They All Say I Bring My Wife Good Fortune

My assessment is that if you're going to write a harem novel, don't include so many scenes between the female lead and other male characters. In the latest chapter, one female lead is sweating profusely when a bearded man sees her and tells her to stop messing around (the author even mentions her see-through tank top).

Why keep bringing up Xu Xiaoling? It's so unlikable. In the new chapter, the protagonist keeps saying he's busy, yet he still comes over late at night. If the photos are posted online, it'll be ridiculous to blame the protagonist. I've never seen anyone act so arrogantly, even though we're not that close.

The author has a suggestion for you, which I wanted to say in your previous book, "Gas Station," but I kept forgetting: could you please stop using so many English terms while writing? It's very distracting. You're writing a Chinese novel; don't mix Chinese and English. It looks low-class and makes you seem uncultured.

Everything else is fine, except that a hot-blooded young man who just graduated is completely unmoved by a bunch of beautiful women, calmer than an old monk. Is he a eunuch?

Lin Bei couldn't take it anymore. Author, do you even know how to write a harem fantasy? Look at the women who have major contact with the protagonist: one's revealing tank top is exposed, another has a necklace adorned with hers, one is carrying someone on her back, and one is acting in a sex scene. My assessment is: a very realistic entertainment industry, but novels don't need to be this realistic.

What is this writing? I can't even make sense of the title and synopsis.

Isn't this a pretty unfair system? It lets others succeed and then kicks them aside. I feel like there could be a sequel. It starts with divorcing XXX, then slaps his ex-wife in the face.

Why keep writing about Ying'er? If she's leaving the group, she should just leave normally. Instead, she's maliciously smearing others. Isn't that just plain questionable character? I'm not subscribing anymore. Bye!

I initially thought it was well-written, but then it suddenly started helping another manipulative woman. This woman reminds me of Tara's troll; it's absolutely off-putting.

No, what's the point of your system? It's purely for assistance and you don't get any benefit from it. Wouldn't it be better for you to become a teacher at a vocational school like Lanxiang?