A Finance Rookie with a System

This is the first time I see that the system also has party spirit🤣🤣🤣

Recommendation index: Three and a half stars Reason: The advantages and disadvantages are clear, and the life part is broken. Advantages: niche professional writing, good subject matter. The main line of the career is clear, the protagonist has strong professional skills, and is not a loser or a system-dominated person. Disadvantages: The plot of life is cliche. From the first hundred chapters, it includes but is not limited to the beautiful boss who is the daughter of the director, pretending to be a couple, and classmates who meet in black disguises and get slapped in the face. Suggestion: I personally think that the fun part of professional writing should be concentrated in the professional field, including workplace confrontation, finding loopholes, and giving support or opposition suggestions from a professional level. If the author is confident, he can describe the difficulty in more detail. In terms of life, try to reduce the amount of silly and embarrassing pretense and slaps in the face, and avoid third-party live broadcasts as much as possible. You can consider spreading dog food, or describing travel and food as life plots or transitional plots. Feelings: Judging from the first hundred chapters, maybe the author is trying to have fun in both work and life, but personally I feel that the fun in work is relatively better. As for the fun in life, I'm sorry, but I personally think it is a failure. The cliched and bloody plot made my impression of this book worse. Look at the end of the chapter and the author says that the author should also have noticed this problem and hope for subsequent effects. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. Sorry for any inconvenience.

The professional plot is a bit interesting, but the urban plot is too clichéd, about a beautiful manager, a manager's pursuer, etc.

Advantages: The subject matter is rare. Poisonous points: pretense and slap in the face + opponent's outsmarting + cliché plot + system giving money. If you don't have any books to read, you can just read on.

You are a person with a system. At the beginning, you were busy working for a female manager, buying coffee beans and tea leaves. If you don't join the unit, you will lose your talent. Isn't the reward of a contract building materials system better than the household registration? Even if I give you a Mars account, you won't be able to go there without a spaceship! Before my career has developed, I have to think about all kinds of things when I meet a woman. Whenever a man comes into contact with that woman, the protagonist will just sit there and figure it out for a long time, with a lot of psychological activities, screw you, pull some!

Is there something wrong with this resume? If you go abroad to work, you have no national beliefs.

To be honest, after reading 50 chapters, I felt like it was a professional but approachable novel. Suddenly, a male villain with no brains but a high degree of education in finance in Shanghai appeared. It really affected the reading experience. Maybe I realized it after just one or two chapters. I worked hard and gave Nu the mentally retarded character who appeared for the first time. I tried my best to whiten it, but the emotional line between the two people was too abrupt, and I already felt that something was wrong. People with such a high education background may be scum or bad, but people with a high education background such as finance basically have no brains. He can be bad, or he can be the kind that disgusts you, but there is no way at the moment. The kind of tidying up, at least using your brain to find the weak point, rather than being like a street gangster who wears better clothes and just says bluntly that I want to pursue you. This is the basic rationalization of the plot... It can be said that there are many different meanings. I was jumping to watch it. After all, I was poisoned I can take it. The protagonist memorized the dictionary and found the answer because the company name and personnel were related in the dictionary through the system prompts. I felt that the author would have a better setting later. At least it would look professional when describing it. But in terms of emotions, I would like to change it or delete it when I have time... It is really because of this that it is holding me back.

They all said it looked good, but I couldn't see what was good about it. I couldn't understand it and was confused. Maybe my major was different. I left. Goodbye.

I want to report it. Connect a virtual fantasy system with the great, noble and bright party spirit. At this important moment for the party. It is an insult, belittlement and slander to the party. This wind must not rise.

Americans can come to China to open companies and make money, but Chinese people can't go to the United States to earn dollars? Brainless