Peninsula's Storm Rises Again

I don't know if the author is a newbie or for some reason, but the writing is really a bad reading experience! Halfway through the first chapter, I didn't understand who said which sentence at first glance. I had to read it twice in context to understand it. It was tiring and irritating. You have a picture in your mind when you write, but the reader doesn't! It's impossible to read without major repairs. . .

Write a plot summary and the chapters where female characters appear to make it easier to read.

The author is not clear about the powers of Korean prosecutors and the prosecutorial organizational structure. It makes my head hurt when I read it. What does it mean that the daughter of the legal minister of the Seoul Eastern Prosecutor's Office was killed? Does the district prosecutor's office have a legal department? According to the Korean Prosecutor's Office Act, the District Prosecutor's Office has 11 departments including the Ministry of Public Security, Public Prosecution Department, Foreign Affairs Department, Criminal Department, Juvenile Department, Investigation Department, Special Investigation Department, Financial Investigation Department, Enforcement Department, Drug Organization Crime Investigation Department, and High-Tech Investigation Department. According to the Korean Constitution, prosecutors must apply to the court for search warrants, arrest warrants and other warrants. The information can be found on CNKI and the China Procuratorate Newspaper. It is recommended to check carefully before writing.

Im Yoona

Haha, can't you write a novel after you graduate from elementary school?

Every time I read entertainment articles, especially Korean entertainment, I think of what Korean chaebols, companies, and politicians do to those male and female artists in reality. I can't stand it anymore. How many of the ones who can debut are Bai Lianhua 🙂 You might as well just go to the comprehensive world of Korean movies and TV series and use the roles they play in them

These female protagonists are so pitiful. Real life is governed by the hidden rules of the chaebol. In novels, as long as Korean entertainment has them, there are not a few of them who are willing to take over and wear hats for themselves. 😂

The writing was too jumpy and inconsistent, which made me feel very disconnected. It was neither a regional event nor a timeline event. It was very tiring to read (●—●)

These three heroines are so good-looking👍

Is it just so you can write whatever you want? That way, no one will find fault with reality and find loopholes. However, it doesn't feel that way if it's a stand-alone story. There's no sense of involvement. Many people who read entertainment articles are fans. Well. Come on,

Come on, it's already considered a hit in more Korean entertainment articles. If the wording and sentence making can be polished and better, it should be able to reach a small level In the early stage, love and solving crimes are a bit separated, please don't disrupt your own rhythm, try to make these two lines more harmonious It would be nice if the updates could be more frequent (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

The author is still gasping for breath. Why not use this breathing time to code?

After reading more than 30 chapters, it still feels familiar. Isn't this similar to the setting of the Star Prosecutor book? The FBI even slapped me in the face during that meeting. . .

Erin

Ji Soo

I feel a little dizzy after watching it. Korean entertainment is not easy. I would like to ask if there is any foreshadowing? Why did YoonA fall in love so quickly, friends?

The plot of Chapter 35 looks similar to the plot of Star Prosecutor

Korean sticks are not interesting at all

Don't just play in Korea, you can also play in Japan.

It's so sad. The protagonist's past life with Yoona

Let's discuss how about adding Yuli

It seems to be a pretty good hymn at the moment, with a revenge drama, a prosecutor, and a daily sugar-neutral taste. The possible female protagonists are also very suitable for my beauty control. If you want a good harem, you should get the best ones, and they should all be portrayed with flesh and blood, and the essence should not be too expensive. I hope the author sticks to it. Come on!

It's all just a facade, with meaning 😍