I Became a Bug in Mystery Revival

The idea is good, but the plot design is very rough, and the psychological shaping of the pig's feet is also very childish.

I took a look at the new plot. Why is it said that the protagonist's ghost realm of stealing and stealing ghosts are balanced with each other? It is better to say: "The ghost realm of stealing ghost realm is revived. Well, it is revived. Qi Meng can use it, but it is the ghost realm of knocking ghost that is revived. It is the responsibility of the knocking ghost. It has nothing to do with Qi Meng who stole the ghost realm. It is not about stealing destiny. !!! And how do I feel, the author, you wrote Yang Jian as a naive person. Although Yang Jian is still a novice, he should be a little wary of everyone. Of course, he should be less cautious about his classmates, but why does it feel like Yang Jian lacks any psychological activity? (┯_┯)

Looking forward to Amon...~?? The number of Qimon has increased

Not to mention other things, just the attitude of the protagonist and the hilarious narration. This is a supernatural novel. Can it be more serious? The atmosphere of terror is gone. Look at when the mysterious recovery was laughing and joking. I thought I had found a fan that I could watch, but this is what happened.

I didn't want to watch it when I saw that the ghost baby could steal the protagonist's supernatural power. Goodbye, this insulting book of Mystic Resurrection and the Lord of Mysteries.

What a mess! I feel that this plot is a mess, either because the details are missing, or an inexplicable plot is added, and it cannot be connected to the main plot.

The writing is very messy, with inexplicable jokes thrown in. It seems like the author is just trying to make fun of himself.

This book is too messy in the early stage, and the golden finger is too complicated. It is better to directly give the protagonist a golden finger, such as a door deep in the consciousness, and then let the protagonist obtain some rituals through contact with the strange. The protagonist sacrifices the strange to gain abilities, or the protagonist controls the ghost and uses some sacrifice rituals to sacrifice other strange to master the controlled strange. Now in the early stage, I don't understand the protagonist's situation at all, and it feels like the protagonist is just a pawn in a conspiracy.

After reading ten chapters, hey, the mysterious resurgence and these weird things are troublesome enough. You still want to create a Gate of Truth, Amon. The idea of ​​​​Cthulhu invasion is very good, but I feel that the author is a little unsure of the current situation. Personally, I feel that Goldfinger is a bit simpler and makes it so fancy. Amon also said hello to the Lord of Ghost Eyes, long time no see, old friend? What? The Lord of Ghost Eyes is also from the past

The plug-in is too big. I originally wanted to watch Pig's Knuckles PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds, but the result is an invincible article. It has no side effects and uses the ghost's ability. I started making ghost paintings at 20 pictures. I think I will be invincible at 100 pictures and then finish it. Otherwise, it will be the Zhutianliu that travels through the next world. Pig's Knuckles is invincible too fast.