The Heavens Begin from Pingshan

The author doesn't want everything to be puppetry. Yue Qiluo practices a self-created side-sect evil method and is good at paper-cutting.

Brother, are these three chapters of yours counted together with the notice?

Personally, I think this is the best version of Mogai. It is both unconventional and fluent. I don't know what those trolls think. It's not Mogai. They say it's a copy of the original text. It's Mogai. It's also said that it's been Mogai. How about you set a standard and which line is passed?

This book is a good source of information both in terms of subject matter and writing style. It is worth reading. It is much better than the various tomb robberies on the streets and the scripts copied by Uncle Jiu. Those scripted protagonists have no sense of existence. Reading those things is better than reading the original work. It is really ridiculous. This book has been voted for recommendation and monthly votes , Rewarded, please add more updates from the author. Don't be afraid of not having money to subscribe, but I still have some suggestions. In fact, it is best to take the plot characters through various worlds. For example, why can't the clone follow along? This makes me very confused. Then there is no need to write about reality. I already know that there are time-travelers. In fact, you can immigrate abroad and develop.

The first volume of "Ghost Blowing the Lantern" ends and returns to the real world. The national team comes to the door and says that everyone can travel through the recovery of spiritual energy. Countless people can go to the same world, but this setting was abandoned in an instant. Too poisonous.

I don't understand why there is a female protagonist. I just want to complain that if you create a female protagonist for all the gods, you will not have the desire to be watched.

A mortal man pointed at the daughter of the most powerful man in the ghost world and yelled that she was awesome. Author, what are you doing? You are crazy

If you want to write about tomb robbing, at least you can't change the character of the original character. Chen Yulou opened a granary to help refugees, and even sacrificed himself to save people in Pingshan. You wrote that he was a sinister villain. How have you changed most people's personalities? The most important thing in a novel is the character creation of the protagonist and supporting characters, followed by the plot. In terms of the plot, robbing tombs that you have changed is not like robbing tombs, and cultivating immortals is not like cultivating immortals!

In my personal opinion, the fandom is not just making it up. A world of tomb robbers has been transformed into a world of cultivating immortals and cultivating Taoism. A large number of secondary settings have been added, such as disciple selection competitions, various cultivation spells and talismans. The more you look at them, the more interesting they become. A Xie Ling who digs and robs tombs is vividly written into a monastic sect, and various intrigues are added.

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The studies are too complex, there are too many women, and the personality is soft-tempered

There are no major poisonous points, but there are constant minor poisonous points. The writing is on the low side, and it can be watched. However, the protagonist is a very selfish villain who feels good about himself. It is really hard to like. The protagonist is not required to do good deeds. At least he must have a clear distinction between grudges and grudges!       ，，，，！

There is a shortage of books. Is there anyone who can exchange book lists?

Let's not talk about the promotion of the protagonist's puppet to the innate Tao body. After all, it is related to the fate of the protagonist. I was really disgusted when I saw the relatives, slaves, pets, and even the female ghosts around the protagonist were all promoted to the innate Tao body... What else can I say when the innate Tao body has become a cabbage? Besides, how can a female ghost also have a Tao body? Wow~

Marrow cleansing point? At the beginning, you arrest a bunch of people and kill them in order to win people's hearts and cultivate cronies? And the character of the protagonist is a pure loser. Brainless article

Forcibly suppressing the protagonist, I don't want to say anything anymore, it's boring

There is a marrow cleansing point that I don't use, eh, because the marrow cleansing point allows me to continuously recover my energy and blood, and my fighting power lasts for a long time and I feel safe. What? If you add breakthrough points to improve your realm, you don't need marrow cleansing points at all to fight enemies that need grinding? I don't care, there is no marrow cleansing point, I don't feel safe. Breakthroughs don't improve my sense of security. About women. I want to sleep as much as I want, I don't have to, I am as beautiful as a fairy, I look at her blankly, there is no desire in my eyes, only admiration, the heroine is curious. Please, take off your pants next time you see me. Don't say that you are not an idiot, but do the things of an idiot.

