Dark Night Games: Starting from the Dissection of Weirdness

The writing is actually quite good, but at first she was a school beauty, and then she became a beauty. I couldn't bear it. Why should I be the most beautiful woman even if I am learning ancient martial arts? The ratio of beauty to ugliness between men and women is too unbalanced. Also, it is said that good male protagonists will be isolated and misunderstood. Is it only for passers-by, and beautiful women are completely immune? So what is the use of writing this setting? It is used to highlight the beauty's good taste, so good that it can break the game puzzle setting?

It's not pretty, I don't know what's not pretty. I've been a bookworm for almost 20 years, and I think it's OK. Everything is logical. I just feel that the protagonist can bring a little emotion, and the female lead can be restrained, and she should be more ruthless.

I would like to apologize to all my readers for the old way of describing characters. 😭 I didn't study the description well when I was writing the article. I'm sorry to all you dads and I'll work hard to correct it.

It's so pretty, I can't stop. 😍😍😍

Well, I feel that the subject matter is good, the writing is very good, and it looks good. I think there are a few points, personal opinions. Don't criticize, 1 is the main plot of the younger sister, I don't think it is necessary, writing it out should increase the number of words, 2 if the senior sister is in danger and the protagonist's life is in danger if he helps him, I don't think he should save him. This plot of saving a girl is a bit cliché.

Helping others when there is no benefit at the beginning is so heartless

Ahem, I took a look at the label, and there is no single heroine or multiple heroines, plus the current performance of the protagonist... It is possible to forcibly create a pure superior-subordinate relationship with the female supporting characters around whom I like, and it is possible to be alone 🙂

If this crazy doctor series can have a female protagonist again, just give up on itヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

The author writes well. After reading the novel for three years, this is the first novel that I have been fascinated by. I hope the author will not stop reading and be unlucky in his later years.

Author——, you have too many wrong words——😡

The writing is very good. I suggest you find some old authors to py it and attract some old people.

If the author had lived ten years ago, he would have become a great writer with this writing style.

What's going on? It's intermittent as soon as it's put on the shelves. The plot is incoherent. 92 Is not 93, and 93 is not 94. What a mental state.

I read the new book Investment Failed. Is this a eunuch?

The theme system and the in-game descriptions are great, except for one thing: the female character is too similar to the Dragon King in the real world.

I like to see the protagonist act cool, but those women really don't need to

This character description looks like something from 2008 😅

😂Although I'm a little embarrassed, this is a group account. Everyone is welcome to join. Just note the first four characters of the book title. Thank you, readers.

Overall, it's okay, but it's awkward at not being able to write about emotions, which makes the plot often stilted. Moreover, the characters have no distinctive features and are rather facialized. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it. If you continue, you can either start the explosive update mode and win by quantity, and some small flaws can be covered up. Or change this kind of plot that doesn't go up or down, and come up with exciting clips.