secret, and in the end they all misunderstand. It's annoying enough. Isn't there anything that can be discussed openly? Don't do any surprises that are disgusting enough

Boss, please let me know if there is a delay. You make me feel like the book is about to be eunuch