It is recommended not to write. I have a date with a zombie. To be honest, I have read half of it and I haven't read the other half because the level is too big. Nuwa destroys the world and so on. Damn it, it feels so disgusting. I have read many novels, all of them following the Uncle Nine fandom. I didn't think about reading and suddenly connected, "I have a date with a zombie." As soon as it improved, the author collapsed... Because Jiu Shu and his colleagues all started from Qi Lian Qi Building Foundation Pill, even if they reach the highest level, they will become immortals. This is the highest achievement in the end of the Dharma era. Becoming an immortal suddenly pops up a zombie date, Nuwa comes to destroy the world, you become an immortal, and the writing skills are not good, there are a lot of eunuchs.

The author of Zhu Xian has set too high a level. Shangqing is equal to golden elixir. The author said that Taiqing is equal to immortal. Isn't this funny? You can set the world to a higher level, because there are beast gods and the emperor of the heavenly book in Zhuxian, while Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao is only one volume. The Book of Heaven is just a method of cultivation that Qingyunzi realized. The upper limit is very high, but it is just a superficial understanding of personal understanding. You can only live for a thousand years in the Taiqing realm. You can set it to the realm of Yuanshen or you can say it is to transcend tribulations. Immortals are impossible, and the abilities of beast gods are almost the same.

Name: Zhang Jie Gender: Female Age: 18 Talent: Photographic Memory System: Taiyin Body Treasure: Dunjia Heavenly Book Weapon: Magic Cloud Flag Ling Yun Moves the Moon (Run Blade) Image: A beautiful girl with silver hair and a peace tassel pendant in her ears and wearing a red embroidered pine cheongsam Introduction: Zhang Jiao's descendants experienced hardships as a child and did not believe in anyone practicing the Dunjia Book of Evil Curses and Water and Fire Taoism. They were forced by the male protagonist, and finally worshiped the male protagonist as their teacher and liked the male protagonist to practice again

There is something wrong with the three views of the protagonist. In terms of behavior, the protagonist kills demons, but in his heart he is selfish. He uses the plot to buy and sell people when they are down, but he still gives himself a whole righteous character. People who are not consistent in their "classical articles on cultivating immortality" are not qualified to touch the path of immortality at all. Relying solely on qualifications is a big thief cultivating immortality. With the character of the protagonist, he should be obsessed with it, because he has not cultivated his mind at all. Even when he sees a woman, he says to let nature take its course, but in his heart he really wants to practice cultivation with her. It can only be said that the protagonist kills demons for merit points, which is already inferior. He is just a slave of Goldfinger. When Goldfinger is fully charged, he is nothing more than a blood slave. In the background of classical immortality cultivation, if you don't cultivate your mind, you will never be able to achieve enlightenment and become an immortal in all your lifetimes.

All Tianwen either only focuses on the great road, nothing else is important, and there is no heroine. Either enjoy life, power is only second, have more female protagonists

Why do I feel that this book is a bit confusing and messy, especially after it was put on the shelves, the writing style changed suddenly

There are several levels of cultivation. It is indeed poisonous, more poisonous than a cobra.

Such an awesome plug-in, such a rubbish pig's feet

Summary: The paid content is not as exciting as before it was put on the shelves! It feels like it's not the same author!

Tasteless food, tasteless writing, the first thirty chapters of martial arts competition, hahaha, laughing to death

I don't even know what to write if I can't read it: It's unreasonable for a cultivator to be a poor man to rob tombs: it's better to rob local tyrants and evil gentry than to rob tombs:

This book gives me the feeling that I could write it but I just don't feel the desire to continue.

The writing is decent, but the plot is rubbish, the pig's feet are rubbish, and the most annoying thing is that there is such a thing as a clone again